Debut

My life as a SM town family member

You rubbed your hands together as you stared at the clock in the pratice room. The rest of your members were doing the same as Eun Mei held her laptop on her lap. Mi Kyong sighed.

"5 more minutes." she said. Hisu Mei nodded. You started to do dancing foot movement in place. Ayako shot up.

"O! That was cool! Do it agian!" She said. You smiled as you did it again but started to glide around the room. Ayako started to follow. She wasn't as clean but she did it. Hisu Mei pouted as she rested her elbows on her knees and placed her hands on her face.

"You two are so cool. I wish I could do that." she sighed.

"I could teach you." you said. Hisu Mei eyes widen as her pout turned into a smile.

"Really?" 

"Me too! Me too!" Mikyong exclaimed running up next to Ayako. Hisu Mei walked next to you. You stepped back.

"Ok, so see how my feet are?" You pointed to your feet. Mi-Mei Looked. "How you do this is moving weight around from your toes and heel." you explained as you moved you feet. Mi-Mei eyes widen in aw. "You try." The two of them looked at each other then their feet. Moving them sloppy. You laughed. "No, no. Like this." you showed again, they tried to copy but failed. Hisu Mei almost fell over. You got on your knees, leaned down and grabbed Misu Mei's ankle. "Your going to hurt yourself. See you move your foot like so." you failed to realize that your in perfect erted picture victim mode. Ayako snuck over to her bag and grabbed her phone. Mi Kyong snickered under her breath. Ayako stood behind you, ready to take a picture.

"Ayako ah." Eun Mei's leader voice boom. You all froze and looked at your leader. Eun Mei pointed her finger down. "Knees." As comanded Ayako dropped to her knees and held her hands up. You turned around. Another victim. The leaders power over everyone started the day after Hius Mei's debut.

Flash Back:

You were messing with Mi Kyong, something that is completely normal, after watching your teaser(That had all of FIRE-5 taking off your masks but not fully showing your faces and blurry dance shots. It was really made cooly). However, she accidently bumped into one of your laps and it fell on Hisu Mei. Who in returned sheriked in fright. Ayako yelled at the both of you. You helped Hisu Mei or corse but Ayako kept scolding, then Mi Kyong yelled back Ayako. Hisu Mei was in shock. You got in the middle trying to calm down the two females but ended up getting you in the heated arugement. With you all yelling at each other Eun Mei came out of her shower annoyed.

"Yah!" she yelled. You all stopped and looked at her. She pointed to the ground. "Knees!" the three out you looked each other.

"Knees?" Ayako replied back confused. Mi Kyong crossed her arms.

"You mean, like puinshment? You've got to be kidding me. If you were older I would. We're the same age." she scolded. You shivered as the look in Eun Mei's eyes got darker. Mi Kyong went from crossed arms to rubbing them. "Did it get cold in here?"

"Knees!" Eun Mei's voice rose and her voice demanding. Every fiber in your being shirvered. The three of you dropped to your knees. Hisu Mei looked surpirsed. Eun Mei then pointed her finger up. "Hands." as comanded your arms rose. Eun Mei clapped her hands together as if she was dusting them off. You sighed, feeling wrong. However, AyaKyong bite their lips.

"To bad my phones in my room." Ayako whispered. Mi Kyong nodded.

"I know, leader rocking that towel."

"Yum." you sighed at their pevertedness. However, you couldn't blame them when you really looked. She was still wet from her shower so her skin was all SHINee. Eun Mei hissed at the.

"(Your name) ah. Your free to get up. You two stay there for a hour."  your leader walked away, to your room. 

END.

You chuckled at the pouting Ayako. Eun Mei looked back at her computer.

"Oh, our video is up." she said. You all shot over by your leader. She clicked on the video.

  The start of the video showed all of your walking toward the camera. You each got a solo shot with your masks. First it showed Eun Mei reaching for her mask then did a shuffle threw all the members in the taking off the mask. First person shown was Mi Kyong. She posed with her mask in her hand, rubbing it under her right eye then the next shot of her had her to the side looking over her shoulder while smiling. Next was Eun Mei. She posed with her mask as she held it sideways by her face and showed her dropping it. Then had her stareing at the camera with a smile. Next was you. You held your mask near your lip and grazed it across it. You smirked at the camera as you turned from it. Ayako came after you.  She held her mask by the string as it went over her wrist down her arm.  She also smiled. Last was Hisu Mei, she had her mask on her forehead and also smiled. Oddly, the smiles weren't cute, nor badass. How odd. You noticed the song that was used during that part was the dance break during shout. Then came the actual music video. Honestly, it came out the way all SM music video's do. Dance sences. Solo scences. Then back to dance. However, it seemed really interesting to watch.  

