Breaking down

A Mistake [ EDITING ]
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Note : I just wanna explain to you that the door of the cabinet in jaejoong and yunho's room is covered with a mirror. Cause I didn't know how to explain it well in the chapter šŸ‘¼ I know I ;)Ā 

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Jaejoong was shocked. What have he done this time to piss yunho off. He knew that he should act normally cause he didn't want his children to worry but when he turned around he saw them looking at him worried. He smiled to them : " don't worry about it " but he knew that this won't make it better.

He saw that changmin was the most worried one and he needed to calm him down : " changmin it's nothing. I will talk with your appa. And we will figure this out " he looked into changmin eyes : " and this time please let me deal with him alone. Changmin, Ā junsu and yoochun you aren't allowed to do or say anything. This time I wanna handle him alone. " jaejoong smiled warmly when he saw the three nodding and sunggyu with them.

Now it's the time for him to handle yunho.Ā 

He walked to their room and entered. He looked around the room but yunho wasn't anywhere. Then he heard the sound of the water and figured that yunho is taking a bath. He took a deep breath and let it out. 'how is he going to deal with yunho when he never knew what was the reason that made him mad ! '. The door of the bathroom opened and yunho came out wearing jeans with a towel on his neck. He didn't notice jaejoong presence in the room until he sat on his bed and ruffled his hear in frustration.Ā Ā 

Jaejoong was standing there watching him silently questioning himself what will make yunho so frustrated!. Finally he decided to speak :Ā 

" you seem frustrated "Ā 

yunho was shocked. He turned and saw jaejoong leaning on the door looking into his eyes.Ā 

" I am no- - -"Ā 

" it's not a question! It's a fact " jaejoong cutted him. " what happened ? " jaejoong asked.Ā 

Yunho sighed : " nothing ".

" don't lie to me yunho " jaejoong said calmly.Ā 

Yunho stayed quiet. There was a lot of things he wanted to ask yet he know he can't. And why was jaejoong so worried. Ā 

" you never look me in the eye when you lie yunnie " jaejoong smiled happy that yunho still had the same habits. " and you are doing it now. Look at me in the eye if you were honest " jaejoong said hopping that yunho will look at him.

Yunho didn't move. He doesn't want to see jaejoong and to be specific he doesn't want to see those lips that drives him mad. But he must turn to him. No matter how much he hates to see jaejoong deep in his heart he needs to see him. He finally decided to turn and see him. Jaejoong was also looking at him. Each one of them was looking into the other's eyes trying to figure out what was he thinking about. But unfortunately that didn't work for any of them. Jaejoong was curious while yunho was mad. How would these two figure things out alone.Ā 

" are you still mad ? " jaejoong asked. Ā 

Yunho understands what jaejoong meant immediately : " you don't know your place and you still want to care about the others ! " he said angrily when he had a flash back of what happened earlier in the park.Ā 

" yeah, what would a bastard like me do ? ! " Jaejoong said lowering his head. Ā 

' don't give me that innocent look and angelic smile acting as if you don't know anything. A bastard like you can play between hell and heaven playing with the others feelings. When you are supposed to be here waiting for me to come back. Where were you? !!! Out . . . Kissing another man! You are so innocent Kim jaejoong you are a bastard '

yunho wanted so badly to say that and scolds jaejoong about it but he couldn't. He was so pissed that if he opened his mouth to say something he will end up killing the other. Yup yunho was angry. He doesn't want to stay in the same room with jaejoong. Especially when he knows that those kissable lips were pressed against another lips that weren't his !. How can he accept that !

Ā  ' why are you so sure that jaejoong didn't kiss any one in this four long years!. Why am I wishing that he kept not only his heart but also his body all for me. And only me. jaejoong blushes whenever I touch him. He is like a shy teenage girl who is confusing and being held by Ā her first love. Jaejoong when he is with me and between my arms he is like a . And I hope that he still is. I hope that he still get by only me. I thought that jaejoong lust was only for me but . . . . . It seems that this changed.

Not only this that has changed, Ā 

JaejoongĀ 

Lust

Love

Home

LifeĀ 

HappinessĀ 

FeelingsĀ 

Even I changed.Ā 

And finally hearts. Ā . . . Not only his heart but also mine.

what does he wants ?

