Birthdays (memories)

It (does)n’t happen - intermediate -

 

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
The younger jumped his last step off the public bus, quickly catching up with the older as he fixed his backpack straps and weaved through small crowds on the streets.
 
Jinki hummed a little tune, taking in the fresh air through chilly fall weather. It was nice to be outside after hours of class and a tiring bus ride, even if a little cold.
 
Minho, only eleven-years-old and still becoming quite the little 'friend' of Jinki's, bounced on his feet closer to the older, huffing out a clouded breath in the cold air as they walked the rest of the way home from school. Jinki had waited for Minho outside the younger boy's school since it was a Friday so they could hang out with few other kids for outdoor games before dinner and studies. 
 
Jinki still didn’t like to admit a ‘little kid’ was becoming more a friend to him than anyone else. Even at his age he knew without really understanding that he was a lonely child, left to himself often. He had no malice about it, not at this age. It was just a fact of his life with busy parents and being an only child. Why Minho was filling this void, Jinki couldn’t even comprehend at this point in his life.
 
He didn’t need to.
 
“When's your birthday again? Did I ever ask?” Minho glanced curiously at the older boy as they walked much emptier streets now.
 
Jinki wasn't sure if they ever discussed it - was there ever time when with the younger boy anyway? Either way, it would seem they forgot so Jinki answered, “December 14th.” He nodded, giving a small giggle and big smile. His birthday was coming up after all, and he was excited in becoming an older, more experienced teenager – that lonely thing wouldn’t be so bad, now would it?
 
Jinki’s smile quickly fell though as Minho's huge eyes grew almost scarily larger, younger quickly closing any distance between them until he was up in Jinki's face with a serious expression. 
 
“Mine is December 9th..” Minho puffed out in a breath. His face soon turned into a big smile, voice falling out in a loud laugh. “They're so close!”
 
Yeah, Jinki tried to smile because someone else was too close too, and now more than ever he understood why some called the kid ‘big eyes’. He gently pushed on Minho to at least get the younger out of his personal space and continue walking again. “That's neat...” Jinki reached out to fix Minho's heavy jacket while he was still close enough, not wanting the younger to get cold on their walk.
 
Minho hopped around, seeming a little over-gleeful by this birthday fact. “That's so cool~.”
 
Jinki relaxed and smiled, fixing his warm scarf over his school uniform and coat. The weather was only getting colder this time of year, but if there was snow that would be fun. Maybe he could play with Minho in fresh fallen snow. He vaguely wondered what Minho's favorite thing to do in the snow was, then quickly settled with snowball fight, most probably.
 
Minho turned back to Jinki, smile falling slightly. “What are you getting me for my birthday then?”
 
Jinki dropped his face into his hands and laughed. He hoped he wouldn't crash into something, knowing full well of his clumsy tendencies. He kept laughing, still not understanding this blossoming friendship at all.
 
“What..? What?” Minho pouted, slowly following the older home.
 
When Minho asked about Jinki eating supper at his home with his family again, Jinki nearly jumped at the offer. He was left embarrassed by himself, but more than that glad he wasn’t going home to an empty house and lonely dinner.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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FlamingMe
#1
Chapter 62: shrieks. why don't i find this story earlier tbh? whatever. off to the next part! ;^; ❤
bimilline
#2
HEY YOU lol sorry for being y and failing to read and comment lol
myownsaviour #3
Chapter 16: "this isn't one of those stories where it's suddenly okay again because someone says they love you"...bless you ♥
tiap12
#4
Chapter 53: Woo sassy southpaw showing her claws that's right girl/boy
onyuuu #5
COMPLETE? COMPLETE!? AISH I HAVEN'T EVEN READ THE 5TH CHAPTER AUGH I'M SLACKING SO HARD, BUT I'M SO EXCITED TO READ THIS AUGH I H8 LYF WAIT FOR MY COMMENTS, BB, THEY'RE COMMING
cheryllly
#6
Chapter 26: I have to tell you this author-nim, your minho and minseok brotherhood is so damn cuuuteeeeee!!!!!! I love it how you potray minho's cheekiness and how minseok would respond to it. It just makes the story cuter. And then you added jinki to it. It's just *sigh* perfect.
Tisash
#7
Chapter 61: I honestly don't know how to express my love for this story in proper, intelligible words.

Ichijuri1314
#8
Chapter 61: ah~ so perfect. Totally following this story till the very end.
It makes me sad that minho is still cutting himself but I hope someone discovers or he stops in the next one.
The characters and plot have grown and evolved so much,looking forward to see what the next one will bring. Hopefully much much more positive changes
hiddenreligion
#9
Chapter 61: *skips over to the subscribe button for next part* Don't mind if I do~

Aw man, it is sad seeing this part end, but all of your characters have gone so far and changed in so many ways. Again, perfect ending. The fact that Minho is still scarring himself means there will still be plenty changes in the next part, I hope....? Maybe? *holds band aids and ice cram just in case*

Lol, okay that part about "college girls" xD...I can't find the words, but I could see the entire scene really happening and just imagining the look Jinki gave...priceless. I also hope Minseok will have some time in the next part still and not leave for service just yet but I really can't wait to read the rest of this fic. *hugs* Thank you so much for finishing this. :)