Fire

Snow Flowers
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                “Yunho has selective amnesia,” the doctor said, repositioning his glasses.

               "What's that?" Changmin asked. 

              "When the patient loses certain parts of their memory. In Yunho's case, his past memories are gone."

              “Will he get his past memories back?” Changmin asked, gaping at the doctor.

              “There’s no definite answer,” the doctor replied, flipping through the pages of his clipboard. “Some of his memories might take days, months, or even years to recover.”

             Not a word escaped my lips. I remained still, not moving a single inch. I stared at the corner of the room as the painting on the wall beheld my attention. 

             Am I now considered to be a mental patient? Misfortune seemed to come in my way, no matter what. Amnesia. A comatose girlfriend. A broken arm. A damaged car. Possible charges against me. What was left for me?

             Minutes later, Changminn and the doctor ended their talk.  My eyes followed the doctor as he approached the exit. I diverted my attention to Changmin, obtaining the view of his worried gaze.

           Due to my wavering attention-span, I didn't bother to pay attention to the the doctor's words. To me, their words sounded like a string of gibberish that was hard to understand. Big, medical terms were not in my liking.

            “Don’t worry Hyung…we’ll get you therapy and medication. The memories…they’ll come back…” Changmin stuttered, forming a toothy grin.

            “Hope so,” I sighed. “I just want this day to end. All of this is too much for me to handle…” I said.

            I gazed at the ceiling, inspecting the detail of the tiles.  

            The knock on the door caused me to rise from the pillow.

           “Who is it?” Changmin asked.

           “Your hyung,” a muffled noise traveled through the doors.

          As the door flung open, a tall figure comes into view. He lowered his head over the arch, avoiding to get hit.

         “In Sung Hyung,” Changmin said. “You’re here!”

         “Sorry I couldn’t get here earlier. As soon as Changmin called, I ran out of the office…but then then there was so much traffic…”

        “It’s okay Hyung, as long as you’re here.”

         In Sung’s eyebrows furrowed as he neared towards me. His imposing structure casted a shadow on my blankets. He was so tall, that I had to lean my head backwards to get a better view of him.

        “Yunho, I’m glad your okay,” he said, sighing of relief.

         His warmth radiated over me as he takes me in his embrace. The distinctive scent of cigars and cologne travelled within my nose. Hyung’s smell remained unchanged.

       “Are you trying to kill…me…” I groaned. “I’m still crippled you know.”

       “You rascal,” he said. The strength of his hug weakened as he pulled away from me. His hands landed on my head as he ruffled locks of my hair.

       “Aish…hyung, am I a dog?” I asked, combing my hair back into place.

        He parted his lips as his eyes shifted back and forth. The sad look on his face didn’t cease.

        “How do you feel right now?” he asked, perching on a stool.

        “Okay I guess. The oxygen mask is kind of bugging me though.”

       “You’ll get used to it,” the corner of Hyung’s eyes curved, taking the form of a crescent moon.

        In a heartbeat, anybody could tell In-Sung and I were siblings due to our similar smiles, despite having different features.  

        Changmin looked completely different from us, making it obvious that we weren’t related to him by blood. His tan skin contrasted from my light-yellowish shade, along with the size of his eyes. The memories of him joining our family remained unclear. Although I’ve heard some talks regarding my deceased stepmother (Changmin's mom). But despite the circumstances, I’ve never viewed him differently. 

          Out of all the brothers, In-Sung was the most perfect. He wasn’t just perfect, he was flawless. Graduating from Seoul University with top grades, his outstanding appearance and charisma; he was every girl’s dream. I recall that time from a month ago when a flock of women tried to talk to him at a social gathering. Unfortunately, their plans fell through due to In-Sung’s disinte

