Reviewed by Dreams@AFF

Title : Not The Right Cinderella!

Author : Pynkfaery

TITLE (5/5 points)

When I just saw this request for review and saw the title, it somehow gave me a really good feeling that this story would turn out successful. "Not The Right Cinderella!" feels like a sneaky yet funny and romace-twisted fanfiction.    

Poster/Pictures (6/10 points)

I actually liked the poster you made in the foreword by yourself better than the one that is actually displayed as main image because the main image one, the characters and story title totally clash with the background of the poster. If you noticed, the background has some very elegant looking girls oppose to the actual characters are more joyful and fun, not so serious. Plus, the title like I mentioned before's really fun-sounding, continue that style! :)

Foreword/Description (7/15 points)

The description was well-written and certainly wanted me to read further but maybe you could've given a bit more of a trailer in the foreword, that might be even better!

Plot (20/30 points)

 I'd say I saw these kinds of plots before and it's actually a quite popular to use story plot but this story has a bit more attitude to it. It seems like it's unpredictable at times and predictable so overall it's all good. :D

Grammar/Spelling (19.5/20 Points)

So far I only reviewed two chapters of the story and I was only able to find 1 grammar mistake and no spelling mistakes. The word use was also impressive.

Overall Enjoyment (25/25 points)

This story has alot of subscirbers and tell you honestly, I'm not surprised, I'm even going to subscribe. It's a totally worthwhile and interesting story to read and continue reading. It quite a story with its own twist and turns.

pynk : Yay, the reviewer is subscribing XD! And I love the marks ^^.

Total (/100 points) : 82.5

pynk is kinda happy with the marks. :)

Thank you to Dream for reviewing this story. ^-^

So, I am now typing the new chapter.

It will be up really soon, I hope I can post it today :)

Wait for it neh!