   When it ended you all stayed slient. Just stareing at the other thumb nails. Hisu Mei gulped.

"No turning back now." she said under her breath. Still no one spoke. You stood from your spot and walked to the center of the room. Your members watched you. That means on Music Bank will be your debut as a group. You stretched.

"Well. Time to pratice." you said walking over to the stereo. You heard your members following your lead. All standing in their rightful place. Eun Mei nodded at you. You pushed play and ran over to your spot. Shout sung therw the speakers. Unlike  other pratice when you all just dance, you sang as well. Your debut stage has to be perfect. You all failed to notice your phones vibrating in your intesnse pratice.

 

"Hey, wake up." You opened your eyes to see Trey. You rubbed your eyes.

"O-oppa?" You yawned sitting up. You saw Eun Mei and your manger were waking the other members. You blinked then looked around. Alseep in the pratice room... again. You stretched.

"Did you all stay here all night?" Trey asked. You nodded in your yawn.

"Yup. We praticed and took a shorrt break that must of turned out to be nap time." You said rubbing the back of your head. Trey scoffed laughed.

"I understand you, but everyone else? Aigo, you youngsters." he said helping you up. You shrugged.

"Gotta pratice."

"Alright girs. Huddle up." your manger called you all. You were the last to get to the huddle.

"First off. Congradulations with your debut. Your Youtube count is already in the 1,000,000. Also, your album is selling well." he said. Mi Kyong, more awake then the rest of you, clapped excitedly. "Yeah, alot of positve feedback as well. Anyway. You'll be praticeing today. However, on such success I feel the need to celerbrate. We'll have breakfest. Oppa will treat." Hisu Mei clapped this time. When it comes to food that girl could eat as much as you, maybe more. Also free food! "And, (Your name) ah, you've been selected to be part of Rookies -13-." you all froze. You looked at your manger oddly.

"Rookies -13-? What's that?" You asked, you turned to Ayako. "Have you heard of it?" she shook her head.

"It's a varity show. Its for the youngest member's of the rookie groups this year. It'll give you a chance to promote us." Eun Mei said in a yawn. You looked at her.

"So its new?" You said. Mi Kyong hugged you.

"Oh lucky! You better do well!" she said. You pulled away.

"Wait, by myself? What about the rest of you?" you frowned. You didn't want to be the only one on T.V. You felt selfish. Ayako patted your head.

"You are the youngest." she said. You frowned.

"Promoto us well, Tae-by ah." Eun Mei said. You pouted. So un cool.

"You'll start filming on Monday and it'll air on Wednesday on KBS." Your manger said. "And the rest of the day will be praticeing. After 4 you'll get a break. We don't want you to end up broken before the big day." you manger folded his hands together. "Ok, i'll take you back to the dorms. You have a hour to get ready. Understand?"

"Yes." You all said. You pouted at the floor. Why must you be on T.V alone?

 

 You sat in the back with Ayako, who was messing with MiKyong who was in the seat infront of her. You stared out the window, watching the snow softly come down. How should you act on the show? Should you be funny? Cool? Cruel? Cute? You sighed, fogging up the window. You felt your bag vibrate. Surprised, you opened up your side pocket to your phone. You eyes widen.

"The hell?" you muttered. Ayako and Mi Kyong gave you a odd look. On your screen you hald 102 missed calls and 54 messages and 25 voicemails. You twitched. When did you get so popular? You opened up you texts messages. Alot were from, surprise surprise, SM sunbaenims. Mostly from ChngKyuTae. All saying the same thing. Congradulations on your debut.  After your 54th message you closed your phone. Really, they had to blow up your phone. Your phone vibrated again. You opened your phone to see a message from Eunhyuk. You open the message and it showed him poesing with Donghae. They had crappy cut off versions of your masks. Eunhyuk was poseing with a green on and Donghae had blue. You chuckled. Dope faces rule the world man, an the masks made it better. Youclosed your phone and smiled. Silly oppas. Then your eyes widen and looked at your phone. Your going to be on a varity show right? Who better to teach you then funny man Eunhyuk?

