Who said 'I love you' first?

Descendants of the sun Goowon Couple Love Story

It's daytime, today is both of their holidays. Nowadays it seems tough to find such a day. Dad Young and Myeong Joo both are very busy with their work. Their youngest daughter will be 5 months old this month. But Myeong Joo started her work full time when their daughter was only three months old. She is a commendable soldier and an efficient doctor at the same time. She couldn't stay away from her work. Seo Dae Young is also busy with his missions. It's rare to get such tension-free days. They both agreed on staying at home the whole day and enjoying some family time with their two lovely daughters. Sunshine woke up and heard her parents will spend the whole day with her and her baby sister and she doesn't need to go to her play school today, her excitement was worth seeing. She jumped and sit on her dad's lap, then she jumped on her mother's and gives them both a kiss on their cheeks. In return, they also kissed her and hugged her. The baby was still sleeping.

But obviously with all the excitement and giggling noise she had to wake up. So she wakes up and starts crying. Myeong Joo hurriedly goes to her, takes the baby on her lap and calms her down. Soon she starts giggling too. A warm happy situation is created surrounding them all. 

Dae Young lovingly looks at her lovely yet feisty wife and two adorable daughters who look exactly like a miniature version of Myeong Joo but both of them got his eyes. He never had a family. He didn't know how amazing it feels to have a family. But Myeong Joo gave her an amazing family, full of love. She chased him even when he shut himself down, even when he had hurt her very much, even when he ran away like a coward again and again. But her love, her so strong love for him won all the battle. She loves him with all her heart and the same goes for him too. She doesn't know how grateful he is to her. He can't say that enough. He just feels like he is the most fortunate man to have Myeong Joo in his life.

Myeong Joo is busy playing with the babies and he started preparing for cooking something delicious for them. And Chicken soup is definitely on his menu cause it's Myeong Joo's all-time favourite dish. 

The 3 girls talked about whatever comes to their mind and after talking for some time, Sunshine cradles her baby sister and kissed her on the cheek, "I love you. You're so sweet." The baby smiles very very sweetly in response. Myeong Joo looks at the beautiful sister bond and softly smiles at them. She hugs Sunshine and says, "Baby sister loves you too, Sunshine. And I love you." She replied, "I love you, mommy." After some sweet time, a question comes to her mind. So she asked, "Mommy, who said 'I love you' first between you and daddy?"

Suddenly Myeong Joo becomes a bit sulky and darts a gaze at her husband who is busy cooking. She replies loudly so that Seo Dae Young can hear her answer clearly, "Sunshine, the truth is your 'stiff as a rock' dad didn't dare to tell me that. I always had to make the first move." Sunshine's eyes got bigger," That means you first said 'I love you' to dad?" "Yes baby", she replied in a grumpy voice. She again asked, "Then when did dad say 'I love you' to you?" 

"He said that when we both were in Uruk which is in another country and I chased your father there. I got very sick with a virus and that virus was very strong and could have killed me. I was sick for many days. Only then your stiff as a wall dad (glaring at Dae Young) become soft towards me. He finally spoke some soft words to me and showed some care for me. After I got well, I said to him," I love you." He only smiled then but couldn't tell me back that because for some reason. She shoots another dart with her eyes toward him and noticed that his ears were perked up for a while, which means he is listening very carefully but doesn't show any other signs of listening to them. Myeong Joo wonders if he is smiling but continued her story. "Then when it's time to come back to Korea, he said to me then. With his dead serious face, at first, I thought he is going to break up with me again. But then he said those three words that I always wanted to hear from him. He said to me those words when the scenery was very beautiful and it was sunset time. It was magical to me. I was very very happy." 

Sunshine eagerly heard her mother's story and smiled all the time. When Myeong Joo finished,  she jumped to Dae Young and bring him to Myeong Joo by holding his hand and said, "Daddy why didn't you first tell mommy you love her? It's not fair. Mommy is angry at you for that." 

Myeong Joo smiles hearing her daughter but darts an angry look at Dae Young. He smiles looking at Sunshine, "Because mommy is the bravest person I saw in my whole life. That's why mommy said that at first." "But daddy, you always go to your missions, mommy says you are a very brave soldier too. Then how is mommy braver than you?" They both laughed at her innocent question. Dae Young smiles, "Baby, those two things are different. I always go on missions and I'm a brave soldier but mommy is braver. She has a different type of courage than me. Mommy is and will always be the bravest person I ever met."

Myeong Joo smiles more and more and her eyes get softer hearing her husband. Her man doesn't speak much, but when he does, he always makes her heart flutter all over again. She fells in love with him more and more. Still, she teases him, "Oh! Is this true Dae Young?" 

He grins now with mischievousness," Yeah! It is true Myeong Joo. Should I tell our daughter about our first kiss too? Maybe then only you'll believe." She jumped up and hurriedly comes to him and places a hand on his mouth, "Don't you dare tell her that story." Sunshine becomes very excited hearing her dad. She jumps on the couch and says, "Tell me, dad." Their little second daughter seems excited also seeing all those jumping around her. 

