Cold Eyes

Snow Flowers
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AUTHORS NOTE: Some people may not have noticed but, I said in Chapter 1 that it’s summer, but then I realized that summer is not in April (This chapter takes place in April) So then I changed it to spring to prevent further confusion. So right now, this fic takes place in Spring. Not Summer. Have fun reading ^^ Sorry. I didn’t plan this story well at first. But I have all the plotlines figured out so it’s all G.

Now let's read!! 

 

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“Your victim.”

“…”

A repetitive beeping ringed within my ears, indicating the end of our call.

The pace of my heartbeats quickened as its palpitating rhythm panged against my chest.

I parted the phone away from my ear with my trembling hands, returning it back to my jean pocket.

What was that? Who was that? Was it actually the guy? Was it a prank caller? But then how would he know I’m at a hospital? Should I go to the courtyard? A thousand questions spun within my head, leaving me in a daze. 

I wanted to remain within my spot, but at the same time I’m inclined to move.

My feet itched to move a step. Sweat filled my palms. Every part of my body responded to the dilemma I was left with to face.

Chae Won, what should I do? What would you do in my situation?

Was it really the man I hit? I don’t even know the guy, I didn’t even see the guy’s face before, so how would I know?

My muscles tensed as I clenched my fist. Think Yunho. Think. Jeez, why was I so indecisive?

Aish. I’ll just get over my fears and it up. I owed a lot to that guy, even though he claimed it was his fault.

I gravitated towards the door, taking each step slow. The scramble of noises amplified as I entered the halls.

Jung Yunho, be a man.

 

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Spring was evident as pink cherry blossoms scattered the grass, marking the path ahead. Shadows of the cherry blossom trees dotted the grounds as the sun shed its rays. The aroma of the fresh soil drifted into my nose as I inhaled spring’s sweet air. Not a single cloud was to be found within April’s, blue skies.

The beauty of the scenery distracted me from my pulsating anxiety. Even if it was for a brief moment.

I scanned the grounds, trying to catch a sight of this man. The yard only consisted of two people. Along the rocky pathway, there was a woman staggering with a cane. She was walking alongside with another woman. 

. Where the hell was this guy?

The sight of the pathway slipped from my view as I directed my gaze at an oak tree. Beneath its branches, a person stood underneath the tree’s shadow.

On an impulse, I headed towards the oak tree, satisfying my curiosity.

I got an idea of the person’s gender as I inspected his broad, straight shoulders. He stood with the support of a crouch as he put his weight on his left leg. The fabric of the hospital gown loosely draped over him, revealing his skinny frame. A gust of wind entered our direction, lifting the strands of his jet-black hair.

I’m not sure if this is him. But there was no other male in sight. So there is a possibility. 

“Excuse me,” I said.

The man remained in his position. Maybe he didn’t hear me well enough.

“Ex…excuse me,” I stuttered.

 

The man averted his head away from the tree, escaping the shadow’s wrath as he faces me.

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Dark, violet bruises marked the man’s pale face. Although he was battered in wounds, nothing could hide this man’s beauty.

I take in the sight of his features, surveying every inch of his face. Flecks of light glinted within his wide, dark eyes as the sun hit him. His straight,