 

  You locked the door to the bathroom with a arm full of cloths. Ayako and Mikyong can't come in and take werid pictures of you now. You placed your cloths on the couner and wiped the steam of the mirror. Your the youngest so you get to shower last. Good thing your door is in a good aparment place so hot water is always running. You looked in the mirror, your green eyes shining back at you... and bloodshot. You sighed. You would've mistaken as high if no one knew how late you stay up and how much you push yourself. Surprised your not sick yet. You rubbed the back of your head.

"Guess I better calm down." you muttered. You smirked at your reflection. "After the promotions." You stripped your shirt off and unclasped your bra, to notice a bruise under you left . You tilt your head as you moved to get a better look at it. Where did that come from? You stared at it, trying to figure out what could of caused it. You shrugged, you've bumped into so many things, your a clust. You stuck your thumb under the elesatic band  of your dance pants, pulling them down. Another bruise, no two of them. One on your right knee and another on your left thigh. You then noticed a little bruiseing on your left foot. Again, where they came from is a mystery. You started examining your arms. You found a bruise on the apper part of your arm, near your arm pit. "What the ?" You pouted as you moved in the mirror. You found another bruise on your back right next to your left shoulder blade. You huffed. Is Eun Mei beating you in your sleep? You then panicked as your looked near your collor bone, neck, face, behind your ears. Any part that'll be visabal. To hide the other bruises will be simple, but you didn't want a member finding one and freaking out on you. You'll need to cure them soon. You scratched your head and sighed. Might as well take your shower now. You stripped off your underware and stepped into the bliss of warm water.

 

  "What?" Eunhyuk sounded surprised on the phone. You nodded, as if he could see you.

"Please, when it comes to varity shows Oppa is the best." you said, pouting in the phone. Eunhyuk laughed, liking what you said.

"Arasoo, Oppa will help you. What are you doing now?" he asked. You pulled your jacket on.

"Getting ready to go out to eat. Manger Oppa promised to treat us cause of our succesful debut." you said locating your hat.

"Really? Congrats~" Eunhyuk sung in the phone. You smiled. He maybe one of the weekest singers in Suju but it still sounded nice. You found you hat.

"Thank you. Oppa should join us. Please." you said. Eunhyuk cooed.

"Of corse. Oppa will come if you say it like that (Your name) ah." you finally understand why Eunhyuk is concirdered a player. You chuckled.

"Ok, I'll text you where we are eating. Arasoo?"

"Arasoo, see you soon (Your name) ah." right before the click you swore you heard Kyuhyun in the back. You shrugged.

 

  "Oppa!" You called out to him. FIRE-5 was surprised to see Eunhyuk walking over. Your group bowed.

"Hello." they all said. Eunhyuk bowed slightly and sta next to you. Your manger looked at him oddly.

"Hello Hyukjae goon. Nice of you to join us." he said. Eunhyuk smiled.

"Yeah, I'm here to coach (Your name) ah in the art of varity showing."  he said. You nodded.

"Yup, because Oppa good at it and I want to repersent the team well. I'll work hard, promise." You said in all seriousness. MiKyong and Ayako leaned into together and held eachother hands up to their chest.

"So cute." they said in unison.  Hisu Mei added another piece of kimichi in and nodded. Eun Mei nodded.

"Arasoo, now eat. Hyukjae, please, oder anything you like." Your manger smiled at the elder male. Eunhyuk bowed.

"Thank you. I will eat well." he said picking up the menu. You smiled picking up a piece of noodles.

 

 "Try to crack a joke, or fall over sometimes." Eunhyuk explained as he cooled off his soup. You nodded, taking mental notes. Eunhyuk smiled. "And when you laugh try to overexagerate it. Anything really. Use your hands alot." Eunhyuk paused to chew some meat. "Also, say somethings in a seriouse tone and straight voice. But make sure you use it at thr right time." 

"Wow, so much goes into being funny." Mi Kyong said before picking up her drink. Eunhyuk nodded.

"Its a battlefield. If your funny more shows will scout you. More air times means more publicity for you and your group. Then your popularity goes up. Super Junior isn't only loved for our songs you know." Eunhyuk said eating a sppon full of rice. You nodded.

"So be funny." You told yourself. Eunhyuk smiled.

"You'll do fine." he said.