He holds Myeong Joo's hand and smirks at her, "She wants to know and I want to tell her. Don't you think she should know about our first kiss as she already knows who told 'I love you' first?   We should also tell her that. Myeong Joo buffs in disbelief, then cross her arms over her chest, "fine, go ahead and tell that. But remember, you'll not get any kisses FOR A MONTH. If you are okay with that then tell her that story too."

He can't believe what Myeong Joo just said. It's unimaginable to him to stay away from her for that long period. He couldn't even bear the thought. He immediately says, "Sunshine, it's not a wise decision for me to tell you that story." Sunshine giggles at him. Then Dae Young holds grabs Myeong Joo's waist and pulls her closer, "I didn't dare to tell her that story. Don't you think I should get a kiss for that?" She smiles and places a soft peck on his cheek and then goes to the youngest daughter, takes her in her lap and smiles mischievously looking at him. He sighs, "That's all I get, seriously? I think I deserve more." Myeong Joo rolls her eyes at him, "I'll think about that later." Then they all smile and enjoy their whole day as a really happy family, enjoying each other's laughs, sweet banters and love.

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I've been wanting to write a really long fiction for a long time. Over 2000 words. Finally, I've done that. It's here. I'll try to continue write long fiction.

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playfulkissbof
18 streak #1
My new favorite story
Jaesongjoong #2
Finally someone cared about this couple
I will read it
HDnguyen #3
Chapter 64: We are here looking forward to reading more GooWon stories and wishing you all the best. Hope you will be healthy and fight hard against difficulties so you don't fall. Everyone in this life has their own difficulties and needs to find a way to overcome them. Live healthy and happy for yourself and your family
Suchona
#4
Two years ago, I first published a story about the only love story I've seen in my whole life that made perfect sense to me. I've never been moved by a love story like this. But the yearning to know what happened to them after DOTS ended made me feel incomplete. Thus, I've searched all over the internet to read more fanfictions about them. Still, I was not completely satisfied. Even though some of the fanfictions were excellent. But they were not fulfilling my craving for them. Then I wrote a fanfiction for the first time almost a year later, after I've finished watching DOTS and published it here. Here, because most of the DOTS fanfictions were here. Later, I've thought about posting these stories on other platforms as well. But life comes through. To my readers, you don't know how many times my life has turned upside down in these two years. I've thought about ending the story a lot of times. But your comments inspire me the most. And when my life becomes really hard, I try to find something to rely on. I come back to my stories. Writing about them makes me feel how beautiful love is! You won't believe I've never loved anyone in my 28 years of life. I've sacrificed my life for a greater cause. But all I've ever gotten is immense mental pain, trauma, and depression. But if I loved, I would love exactly like them. Because I'm exactly like Myeong Joo. And Dae Young is the most honorable man I'd love to fall in love with. Readers, you waited for me, and I've promised you to write 100 stories about them. I will write 100 stories. But I can't promise about the timing. Forgive me for keeping you waiting for so long. But I've said earlier, and I'm saying now, if I could, I would never make you wait so long. Some days, I feel like my life has been finished. Other days, I'm struggling to deal with my depression and life. But some days I feel good, and I come to write a story about them. I know some of you prayed for me. I'm really grateful to you. I've got good results in my exams. You got me when you said, "Don't be hard on myself." I really appreciate you. But I've always been so hard on myself. Still, I'm struggling with this. In 2023, I've also started to think of suicide. But I've overcome that. It took me a lot of time to finally get rid of that thought. I hope you all are doing well. 2023 has been devastating for me. I hope 2024 will bring something great for all of us. And one request: please reach out with the story to those who love the Goowon Couple as much as we do.
HDnguyen #5
Chapter 62: So sweet, Au. They love each other little by little. They truly sympathize and understand each other on the path to finding true happiness. SEO Dae Young is truly a gentleman
HDnguyen #6
Chapter 61: Please continue writing Au we are waiting for the next episodes ♥️
tong99826 #7
Chapter 60: Thank you for the new chapters! It was such a feast!

I'm so glad that the love of Dae Young and Myung Joo is still as passionate as ever and at the same time I'm also thrilled about what's waiting for them in the future now that their little baby is about to be born.

We are already half way through the golden week of new chapters, please take care of your health be back with amazing stories.
HDnguyen #8
Chapter 55: Happy birthday Jiwonie 🎂🎂🎂
Please release a new episode quickly, Au.
HDnguyen #9
Chapter 55: So glad you're back. I want the story of Dae Young & Myung Joo to last forever. They were peaceful and happy together. Looking forward to the birth of the third baby, will it be a boy?
HDnguyen #10
Chapter 51: Welcome back after a long time. Looking forward to the next developments of the story. I need SDY&YMJ's really hot scenes to fill the void of their days when they miss each other. Looking forward to the baby. If possible please continue to write a new story for GooWon we look forward to it