The hidden parts

A Mistake [ EDITING ]
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Yunho was driving while jaejoong was looking outside the window. What happened? 

A very interesting thing. 

Did they talk ? 

Maybe 

How ? 

In their special own way.

How did they feel ? 

It's something that We can't understand.

Finally, after an hour and a half yunho stopped. He parked the car and get off waiting for the other broken man to do the same. He heard the door of the car being closed And turned to see jaejoong out of the car still refusing to meet his eyes. Yunho sighed maybe this is going to be very hard. He walked forward wanting to go to a familiar place. When he reached the door he rang the bill.

Jaejoong finally rose his head shocked when he saw the familiar door. His eyes widened and looked at yunho with pleading eyes. Yunho only started back at him. Jaejoong wiped his tears knowing that yunho won't change his mind. He won't take him away from this place. He won't listen to jaejoong anymore. He can't hear jaejoong's sobs and stay quite not doing anything. 

Yunho always did what jaejoong wanted. This time he will do things in his own way. Jaejoong will act strong when he is surrounded by another people. He will never break in front of anyone Other than his own family Dong Bang Shin Ki members. Yunho noticed jaejoong wiping his tears. Giving him a deadly glare and putting on his strength mask. And his sad eyes changed to something else. Something that yunho didn't exactly know what it was !. But he believed that it was the wall that jaejoong built around himself. A wall that jaejoong thought will help him to avoid the world, people, stares, and judges. That wall didn't help him much. Even though that it blocked other people but not yunho. It didn't block his other half. Yunho was able to look through that wall. It wasn't something difficult. It was Kim jaejoong after all.

The door opened revealing an old woman. The woman smiled widely as soon as she saw yunho standing there looking at her : 

" come inside son. You worked hard " she said warmly. 

Yunho smiled back : " umma . . . " he said warmly and hugged her. She hugged him back tightly. When she released him she finally noticed the tiny figure behind him. Jaejoong was standing behind yunho with his head held low. Her eyes widened when she saw him. And curiosity build up on her. 

How did this two end up meeting again? Was faith really playing with their destiny! Making their paths cross and separate,  cross and separate a lot of times ! And what about the Kim jaejoong that was standing behind her son ? What was he planning for exactly this time ? 

A small smile was formed on her lips but soon it was erased. Replaced by a very cold glare. Why ? Cause she still remember jaejoong's last broken voice and the meaningful words that he told her the last time they met : ' please umma if we ever crossed paths again act as if you don't know me. I was your son and proud to be. But for HIS sake please if we ever met again don't give me that warm motherly look. Give me the cold glare as if I was the most hated person in the world '. 

Yunho noticed the cold glare from his umma. And he won't blame her. She loved jaejoong as her own son. And suddenly he left. Leaving her precious other son shattered. A doubled pain that will definitely leave a scare. It may not be healed. But it needs time to accept it.

Yunho's mother felt a hand on her shoulder and a very strict yet warm voice can be heard : " let them in honey,  they must be tired ". Yunho's father said. He smiled warmly and let them in. 

Yunho walked in followed by the silent jaejoong. Yunho held jaejoong's hand and took him to his old room. This house he bought it for his family to stay in it whenever they come to Japan. Since he knows how his family loves to spend their holidays here. 

Anyway, he left jaejoong sitting on the bed blankly and went to the closet to look for some clothes that may fit the man. It wasn't surprising when he actually found some of jaejoong's old clothes here. After all they shared everything back then. It was a very normal thing to find jaejoong's clothes with him. Or his clothes with jaejoong. But what worried him is that those clothes won't fit jaejoong anymore. It's not that they are small no. Actually it was the total opposite. The clothes will be wide on jaejoong. Cause jaejoong lost a lot of weight. He was very pale. And weak. Yunho wanted to lecture him about his health and scream on him for not taking care of himself. But he knows better that he did exactly the same and it wasn't the right time to discuss this. 

Yunho brought jaejoong here to stop him from crying. Of course that stubborn jaejoong will never cry in front of others. And he wanted to cheer him up. And how to cheer Kim jaejoong up ? 

Simply by something called : ' Family. '

They went down stair

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Chapter 5, Impossible isn't here. I accidentally deleted it so I am just editing all the other chapters. Chapter 6, The Beginning is posted.

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jcnafaiz
#1
(*˘︶˘*).。.:*♡
verine #2
Chapter 35: Hi, thanks for sharing this fic. I always enjoy fic about tvxq reunion so thanks again.

I won't comment about the plot and the portrayal of the characters. I keep open mind about how the author want it to be. There are various typos but it's still okay.

My main concern about this fic is the punctuation, which is a mess. I'm sorry if it sounded so harsh.

(example from the last chapter) :
Changmin hesitated. Can he ask this or not?. But he collected his courage and asked : " when will we meet them again? ". He looked at yunho's calm expression and waited for him to answer !
" leave it " yunho said.
Changmin was dumbfounded!!! Leave it ! !!!! For who !! He was confused by that very simple reply. So he asked again:
" for . . . . ?! "

Perhaps most of this fic loyal readers don't care about it or they just do fast read and get the main point. But for me and perhaps other readers out there who read in detail, it's so messy and distracting. Punctuation is a very basic stuff and there is a default rule about it. Unlike grammar, there is no excuse for such author to not put it properly.

I'm not a pulitzer winner author but I can give some suggestion about how it could be written (mostly related to the punctuation) :
Changmin hesitated. Can he ask this or not?
He collected his courage and asked, "when will we meet them again?"
He looked at Yunho's calm expression and waited for him to answer.
" Leave it", Yunho said.
Changmin was dumbfounded. Leave it? For who?
He was confused by that very simple reply. So he asked again, "for...?"

It's not perfect but better. Don't overuse !!!!!! or ????? Also put the correct punctuation mark. If they just talked normally, don't put !!!! as if they're screaming at each other. I hope in your next story you will put more attention. Doing that plus improve the way you write the dialogues, I'm sure people will come to read and votes without you asking for it :)
Fireglobe
#3
Chapter 1: Hi. New subscriber here. :) After reading the description, I really want to read this fanfic but this fanfic in a progress of editing? I've subscribed, so can you notify in the story feed if the whole editing has complete? Thank you ^^

Sorry for asking a sudden favor. :)
natalie_ed
#4
Chapter 1: aishaa ... i miss u dongsaeng ^^
hy2min #5
Your story is just beautiful, I love your story !!
dee_9576 #6
Chapter 17: Hi, I am a new subscriber. I really love your story! I just found out about your story, was supposed to study for my exam but ended up reading 15 chapters in a go! :P
But it was worth the time, and I feel so much relaxed after reading it! I really love it! Hwaiting! ;)
bluelegacy
#7
Chapter 33: This is so heartwarming... I hope they get back together or at least they are in contact..
I am in tears right now... I have never loved a group like this <3
melinoes #8
Chapter 35: hi Author-nim! i'm back after a long absence :3 you will update soon, right? i really wait for your update, so please come back as soon as possible, kay?? Btw, i like your poster!! <3 hehehe
CoLatte
#9
Chapter 1: Hi. I'm a new subscriber. How do I know if you're done editing that chapter? You know, I don't want to miss a chapter.
T-araFans #10
Chapter 35: Nice poster ^^