"Yeah, your our mood maker. You always have me laughing." Ayako said picking up a pepper. You nodded.

"Arasoo, I'll work hard." you smiled.

"That's our (Yourname) ah." Mi Kyong leaned over and pinched your cheek. You groaned and slapped her hand away.

"Yah, I'm trying to eat." You tabled laughed. Eunhyuk patted your back.

"Your going to do just fine." he said. You smiled at him.

 

 "Do any of your remeber the dance you learned back in last Dec?" Trey asked. You tilted your head then raised your hand. Trey laughed. "I bet you do. So girls, for your debut stage you'll do that dance on stage, then you'll do Shout. Arasoo?" you all nodded. Trey smiled.

"Ok, I'll re-teach you the dance. Get your bodys moving." Trey said.  Hisu Mei turned to you.

"I know someone who's not going to be resting after 4." you smiled.

"Nope."

"Oh, and I added a new part at the end." Trey said turning to you all. "Seeing how you all will be wearing your masks, at the end you'll take them off." he said. Eun Mei nodded.

"Just dance it, please." MiKyong pleaded, the suspense killing her. Trey laughed 

"Arasoo. Hisu Mei hit play." your chinese beauty hit play and the fimilair song filled your ears. Feet tapping against the floor. Oh, you wanted to dance with him so badly. As soon as it ended you were the first that shot up. Trey laughed. "I can always count on you." 

   

"Time to go girls" Your manger called out to you all in the salon.

"Ok." You all called out heading to the black van. Your members following. To day was your debut stage. You were moving your feet in the car. So much enegery in you ready to exploded. You breathed in and out. Unlike your solo when you were nervouse, you felt super excited. You could wait to get out there and hear the crowd cheer, dance powerful and sing-

"Oh by the way girls, your going to be lipsyning."

-fakely.

"What!?"

The volume insider the car surprised your manger and he accidently made your car sworm then get back in the right lane. Your manger exhailed before looking in the mirror, looking at you all.

"Yah! Don't yell! You almost killed us!" Your manger yelled.

"Lip syncing! Really!?" Mi Kyong exclaimed.

"Why are we lipsyncing?!?" Ayako exclaimed after her. Eun Mei, who was right next to him, glared. Your manger sighed.

"I don't make the rules girls. The higher ups made this call." he said. You all groaned.

"I don't think I can even lipsync. Even when making the video I had to somewhat whisper the lyrics to get the lip working." You whinned in the way back.

"I can't believe we are lipsyncing." Eun Mei groaned. Mood in the car went down hill, and nothing the manger said could bring it up.

 

  Taemin's face brighten when you all walked threw the door, but his smile faded when he noticed the depressed looks on all your faces. Eun Mei noticed them first.

"Hello Sunbaenims." she bowed first. The rest of your followed. SHINee was at a lost.

"Why so sad?" Key asked as he walked closer. You pouted.

"We got horrible news." MI Kyong pouted as well. Taemin made eye contact with you.

"What happen?" he asked. You sighed.

"Manger Oppa told us we had to lipsync." you muttered. SHINee 'O'ed, understanding the feeling.

"Yeah, but you'll be able to focus more on the dance, making it more flashy with out your voices failing." Jonghyun said "That's why they do it I think. Plus, your voices might waver cause of nervousness." You all satred at him.

"Are you retarted?" Key muttered at Jong. "They performed live already. They've been praised by Netizens for their stages. Does it make since that their nervouse? Pabo." Jong put on a sad puppy look. Scolded again.

"Its just to show off the dance. We understand how you feel." Minho smiled. "But hey, perform the best that you can. Arasoo?" you all nodded.

"Arasoo." You pouted, your voice not convincing any of them. Taemin pinched your cheeks.

"Hey, just dance like the power house you are. That'll cover up the lipsyncing. And if your bad the CEO won't make you do it as offten." Taemin smiled warmly at you. He warmly ran his thumb over your cheek in a comfurt manner. "Arasoo?" you nodded.

"Arasoo." Taemin smiled and patted your head.

"That's my girl."

 

  "Omo." You halted, almost running right into Daehyun. Daehyun was surprised as well.

"Oh, hello." he said. You took a step back and bowed.

"Hello." you stood back up. Daehyun smiled.

"It's nice to actually see your face. No more of those glasses and masks huh?" he spoked. You shrugged.

"During our performance we will have them. But not during shout." You said. Daehyun nodded.