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athrun08
#1
Chapter 52: Reread again..and the story still touch my heart :)
Freeforthewind #2
Chapter 52: Ch51: you know that I cried a lllloooootttttt... thank you very much for this fabulous fic. Thaaannkkkkxxxxxx... I really like angsts with happy ending. Oh my poor joongie and yunnie
yo_yunjae #3
Chapter 52: I'm crying so much for joongie's fate.. my poor poor joongie TT he is a fighter..
I glad, jaejoong n yunho have their happy ending.. with the help the handsome goblin ^^
hellagolds4maniac #4
Chapter 52: why do we become masochist?? i seriously love angsty ff... but i usually don't like when there is a cheating(yunho to chae won) and using others for to let out your frustration(yh and jooyeon) or heartache(jj and jicheol)... i felt a bit repulse reading it but the way you depict their emotions and reasoning for each situation make me understand the characters actions in more depth..at the end of it... i don't mind it coz FINALLY JJ GOT HIS BEAUTIFUL ENDING WITH YUNHO... yeah i'm kind of idealist even though i know in reality it is hard to see justice to prevail and true love to be together for a lifetime.... author-nim... thank you for writing this wonderful story as you know sometimes the angsty ff is too much bear like the dark night, the water gleamed under the moon...i actually read the first few chapters and the ending chapter really shook me to my core...
paboson
#5
Chapter 52: I gave so much to say but dont know where to start so I'm just gonna wing it....first, it's either the fact that the boys went/going through military service that you typed soldier instead of shoulder or you made typos on purpose to see if we are actually reading your fic. Lol Second, hmm kinda not the ending that I was expecting but I don't hate it not do I like it as much as I loved the other previous chapters you wrote. Third, I was also looking forward on Jae's web novels, they are fun to read. Fourth, kinda wishes there was a trial scene or some sort. Five, I like some parts of the original ending, like Yun running to Jj. Save for the part where it's his wedding day(or is getting marred) with chae won and that they both die. Dude, yes! You got that right, they went through so much already, especially Jj. It's like the angst monster puked at him or smth. And Lastly, I'd you are editing the entire fic, please don't hide the chapters because some of us actually likes the story and plans to re-read it when we feel like we want to be all depressed and wants to have a crying fest!! This fic is BAE. O. K. A. Y?
dee_9576 #6
Chapter 29: I've been reading this fic for these 2-3 days.. I really love the way you depict the story.. everything so real, so vivid, and it's very easy to imagine what happens and how the characters think and feel
Your depiction of the characters is really good!
My heart just aches alongwith Jaejoong's.. how such innocent and shy guy who experienced so much misfortune in his life.. *sigh*
It's sad how life is for him..
lol I'm supposed to be studying for my exams and finishing up my thesis and journal but I keep coming back to this fic haha!
(well I really should be studying right now but reading this fic is a way for me to de-stress hehe)
but my point is, this fic is really good! addictive in a way haha that I want to keep reading and know what happens to jaejoong..
two thumbs up for you!
will probably finish this in a couple of days :P
thank you soooo much for sharing! thank you thank you thank you!!
lighteu1610
#7
Chapter 52: Thankyou for the story. I really enjoyed the whole story and it does give me all the feeling. Thankyou againn ♡
darknesslovee
#8
Chapter 52: "But Yunho’s determination and desperation won Jaejoong’s heart. Jaejoong didn’t need a perfect man. He needed a man who loved him, and Yunho was the perfect candidate. Despite his rough, reckless nature, Jaejoong loved Yunho for his thorns. Even if it pained him, or caused blood to shed, Jung Yunho was the one."

hi, i'm here again \o/ ^my fav paragraph

instead of studying for my paper tmr, i ended up reading this on my phone and bawling my eyes out. you make my heart raced, jumped, sank, and any related adjectives.

the perfect way to describe this story from my perspective would be "crash and burn". there were lotsa of panicking, possessiveness, guilt, self loathe, but most importantly, you showed how both of em truly loved each other. how strong the affections were as if the bond had embedded into their bones.

thank you.
Nanuya
#9
Chapter 52: I know that as an author you may see your story a little different from us, but don't say is ugly or that you need to be slapped, because this story is gold! Is one of my favorites ever!! You are a fantastic author and made me sufer so much at some parts.
Thank you so much for the epilogue!! <3

I may or may not stalk your other stories and leave long reviews so bear with me, please lol
paboson
#10
Chapter 52: Our prayers have been heard, guys!!!! She finally wrote an epilogue!!!! Thank you so much!!!! I'll read this later when I'm not swamped with something and probably make a comment again. Lol