오십칠: bitter sweet temptation

Me Before You
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~I'm a house of cards in a hurricane
A reckless fire In the pouring rain
She cuts me and the pain Is all I wanna feel
She'll dance away just like a child
She drives me crazy Drives me wild
But I'm helpless when she smiles~

(Authornim is having old fave boybands feels)

✘NO ONE POV ✘

 

"Ahjussi stop right here!" Sunmi yelled her lungs out causing the poor driver to jolt before stopping the car. Chan was blinking rapidly looking at the hyper girl sitting next to him on the back seats of the taxi.

"Let's go chani!" She chanted before running out the car.

Chan gave the driver an apologetic smile before paying him which was returned by a cold glare.


"But where are we going?" He muttered almost to himself before following sunmi.
She was waiting for him impatiently at the side of the street with a huge grin plastered on her face.

"Would you mind telling me what is going on? Why did you stop the car here? I thought we are going to have a drink but here.... "

"Yeah we going to have a drink but not at one of those fancy bars! We going to have a drink there!" She cut him off and then finished her sentence by pointing to a small and cheap restaurant at the side walk.

"There?????" Chanyeol asked surprised.

Sunmi nodded eagerly. "Yep!"

"But why?" He asked as sunmi started heading to that direction already. She was taking careful steps because of her heels.

"Because at places like this no one judges you when you are drunk! No one can get embarrassed at such a place! It's comfortable! Now stop being a tight and come already!"


She gave him a short glare before entering the restaurant.

"Wait a sec! Who said we gonna get drunk? You said having a drink not getting drunk!" Chan frowned as he followed her inside.

"Well i don't know about you but when i drink i wanna get drunk! That's the whole point isn't it?!" She wiggled her eyebrows and settled herself on a chair at the corner of the place.

"I am not getting your drunk back home!" Chan retorted.

"Cool! Don't! i will call Seoyon or jimin they always come pick me up!" She exclaimed slyly causing Chan to glare at her again.

"Ahjumaa give us a bottle of soju please!" She shouted ignoring Chan who was now giving her death glares.

After a few minutes the woman came along with a bottle in hand and two cups. She placed them on the table and said:" anything else?"

"Do you have jokbal?" Sunmi asked with dreamy eyes.

"Of course we have!"

"One serving then please!" Sunmi requested.

"But what about the gentleman?" The woman asked cautiously gesturing to chan.
The way she was trying to seem polite because of the aura surrounding Chan was really funny.

"Oh he would never eat such a thing! He is too classy for it!" Sunmi shook her head in disappointment talking to ahjumaa as if Chan is not sitting at the other side of the table. Chan rolled his eyes and she giggled.

"One serving then!" Ahjumaa said and walked away.

Sunmi pour herself some drink and said:" oh don't sulk Chanchani! Next time we go to your fancy restaurants! Now loosen up and let me show you how to live!"

Chan scoffed:" i will just wait till you throwing your heart out so i can say i told you so!"

"You no fun ladder!" She pouted drinking the second cup.

"Don't call me ladder shorty!"

"Yaaaaa! I am not short! You are too long!" She yelled out and Chan looked around embarrassed but realized that no one is even paying attention. So that is what she meant by saying not being judged here. People were minding their own business drinking and chatting and they seemed so comfortable like they are at home.

The ahjumma came back placing the order on the table and sunmi clapped her hands like a little kid.
She grabbed her chopsticks and shoved some of the food in and then closed her eyes and moaned in satisfaction.
Then she looked at Chan with puffy cheeks and said:" you going to eat some of this!"

"NO ING WAY!"


"YES ING WAY!" sunmi smirked slyly before she held a piece of the meat up in front of Chan's face and said:" say aaah!"

Chan rolled his eyes. "Yeah sure!" Then he leaned back giving her a bored look.

"Chan don't make me come and shove the whole plate down your throat! How can you know you don't like it when you haven't ever tried it?" Sunmi asked with a glare.

"I don't wanna try it!"


"CHAN!"


"WHAT?"


"EAT IT!"


"DAMN IT!" With that he leaned forward and let sunmi to put the food inside his mouth which was half opened unwillingly.


He chewed on it suspiciously while sunmi was staring at him all eyes. It was not that bad. Well to be honest it was pretty tasty for such a cheap food.


Sunmi chuckled as she saw his expression and said:" i guess I'll be the first one to say 'i told you so' tonight!"

"Yeah yeah yeah whatever!" Chan muttered annoyed causing her to chuckle.

"Is there a bathroom in this place?" Chan asked the ahjumma who was passing their table.

"Yeah back there!" She replied.

"Thank you!" He said before standing up. "I'll be right back!"

Sunmi nodded carelessly as she was again back to munching on the food.