"Yeah, gotta keep the flow moving. Enjoyed your album by the way. Really enjoyed Rebellion. You wrote it right?" you eyes widen.

"You bought our album?" You said holding out your finger. Daehyun nodded.

"Sure did. Hey next week I'll bring it so you can sign it. Arasoo?" he asked. You nodded.

"Of corse, if Sunbaenim wants me too." you shyly smiled rubbing your hands together. Daehyun nodded and smiled.

"You can call me Oppa. Its ok." he said. You nodded.

"Ok." you smiled. Daehyun smiled.

"I'll see you later (Your name) ah." he said walking past you. You turned and bowed.

"Later, Oppa." you smiled cutely. Daehyun accidently knocked into a cart full of who knows what before bowing and waveing goodbye.

 

   Your rehersal was done so your just waiting for the actual performance. You all changed into black clothing(Eun:Dress, Hisu: shorts, Kyong: Skirt, Aya:Jump suit, You: Pants and tummy showing) with neon colors of their speific color.. Hisu Mei was muttering something in Chinese as she rocked her feet back in forth. Mi Kyong was expecting herself in the mirror, making sure she looked ok. Ayako and Eun Mei played with their phones. You softly praticed the dance steps.

"Can't believe we have to lipsync." Mi Kyong muttered. You nodded.

"I know, I don't think I even can. I feel like i'm cheating." you said. Eun Mei crossed her legs.

"Won't change anything though. We just got to do it." she said. You  sighed.

"I know."

"Girls get ready, your on in five." The PD person came in. You all got up.

"Lets go." EunMei said leading the way. The performance before you was still going so you had to wait. Eun Mei pulled you all in. "Ok ladies, tonight we are going to amaze Korea, well, as well as we can with lipsyincing. However, that means our dance needs to be super daebak! We are-" You all got excited

"FIRE-5!" You all exclaimed. Eun Mei clapped her hands then fixed her mask

"That's the Fire-5 spirt." she said.

"Fire-5, your on." the Pd person said.

 

  The screams surprised you. Like whoa, way louder then any of the solos. You all bowed.

"Hello, we are Fire-5." the crowd went crazy. Ayako turned to you.

"Good luck." you smiled at her.

"We don't need luck." you  turned back to the crowd, each of you getting into your spots for the dance. The dubstep played and you all went at it. More power then during your pratice room. The crowd screamed espically when you all threw your masks off. You smirked. Oh, you all did not need luck.

 

  "What's that?" Eun Mei asked. You flinched at her touch, knowing that she touched the brusie on your back.

"Uh. Nothing to worry about." You smiled. Ayako looked at it then turned you around.

"(Your name) ah!" she looked worried.

"Look, now is not the right time." you said pulling on your shirt. "We'll disscuss this after Shout ok?" you said. Each of your outfits was the first ones you wore during the making of the MV. Eun Mei looked at you.

"How many are there?" you sighed.

"like.. 2." you lied.

"Lair." Mi Kyong said pointing at you. You sighed.

"After the perfomance." you said running out of the room. The girls followed you, bugging you about the bruises. All thought was pushed aside when you re-enetered the stage. The crowd went crazy again. You each to your spots. Then shout started to play.

()

Just shout (x2)

Come on, come one!

() Ha! () (x3)

AH-HA~ theres a new sound flowing UP & DOWN

Threw your body, thats going to make you Loud!

Just shout (x4)

()

When this song come on you need to turn the volume up, up!

We are here to cure you from your boring routine and lifeless living style.

We are the voice s of the new generation, so just scream your heart out!

All ideals, all expectations, we are going to destroy those one by one.

Throw your hands into the air, shout your voices even higher. Don't you dare stop, keep on screamin until my heart burst Throw them in the air, to just sit there would be a sin Keep the energy up!

()()()

Let me take a ride, lets shift you into drive, let's go farther than any human can handle.

Let's turn up the exciment as we get lost with ourselves, if your lost, let me hear you voice, let me hear you *voooooooice*

Just Shout (x4)

AHA~ We got one purpose, just to get you to move that body, just get those hands up, so I can feel them.

We-want-you-to-become-out-of-control, come and rise to our level, if you can't hadle us then leave.

Just shout (x2)

You'll forget all of your worries when the passion starts to take, over over

Let yourself be swept by the over powering sound and forget all about those bonding rules

You can try to fight me but my power will soon over power your senses.