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athrun08
#1
Chapter 52: Reread again..and the story still touch my heart :)
Freeforthewind #2
Chapter 52: Ch51: you know that I cried a lllloooootttttt... thank you very much for this fabulous fic. Thaaannkkkkxxxxxx... I really like angsts with happy ending. Oh my poor joongie and yunnie
yo_yunjae #3
Chapter 52: I'm crying so much for joongie's fate.. my poor poor joongie TT he is a fighter..
I glad, jaejoong n yunho have their happy ending.. with the help the handsome goblin ^^
hellagolds4maniac #4
Chapter 52: why do we become masochist?? i seriously love angsty ff... but i usually don't like when there is a cheating(yunho to chae won) and using others for to let out your frustration(yh and jooyeon) or heartache(jj and jicheol)... i felt a bit repulse reading it but the way you depict their emotions and reasoning for each situation make me understand the characters actions in more depth..at the end of it... i don't mind it coz FINALLY JJ GOT HIS BEAUTIFUL ENDING WITH YUNHO... yeah i'm kind of idealist even though i know in reality it is hard to see justice to prevail and true love to be together for a lifetime.... author-nim... thank you for writing this wonderful story as you know sometimes the angsty ff is too much bear like the dark night, the water gleamed under the moon...i actually read the first few chapters and the ending chapter really shook me to my core...
paboson
#5
Chapter 52: I gave so much to say but dont know where to start so I'm just gonna wing it....first, it's either the fact that the boys went/going through military service that you typed soldier instead of shoulder or you made typos on purpose to see if we are actually reading your fic. Lol Second, hmm kinda not the ending that I was expecting but I don't hate it not do I like it as much as I loved the other previous chapters you wrote. Third, I was also looking forward on Jae's web novels, they are fun to read. Fourth, kinda wishes there was a trial scene or some sort. Five, I like some parts of the original ending, like Yun running to Jj. Save for the part where it's his wedding day(or is getting marred) with chae won and that they both die. Dude, yes! You got that right, they went through so much already, especially Jj. It's like the angst monster puked at him or smth. And Lastly, I'd you are editing the entire fic, please don't hide the chapters because some of us actually likes the story and plans to re-read it when we feel like we want to be all depressed and wants to have a crying fest!! This fic is BAE. O. K. A. Y?
dee_9576 #6
Chapter 29: I've been reading this fic for these 2-3 days.. I really love the way you depict the story.. everything so real, so vivid, and it's very easy to imagine what happens and how the characters think and feel
Your depiction of the characters is really good!
My heart just aches alongwith Jaejoong's.. how such innocent and shy guy who experienced so much misfortune in his life.. *sigh*
It's sad how life is for him..
lol I'm supposed to be studying for my exams and finishing up my thesis and journal but I keep coming back to this fic haha!
(well I really should be studying right now but reading this fic is a way for me to de-stress hehe)
but my point is, this fic is really good! addictive in a way haha that I want to keep reading and know what happens to jaejoong..
two thumbs up for you!
will probably finish this in a couple of days :P
thank you soooo much for sharing! thank you thank you thank you!!
lighteu1610
#7
Chapter 52: Thankyou for the story. I really enjoyed the whole story and it does give me all the feeling. Thankyou againn ♡
darknesslovee
#8
Chapter 52: "But Yunho’s determination and desperation won Jaejoong’s heart. Jaejoong didn’t need a perfect man. He needed a man who loved him, and Yunho was the perfect candidate. Despite his rough, reckless nature, Jaejoong loved Yunho for his thorns. Even if it pained him, or caused blood to shed, Jung Yunho was the one."

hi, i'm here again \o/ ^my fav paragraph

instead of studying for my paper tmr, i ended up reading this on my phone and bawling my eyes out. you make my heart raced, jumped, sank, and any related adjectives.

the perfect way to describe this story from my perspective would be "crash and burn". there were lotsa of panicking, possessiveness, guilt, self loathe, but most importantly, you showed how both of em truly loved each other. how strong the affections were as if the bond had embedded into their bones.

thank you.
Nanuya
#9
Chapter 52: I know that as an author you may see your story a little different from us, but don't say is ugly or that you need to be slapped, because this story is gold! Is one of my favorites ever!! You are a fantastic author and made me sufer so much at some parts.
Thank you so much for the epilogue!! <3

I may or may not stalk your other stories and leave long reviews so bear with me, please lol
paboson
#10
Chapter 52: Our prayers have been heard, guys!!!! She finally wrote an epilogue!!!! Thank you so much!!!! I'll read this later when I'm not swamped with something and probably make a comment again. Lol