Just in case......

I HAVE A BROTHER!?!

^^^^^^ Thats you in the picture. The glasses is one pair of yours. You have many glasses. Because you might loose the one. 

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You woke up and you notice that you were still in the hostipal. The doctor then went in your room and told you that you are going to get discharged today. 

You were happy that you were finally going to get out of this hostipal. 

You then texted everybody telling them that you going to get of the hostipal today. 

Then the doctor went in your room again telling you that you are going to have a test if you are healthy are not. You got out of bed and you follwed the doctor. 

Hours later....

You were finally done with the test. The doctor told you to eat the pills every meal and that you are going to get discharged now. So you have to call Onew and do the paperwork. 

You then texted him. 

"YAH! GET YOUR IN THE HOSTIPAL NOW! YOU ARE GOING TO DO PAPERWORK . SO I COULD GET OUT OF HERE! 

in five mintutes he was already here. He then went up the desk and did paper work. While he was doing it you were changing to the close that Unnie got you. It was new clothes. 

It was cute ! 

Next Day~ 

You woke up changed to uniform and made breakfast. 

Today was Monday. Start of a new week. 

You then grab your shoes and backpack and you just left your glasses on for now. 

You then notice that unnie was not home. You were confused and then you got it! They are with there boyfriends. 

You then lock the house and then went to school. While you were walking you keep looking behind you, side to side, and infornt of you just in case someone  kidnappeds you. 

You then finally arrvied at school. You got your books and went to your class. When you walk in some people were looking at you if you were the new student but you just said no. You then went to your desk. 

You got your books and notebooks out and a pencil. You then look at your left you saw Woohyun looking at you. HI Oppa~! you said. He was suprised. Do you know me? he said. Yeah. Of course i do. I am Lee Minyoung! Your Girlfrend~! you said and took your glasses off. He was more suprised. He didnt know it was you wearing glasses. 

You were glasses? he said. Well duhh... i was wearing contacts all along. you said. He nodded. The bell rang and the teacher went in. 

SKIP CLASSES! 
 

*Lunch*

 You got your food and went to the queenkas table. You then saw them with there boyfriend. You just ignored them and you just found Woohyun and there is a empty spot next to him. You then sat there. 

When you went to there table all of them were confused why a girl that looks like a nerd is sitting at the kingkas table. Hi Oppa~! Remember me? you said. Woohyun just smiled and kiss your cheek. 

Everybody of the kingkas table were shocked that Woohyun kiss a nerd. You then took out your glasses. Now do you remeber me? you said. They all nodded. 

They thought you were another queenka. You then just finshed your food. You just got pizza and fries. The bell rang that means P.e time. 

SKIPPING AGAIN! 

It was finally end of school time. You were so happy! You then pack your stuff. And then you put some of the books in your locker because in some classes you had homework to do. 

You then walk home by yourself. Since Woohyun still is doing the schedles. You then were half way to the house.  You keep looking side to side, behind you and infornt of you just in case. 

 

 

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stephanie1138 #1
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: To be frank, I don't really like your writing.
First of all, the characters are boring. They are pratically the same person. They act the same. All of them are nice, good looking and insanely attractive. In short, flawless. It makes your story seems dead. Secondly, you narrate too much. Specifically, you wrote about everything which is very unnecessary. For example, the narration about Minyong's doing in the school. You narrate on her going to school, about her opening the locker, about her being boring in class. You can include them in the story but try to make them less obvious. Don't be too direct. Thirdly, you're making me confused by not sticking to any point of view. At first, you'd addressed Minyoung as 'you' and then as 'I'. It's hard to keep track on who's point of view is it. Because some of the stories out there is written from various characters' point of view.Also, you're using the word 'then' too much in your writing. I see that you try to connect the story using it but you keep repeating it over and over again. Lastly, I don't see the connection of the storyline. It doesn't flow nicely. The plot keep jumping all over the place. Try to be specific in writing the scenario. But don't write too much by writing unnecessary things. You're supposed to make the reader understand what's going on in your story. It able them to visualize the story easily.

Btw, I'm sorry for being harsh with my comment. I'm not trying to bash you with my comment. I just want to point out your flaws in writing so that you can improve them.
You also have your own strengths in writing. What's good about you is your idea. You have a great idea on wrtin it's just that your delivery is still poor. But, it's okay. I know you could improve your writing because I can see your potential as a good writer. I hope you're not going to get hurt by my comment. I'm sorry if my words is too harsh. Thank you and have a nice day.

And congratulations for being featured!
Iminthezone #2
Congrats
agentllama08
#3
Chapter 35: Update please
ShineeLeeJinki
#4
SEQUEL!!
naznew #5
i will read it..
EXOtic123 #6
umm....new reader here. you wrote infinate when its infinite on the foreward and you also used an old u-kiss photo but used the new members name........ but i'll start reading soon^^
unfixed-soul
#7
Sequel because it doesn't make sense to just end it like that.
naznew #8
Gomawo update...
a sequel because you make the story suspended..
LeeMinJi #9
Gomawo for the update :D Sequel please!