It (does)n’t happen - sunder -

Description

- Jinki still wanted to explore uality, figure out who he was, and wasn’t in any official or unofficial relationships to his knowledge. Military service was just around the corner too...

“I met a girl..” Minho couldn’t keep the excite out his voice. 

Jinki and Minho's relationship begins taking new turns, directions separating, maybe forever.

 

It (does)n’t happen - intermediate 2 - (sunder)

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(It does happen)

(It (does)n’t happen - intermediate -)

(It does happen - let go -)

Foreword

 

'IDH2.5' - read much like 'IDH1.5'- to be posted in drabbles and oneshots.

Rated M for the subject matter of ual assault, self-harm, substance abuse and ual scenes. Unbeta'd.

 

 

 

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myownsaviour #1
Bittersweet ending, it's kinda your thing right? ;) I really enjoyed it! Really, this intermediate was precious. I appreciate the way you are handling the story because it is so realistic - and for this reason so heartbreaking. I never related so much to a fic! Bless you. I already commented on gravity because when I was too damn happy. You are a precious (and very talented) writer indeed. I hope you are having a nice summer!^^
FlaMinhoe
#2
Chapter 10: It broke my heart seeing the Minho went into service--early. I got fearful at the thought of how he'd cope with it. The thought of him "being picked at" and/or "reminded of being powerless" makes me feel uneasy. I mean, I feel like he's ready to take on service and would make it through okay, with mishaps here and there, but I just see Minho's masculinity under so much attack. And I keep feeling he's guilty he let service come early without even asking about asking for delay. I mean, I'm sure I'd feel awful my wife would miss me too. But Minho's still pretty young; His emotions would seem more... raw, I think.

When you said Jinki got a boyfriend I was all "IT'S JONGHYUN RIGHT. IT'S ALWAYS JONGHYUN." I can't tell you how pleased I was! I love the way you wrote him. "You got the bill? I'm out of cash." Exactly how I love Jonghyun, good god. I love how Jonghyun just seems to get Jinki out more. Idk, see a new change of scene. And such a cutie, ahh.

I saw the chapter title and I was literally O.O
And to announce the pregnancy in such a /panic/, I was getting anxiety myself. I can't imagine how Minho feels over in service. I'd think more guilt and trying to get himself into thinking he's a father and he has trouble with that. But then that brings up the masculinity thing again. The whole strong-tough-dad thing just makes me think Minho is stuck thinking he needs to be that and makes himself sick over it. Wouldn't that make him more anxious to force himself to be that role and start talking to fathers that are in service and try to copy them. I mean, I know that makes Minho sound like he retracted back into his old days, but I just really do see it.

But Jink taking the role to care for Hyojin, I feel cautious all over. It was so awkward at first. "I brought you some treats.." that's me. That's me so bad. Drop the treats, Jinki. Drop them and run. xD
SHINer #3
I don't know how I wasn't subscribed to this but I got a nice surprise of updates :) I really like this. No matter which way you decide to go. It's hard not to fall for hyojin. But I feel like jinki and minho are soulmates. Excited for the next chapter!
myownsaviour #4
Chapter 8: Always very touching. I need a movie of this series I swear *___*
Ps: and again, Jinki breaks my heart. Bless you.
myownsaviour #5
Chapter 7: I am shaking. Chills! I feel so much for Jinki...Thank you, thank you author-nim! **
iusedto #6
I love your updates. I knew that something like that would happened. No matter how heartbroken Jinki is, their love is such deep as their friends hin strong is. Jinki just Wants minho to be happy. What a twisted fate
Ichijuri1314
#7
Chapter 7: omg, it breaks my heart everytime jinki's p.o.v comes up and damn....she's pregnant? there's no going back now huh. this story is driving me crazy
Tigerinkage
#8
Chapter 7: Damn...this is just heartbreaking...
ayazo13 #9
Chapter 6: Poor Jinx, heartbroken
myownsaviour #10
Chapter 5: Omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg - Okay I totally love you! How is it that you always surprise me? This love story is gonna be the deat of me (as in "mental breakdown during exams season's" not good nope)! So IDH and LG totally broke my heart - they were so intense and touching - but I am fairly certain this one is healing it! I totally love and adore Hyojin, god I wish she were real! She is perfect for Minho, simply perfect as a human being...You know that quote "beautiful people do not just happen" right? It goes something like "the most beautiful people we have known are those who have known defeat, known suffering, known struggle, known loss, and have found their way out of the depths. These persons have an appreciation, a sensitivity, and an understanding of life that fills them with compassion, gentleness, and a deep loving concern". What's the point for this huge quote? The point is: it totally reminds me of Hyojin! She's so special, so kind, I wanna have a friend like her in real life (but I doubt there are many people like her) *w* It's the first time I squeal reading your stories (well what was there to squeal about idh and let go, really - i mean beautiful but heartbreaking)! I literally squealed I swear! Now I don't know how to feel about Jinki's return...I mean, I love it because I really like the character (maybe because I think I am a lot like him - that's why i wanna punch him and hug him all the time) and his povs are always very interesting...He broke my heart in LG you know? He struggled a lot to help Minho and now look what he came back to! Married?? Minho married?? Well I didn't see it coming XD I wish the two couples could live on different parallel universes you know? I really love them both and I can't decide who's best for whom...Did you decide it yet? How is it gonna end?^^ I will have a breakdown when this series ends! I really enjoy your writing and I grew fond of the characters! Thank you for everything <3