What do I want ? 'Ā 

Yunho's thoughts didn't make it any better. He wanted to be alone. More than that he wanted to stay away from jaejoong. He got up from the bed and headed to the door. Of course he can't avoid jaejoong forever but right now. He can't look at him. Cause if he did he will just attack him and kiss him not letting him take a breath. For him those lips are a treasure that no one us allowed to touch except him.Ā 

When he reached the middle of the room

*tick*Ā 

He rose his head and met jaejoong's eyes that were curious Ā just like his. He walked to the door and tried to open it but it didn't. He tried again and failed. He turned to jaejoong : " did you . . . ? "Ā 

Ā jaejoong answered immediately : " no ".Ā 

Yunho turned to the door again and knocked : " yah . . anyone . . . Come and open this door ". They waited and waited but no one answered.

Ā " give me the key " he said to jaejoong.Ā 

Jaejoong didn't respond.Ā 

" the key of our room ? " yunho repeated while opening his hands in front of jaejoong.Ā 

" oh " jaejoong searched in his pocket but he didn't find the key. His face palmed when he remembered where was it. He looked at yunho and gigled " umm . . . . You know " jaejoong tried to explain but didn't know what to say!Ā 

Yunho rose an eyebrow : " spell it out " he know how jaejoong is whenever he makes a mistake. When he realise that he made a mistake he will be scared. And won't know how to explain it to yunho in a way that won't piss him. So he will stay silent looking at everything except yunho. But yunho will always stop jaejoong's panic attacks by his famous line ' spell it out jongie ' but the last word stuck in his throat. Jaejoong closed his eyes : " Iforgotitinthelivingroom " he spelled it out in less than five seconds.Ā 

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Chapter 5, Impossible isn't here. I accidentally deleted it so I am just editing all the other chapters. Chapter 6, The Beginning is posted.

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jcnafaiz
#1
(*Ė˜ļø¶Ė˜*).ļ½”.:*ā™”
verine #2
Chapter 35: Hi, thanks for sharing this fic. I always enjoy fic about tvxq reunion so thanks again.

I won't comment about the plot and the portrayal of the characters. I keep open mind about how the author want it to be. There are various typos but it's still okay.

My main concern about this fic is the punctuation, which is a mess. I'm sorry if it sounded so harsh.

(example from the last chapter) :
Changmin hesitated. Can he ask this or not?. But he collected his courage and asked : " when will we meet them again? ". He looked at yunho's calm expression and waited for him to answer !
" leave it " yunho said.
Changmin was dumbfounded!!! Leave it ! !!!! For who !! He was confused by that very simple reply. So he asked again:
" for . . . . ?! "

Perhaps most of this fic loyal readers don't care about it or they just do fast read and get the main point. But for me and perhaps other readers out there who read in detail, it's so messy and distracting. Punctuation is a very basic stuff and there is a default rule about it. Unlike grammar, there is no excuse for such author to not put it properly.

I'm not a pulitzer winner author but I can give some suggestion about how it could be written (mostly related to the punctuation) :
Changmin hesitated. Can he ask this or not?
He collected his courage and asked, "when will we meet them again?"
He looked at Yunho's calm expression and waited for him to answer.
" Leave it", Yunho said.
Changmin was dumbfounded. Leave it? For who?
He was confused by that very simple reply. So he asked again, "for...?"

It's not perfect but better. Don't overuse !!!!!! or ????? Also put the correct punctuation mark. If they just talked normally, don't put !!!! as if they're screaming at each other. I hope in your next story you will put more attention. Doing that plus improve the way you write the dialogues, I'm sure people will come to read and votes without you asking for it :)
Fireglobe
#3
Chapter 1: Hi. New subscriber here. :) After reading the description, I really want to read this fanfic but this fanfic in a progress of editing? I've subscribed, so can you notify in the story feed if the whole editing has complete? Thank you ^^

Sorry for asking a sudden favor. :)
natalie_ed
#4
Chapter 1: aishaa ... i miss u dongsaeng ^^
hy2min #5
Your story is just beautiful, I love your story !!
dee_9576 #6
Chapter 17: Hi, I am a new subscriber. I really love your story! I just found out about your story, was supposed to study for my exam but ended up reading 15 chapters in a go! :P
But it was worth the time, and I feel so much relaxed after reading it! I really love it! Hwaiting! ;)
bluelegacy
#7
Chapter 33: This is so heartwarming... I hope they get back together or at least they are in contact..
I am in tears right now... I have never loved a group like this <3
melinoes #8
Chapter 35: hi Author-nim! i'm back after a long absence :3 you will update soon, right? i really wait for your update, so please come back as soon as possible, kay?? Btw, i like your poster!! <3 hehehe
CoLatte
#9
Chapter 1: Hi. I'm a new subscriber. How do I know if you're done editing that chapter? You know, I don't want to miss a chapter.
T-araFans #10
Chapter 35: Nice poster ^^