Do Love Your Neighbors

Author: deibaby03

Chapters: 9 (on-going)

Reviewer: ayu-hime

Title: 7/10
I'd say the title pretty much sums up the story plot itself. It wasn't that eye-catching for me though, but then again, it suits the story.

Description/Foreword: 7/10
It was enough to capture my interests, although I saw some grammar mistakes there. The character chart was just right although you should've just omitted the descriptions. :>

Appearance: 7/10
With the foreword, my only issue is the Comic Sans font. I recommend to use just one font to make it look neat.
In the first chapter, I noticed that some sentences were suddenly cut off and was continued in another paragraph. So you should try fixing that. It was distracting me a bit. I'm glad that was fixed in the chapters that followed. :>
Oh, and I suggest to avoid sudden POV changes. Just for easier reading.
I have no issues with the poster. I think it fits the story nicely. :>

Characterization: 14/20
I found Changjo and Hyeri's interaction rather typical for best friends. Teen Top is just like a typical kingka even though they were amusing to me in some way. Ara is just any typical mean queenka who likes using other people to get her way. Ljoe, however, is interesting to me, considering the revelation of his past with Hyeri.

In other words, most of the characters didn't really stand out to me. But I like the fact that you managed to connect the characters in some way.

Grammar and Punctuation: 12/20
I think you had a whole lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, which is a bit distracting. There were some words which were misused, which tended to confuse me a lot. Also, I don't recommend the use of Korean language. I guess it's just a personal issue but I don't think it's necessary to use 'Annyeonghaseyo' and such. I do recommend getting a beta, or try typing your chapters in MS Word first. :>

Plot: 8/15
I've seen a whole lot of best friend fics, so it wasn't entire original in my opinion. For now, the fic is a bit predictable and cliche, although it does have some potential, considering Ara's evil plans and Ljoe's connection with Hyeri. So good luck with that! 

Flow: 7/10
I think the flow was just right, but there were some scenes that were kind of rushed. Other than that, I had no other problems with the flow.

Total Enjoyment: 2/5
I guess you could say I kind of struggled with reading, because I found it cliche. But it was a good read nonetheless. I wish you the best! 
 

68/100

R/N; Sorry for the delay! I hope this helps you. Good luck with your story! :D