Catching Cars

Author: trixybee

Chapters: 7 (completed)

Reviewer: SimplyCuddly

Title: 8/10 

Well, the story is about cars, so it suites the story indeed. I never seen a title like this before, so it caught my interests.

Description/Foreword: 9.5/10

It's simple, but I like it. I like it very much. It intrigued me, and the wording you used was most impressive. Excellent job!

Appearance: 10/10 

You didn't have a poster, but the picture you used suited the story very well. I don't know how, but it gives off a certain angsty vibe that brings curiosity to me.

Characterization: 15/20

The characters seemed pretty vague, but I think I knew enough to understand them. Their conversations were very brief, but from what you portrayed it seems like Barom has tender affection for Jieun, and Jieun is like a mature and mysterious young woman. That's all I really got out of them and I think there might be more, but it's good enough for me. Good job.

Grammar and Punctuations: 20/20 

Everything is good; grammar, punctuation, everything. Your choice of words amazed me greatly. 

Plot: 12/15 

I found the plot intriguing and original. I found it a bit ambiguous, but overall, it's simple and I like it. 
 

Flow: 8/10 

It was pretty good, but I think it was just a tiny bit fast. You added a good amount of actions, but I think there could have been more feelings and thought process. 

Total Enjoyment: 3.5/5 

Though I found it rather vague, but I thought very touching. I enjoyed it. :) Thank you for requesting again!

Total: 86/100