Screw the rules, let yourself go, and let me hear your voices go loud.

Throw your hands into the air, shout your voices even higher. Don't you dare stop, keep on screamin until my heart burst Throw them in the air, to just sit there would be a sin Keep the energy up! Shout (x2) Throw your hands in the air keep on shouting, tell the world to shut it Don't you dare stop Forget the world and their nonsense Throw them in the air Welcome to your sanctuary. Just shout (x2)

This is, SM's, Fire-5

Let's go to a place where only rebellious and exceited can eneter. Life-would-be-boring-if-you-just-sit-there, dont-be-another-lifeless-dummy. If you don't think you can hadle it, then step around me. Shall we have fun?

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Just shout (x3) Come one (x2)

*Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah*

Throw your hands into the air, shout your voices even higher. Don't you dare stop, keep on screamin until my heart burst Throw them in the air, to just sit there would be a sin Keep the energy up! Shout (x2) Throw your hands in the air keep on shouting, tell the world to shut it Don't you dare stop Forget the world and their nonsense Throw them in the air Welcome to your sanctuary. Just shout (x4)
 

The crowd sung along and cheered. You were surprised how loud it got everytime you got on. You all stopped, you failed in the lipsyncing, honestly you barely moved your mouth. But how much power that went into the movement really took your breath away. You smiled at Hisu Mei who was next to you. She smiled back at you. Her self-esstem fixed, hopefully. Eunmei walked up to the front.

"We are Fire-5. Thank you for your hard work." you all spoke bowing. Surprsied, the crowd responded.

"We are Fireflies!" then screamed. You were sure the fancams caught all your surprised faces.

 

 "Now where did the bru- Ah!" Mi Kyong jumped at the loud popping noise. Confette feel around the room.

"Congradulations!" SHINee exclaimed. You smiled at a good size cake that sat on the middle table. It had Fire-5 on it and had Feb,26th written on it. The day you debuted. You looked at them.

"Oh, Oppa's." you said. Taemin smiled at you as he sat on the arm out the couch.

"Happy?" he pulled you over to him. You smiled.

"Oppa you shouldn't of." You said. Taemin smiled.

"You got us a cake. You get one. " He said moving hair from your face. You blushed lightly. Taemin smile widen. "Good job, Tae-by ah."

 

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BAM! Hope you like. I'm in the hosiptal right now, T^T. Why? For reasons, lol. So I might write a bunch more now. When i'm not sleeping or doing school work so I don't fall behind lol. Hope you likey. Nice debut Tae-by ah!

 

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AnnieFannie
#1
Chapter 49: Owwww.. Finished already? This was a great fic!
Bonana
#2
Chapter 49: :D a lot of times, even when the fanfic is good, i tend to forget what the fanfic is all about. especially when the author suddenly springs an update after so long. but this story was very memorable so i remembered right away, "oh this is about taeby and Fire 5!"
i hope you do surprise updates like this in the future or write a sequel, because i miss fire5 XD
TheLoneWolf #3
The picture of characters don't show up
smileydovey
#4
Chapter 49: Aw thank you for the interview! Fire-5 and their knees thingy xD I miss this story tho. Really, thank you! *throw heart*
JungJeWon #5
Chapter 10: I love l.joe though...and he is 93 liner too..
Channiebaby
#6
Chapter 48: I hope there's a sequel.
smileydovey
#7
Chapter 48: I just done reading it and it's awesome!! Interesting story! Combine almost all kpop idol in one fanfic wahh.. I really loves it! x) Almost all of my bias was here hehe. Thanks for the awesome story!!
mm0923 #8
Chapter 48: can you pls make a sequel for this
ChocolatePandaCookie #9
Chapter 48: Just needed to take this moment to say this fanfic was AWSSUUUUMMMM!!! one of the best ive ever read! Like seriously, I stayed up untill 3am to finish reding this and im a sleep lover! I hope theres a sequel. No wait THERE MUST BEEEE EVEN IF ITS A 5 CHAPTER ONE CUS 2TAE MUST GET TIGETHEEERRRR!!! now excuse me while I go check ur other fics ^^ ♡ u author nim! Thanks for the great story! ;)
taemin1
#10
Chapter 48: ERMAGERD!!!!!! THEY KISSED?!!!?!!! GO TAEMAN...hahaha. Good story author-nim