Chu~♡

I HAVE A BROTHER!?!

You were finally Woohyun boyfriend. You were so happy (:. You were always hand in hand with each other.. Right now, school has finished and now you were hand in hand with Woohyun. Walking home to your dorm. 

You guys arrvied. And woohyun was about to give you a goodbye kiss but, you did it instead. He was suprsied and then he smiled. 

He waved meant that he was leaving you wave back. He then went home walking. And then you were daydreaming about your first date and kiss.

 

Would you be my girlfrend? he said

OF course. you said . 

He stand up and kissed you. 

YOUR FIRST LOVE, FIRST BOYFRIEND, and FIRST KISS~! you were so happy. 

 

And then your phone was ringing and then you got upset because you were having a good daydream. You saw the Id and you saw that it was Victoria Unnie. 

You: Hey Unnie~! 

Victoria :Hey. Go to the dance studio in sm. 

You:OH KAY! BYE~! 

And then you hang up and then got your car keys out of your backpack and then you went in the parking lot and found your car. You then went in and drove to sm and into dance studio. 

You arrvied. You park your car and lock it and then you ran to the dance studio. And then you notice that you were still wearing your uniform. You just ignored it and kept running to the dance studio. 

You finally arrvied you the open the door and you saw that they were waiting for me. You then joined the circle and Manger spoke first. 

We are here today because we need to work on music. We need to write lyrics, dance moves and music videos. I will give you notebooks so you could write down the lyrics and the title of the song. manger oppa said. 

he then pass out notebooks. He handed me pink because there were no purple. You then think and think you then sneezed because you were thinking to hard. 

AH-CHU~! you sneezed, You then got a title for the song. Chu! All i need is the lyrics. 

What about....

Do it do it, chu
It's true, true, true, true it's you
Do it do it, chu

You then think about the lines again and you think it should be repeated again. 

Do it do it, chu
It's true, true, true, true it's you
Do it do it, chu

You then think of the verse and then you got it. and more...and more! 

Algo shipeun ge maeil neomuna namjyeo
(Aigoo ai goo goo goo goo)

Neuggyeobwa ya hal geot dohan namjyeo
(Yeah babe, yeah babe, yeah babe! )

Maeil su baek beon sangsanghamyeo
Gidaryeo watdeon geuege, Do it, chu! 

You then think of the chourus... 

Ibmatchuneun sungan jameseo ggaen geunyeojeoreom
(Do it do it, chu. It's true, true, true, true it's you)
Janhyeo dareun shigonge nuneul ddeunda haedo
(Do it do it, chu. It's true, true, true, true it's you)
Nan ireohke ddeollineun gaseumeul mideo
Ajik moreuneun sesangeul naege yeoreojwoyo

(Do it do it, chu. It's true, true, true, true it's you, Do do it, chu.)

You then think of the next verse again and again~! 

Ajik mollado dwil ge neomuna namjyeo
(Aigoo ai goo goo goo goo)

 

Gamchuryeogo hal surok hogishim namjyeo
(Yeah babe, yeah babe, yeah babe! )

Parangsaega saneun saejangeseo ggumeul ggoeodo
Chaeul suga eobseo; nareo gagesseo

And then chorus....

Ibmatchuneun sungan jameseo ggaen geunyeojeoreom
(Do it do it, chu. It's true, true, true, true it's you)
Janhyeo dareun shigonge nuneul ddeunda haedo
(Do it do it, chu. It's true, true, true, true it's you)
Nan ireohke ddeollineun gaseumeul mideo
Ajik moreuneun sesangeul naege yeoreojwoyo

Grow up! Grow up! Grow up! 

And then amber rap...

Ajik moreuneun sesangeul naege, (Amber! )

I got a little plan so pick up the slack
You wastin' time with the chit chat
You've been caught, so give it all you got
It's time to make it, make it, take, take, take it
Seolreyeo dugeun georineun mam
Waenji machi donghwa meotjin yeogam dadadagawa now

Do it, chu! 

 

 

And luna little part...
 
Maeil su naek beon sangsanghamyeo
Gidaryeo watdeon sesange, Do it, chu! 
And then the chours
 
Ibmatchuneun sungan jameseo ggaen geunyeojeoreom
(Do it do it, chu. It's true, true, true, true it's you)
Janhyeo dareun shigonge nuneul ddeunda haedo
(Do it do it, chu. It's true, true, true, true it's you)
Nan ireohke ddeollineun gaseumeul mideo
Ajik moreuneun sesangeul naege yeoreojwoyo
 
And then a little part.,.....
Grow up! Grow up! Grow up! Grow up!
 
 
IM FINALlY FINISH WITH MY FIRST SONG!~~ 
 
 

 


 
 


 

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stephanie1138 #1
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: To be frank, I don't really like your writing.
First of all, the characters are boring. They are pratically the same person. They act the same. All of them are nice, good looking and insanely attractive. In short, flawless. It makes your story seems dead. Secondly, you narrate too much. Specifically, you wrote about everything which is very unnecessary. For example, the narration about Minyong's doing in the school. You narrate on her going to school, about her opening the locker, about her being boring in class. You can include them in the story but try to make them less obvious. Don't be too direct. Thirdly, you're making me confused by not sticking to any point of view. At first, you'd addressed Minyoung as 'you' and then as 'I'. It's hard to keep track on who's point of view is it. Because some of the stories out there is written from various characters' point of view.Also, you're using the word 'then' too much in your writing. I see that you try to connect the story using it but you keep repeating it over and over again. Lastly, I don't see the connection of the storyline. It doesn't flow nicely. The plot keep jumping all over the place. Try to be specific in writing the scenario. But don't write too much by writing unnecessary things. You're supposed to make the reader understand what's going on in your story. It able them to visualize the story easily.

Btw, I'm sorry for being harsh with my comment. I'm not trying to bash you with my comment. I just want to point out your flaws in writing so that you can improve them.
You also have your own strengths in writing. What's good about you is your idea. You have a great idea on wrtin it's just that your delivery is still poor. But, it's okay. I know you could improve your writing because I can see your potential as a good writer. I hope you're not going to get hurt by my comment. I'm sorry if my words is too harsh. Thank you and have a nice day.

And congratulations for being featured!
Iminthezone #2
Congrats
agentllama08
#3
Chapter 35: Update please
ShineeLeeJinki
#4
SEQUEL!!
naznew #5
i will read it..
EXOtic123 #6
umm....new reader here. you wrote infinate when its infinite on the foreward and you also used an old u-kiss photo but used the new members name........ but i'll start reading soon^^
unfixed-soul
#7
Sequel because it doesn't make sense to just end it like that.
naznew #8
Gomawo update...
a sequel because you make the story suspended..
LeeMinJi #9
Gomawo for the update :D Sequel please!