If he knew when he comes back he has to deal with a completely drunk sunmi he might have never left. He was busy washing his hands that his father called wanting to know how the party went and the conversation went on for almost fifteen minutes so by the time he got back to the table the bottle was already emptied and Sunmi was playing with it by spinning it on the table.

"Damn it!" Chan sighed looking at her who now had dreamy eyes.

"How did you drink all of it??!" He asked.

"Hah...chani is back...back...back *hiccup*" "look my voice is having echo!" She laughed out loud.

"I am so screwed!" Chan thought to himself before standing up.


"We gotta go!"

"What? Waeyong???? I want another drink...ahjummaaaaaa!!!!!!"

Chan ran his hand through his hair frustrated.

"No you don't!you already there!"

"aniji! I want more! Ahjummaaaa odiaaaaaaa?"

"Sunmi GET UP!" this time Chan couldn't help but yell cause a guy in the corner was now checking her leg's out with a nasty smirk.

"What the you looking at ?" Chan shouted at the guy and the guy moved his gaze to the table. if sunmi was not so out of control at the moment chan might have picked a fight with a guy but now it was not the time.

Sunmi looked up at him blinking rapidly. And then she pouted. Chan ignored the scared look in her eyes probably caused by his shouting and paid the restaurant owner and then grabbed sunmi's arm and managed to drag her out.

He took his coat off and stood in front of sunmi who was still pouting like a five year old.

"Don't ever dress like this again..." he muttered as he put his coat around her waist trying to tie the sleeves around her hips.

"Shirrrooo!" Sunmi suddenly said and pulled away causing the coat to be thrown on the floor.

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jbjbjbeife #1
Chapter 73: Okey ! :'( i love taemi :'( but hé broke her heart chanyeol was there to heal her ...
Thank u for this story it's amazing beautifull :'( and m'y heart is hurting me
88rozalie
#2
Chapter 19: I would love tae with sunmi but I'm rooting chanyeol till the end because he's fit for that role.
ESKPOP #3
Chapter 73: Review: tbh there's nothing wrong with this story.. i loved it it brought all my emotins out. LoL I'm serious..the best thing about reading this story would have to be that i found it unique..really~ tbh most of the stories I've read mostly revolves around the main characters got into an accident and forgot about their past or eventually die.. yeah there's more but since we're here to review this story i just wanted it to get out there.. again this story has a unique story line.. being a hardcore fangirl of Taehyung i thought i would be happy with the pairing of sunmi and Taehyung but somehow u made it change idk how but u did a damn great job..for the first time in my lifetime i had less feeling toward Taehyung..im sory Tae ..i promised to love u but i dont think things are gonna wour out too my feelings are drifting away to Jimin..lol, so yeah i love reading this story..literally near the ending - the "cliffhanger" thats the most important thing tbh..i love reading everymoment but it would be more exciting if at rhe end chapters it would hove really powerful cliffhangers.. i think that was all.. yes i have to admit this story pull me to read every time but it would be more exciting if there was something there at the near end, leaving u with stressed out brain.. making you want to rip everthing up until u read the next chapter..lol yeah ... sorry i think i have said too much........♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
Grennfields #4
Read the last chap and I am so happy that Sunmi ended up with chanyeol and that was a brilliant quote about second love.....keep it up authornim
decaseys #5
Chapter 73: I thought she would get back to tae the first time I read it but then at the last 5 chapters I realized her heart changed. Good story btw! Oh and I'm still waiting for say you say me's next chapter XD
Igadpp #6
Chapter 73: finally, before i read it I'm already crying
ZicoRuthy10 #7
Chapter 73: i thought at the end taetae n sunmi r going to stay together.. M really disapointed when Sunmi chose to stay with chanyeol haha.. btw.. i dont have anything that i really hate in ur writings.. really.. ur story is amazing at how it can control our feelings.. it makes me laugh, cry N sometimes i think i can also feel the love between them.. haha.. funny, right? but thats how good ur writing skill is.. M really looking forward to ur next story Paint me Wings.. n pliz make a happy ending.. ԅ(¯﹃¯ԅ)
ultxmin #8
Chapter 73: Congratulations on completing the story! Your story was an emotional one and i love how you based it off that one quote. You have a creative mind and it really shows through this story. I tried hard to think of some criticisms but the book is so perfect and I honestly wouldn't change anything about it. You're an amazing writer and i hope you're proud of this book because it's amazing
Caylaleroux
#9
Chapter 73: Congratulation on completing this story...I've cried and laugh while reading your story...It definitely was a roller coaster ride... You're an incredible writer...You have a wide imagination and that's what makes you a good writer... I look forward for more story from you... Well done!
NOW!!! I can't wait for Say you~Say me~ next chapter X-D