A not so nice boyfriend

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Luhan is the kind of boyfriend who likes to tease his girlfriend, Jiyeon, 
to the point where he would forget the difference between tease and 
torture.


When Luhan have something in mind to do, he would do it 
no matter what. He can be nice at times but at other times 
one would pray that they've never meet in the first place. Well 
Jiyeon would love him when he’s nice but would try to avoid 
him sometimes. Its impossible though because Luhan 
will find her even if she’s under the carpet just to tease 
her.












It was a night time, the thunders were exploding outside. 
The rain hitting windows, even if the girl shout her lungs 
out in this night, no one can hear her.




Jiyeon was standing in the corner of the room, trembling. 
Her wet hair kept on dripping water . Her nightgown is already 
half wet.


“Come here right now and touch it.” Luhan ordered in his 
serious voice.



The panic start to control her entire body as tears start to build 
up in the corner of her eyes.


“I don’t want to... Its disgusting Luhan, please don’t 
come any closer.”


An evil laugh escaped the boy's dry lips.


“Touch it before I forcefully make you.”


The tears finally fall from her eyes. Theres no way out. Her 
parents aren’t home. Its midnight and they are all alone.


“Luhan, get away from me, don’t take any more step closer 
to me... I hate you.”


“Touch it.”


“No.”


“Why?”


She look down at Luhan’s feet.


“Please... Don’t force me into things i don’t want to... Please 
Luhan... I... I need time...”


“Fine then, you force me to do this with you.”



He dash towards the girl and-

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Foreword








Title: A so not nice boyfriend.



Genre: Fluff, Romance, comedy



Warning: Luhan’s over teaseness. Jiyeon’s 
over sensitiveness.



Length: Threeshot.



-Don’t plagiarize, any similarities are just coincidence. Its 
a pure fiction and nothing in this fic is real. Enjoy. 






Graphic shop credits: Heres To Never Growing Up Graphics



Poster designer: shychen

Review shop credits: ROS'E Review Shop, Rose_17.

Link to the reviewshop.

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My entry for Freedom writing contest.

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/791002/a-freedom-writing-contest-round-2-open-accepting-entries-contest-oneshot-competition-writingcontest-writingcompetiton






A oneshot, it’ll be a little 
different then my other fanfics. 
Its been a while this idea has 
been bothering me and now finally 
i’m writing this. Hope you guys 
enjoy this. 





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aeKimchiz
#1
Chapter 3: OMFG! srsly, Luhan kept on calling Jiyeon by foods hahahhahahXD
This is freakin cuteeeee!!
molmolyeol
#2
Chapter 3: Haha good ending! :3
molmolyeol
#3
Chapter 2: Snuggle snuggle snuggle~~~
molmolyeol
#4
Chapter 1: Awww so cute i feel so much chemistry of this couple in this fic >< pleaseee write a lot of luyeon fics ><
rizkiamut
#5
Chapter 3: LOL for all Jiyeon's petnames from Luhan. From lollipop, cheesecake, to meatball hahaha.
Honestly I am really mad at Luhan. How dare him making Jiyeon shout, cried, and passed out like that. But the end was unpredictable though.
jessi828 #6
Chapter 3: annoyingly sweet....hahaha
problematicjane #7
Cute~ I haven't finished reading it but I'm sleepy. I'll read it tomorrow. I'm on chapter 2. :)
EbonyAngels #8
Chapter 3: Love it. Go Jiyeon, smarty!