Audition.....

I HAVE A BROTHER!?!

You did research and it said that they are going to have a audtion next week. SO you practiced and Practiced everyday. Onew keep telling me to not to do it but i just ignored him and did my stuff.

You just woke up from a dream that you were a trainee. You then look at the clock it was 8 in the morning then you checked the calender there were a circle on the date that was today it says " Audtion for Sm!" You then change and took a shower and then you went downstairs and made yourself breakfast.

When you were done you brush your teeth just in case something is in your teeth. You then change into comfortable clothes and you then curl your hair and make up and went to Sm.

You then sign up and you were number 35. You were nervous. You didnt practice today because you were in a rush. And you were nervous because you think you might mess up.

Few people did there performance on stage and stuff. ANd then it was finally your turn. Number 35, Lee Minyoung. You then walk up on stage and intorduced yourself.

Hello, My name is Lee Minyoung and my talent is Singing and dancing. You then bowed. You then push play the song went on and you were dancing to lucifer by shinee

You did everything and the right notes. The judges were suprised and they said...... THAT YOU MADE IT!!!! You were so happy they told you to go to this place tommorrow you are going to move in one of the dorms tommorrow and you are going to meet your roomate.

When the judges said that you were going to be with other girls you were sad beceause Onew wont be there for me.

You just ignored the feeling and you texted everyone of Shinee that i made it and i will be moving in a dorm. And Key told me that its okay because shinee is next to your dorm.

ITs werid that he know my dorm. Maybe the judges told him that next room of SHINee is empty and let people who made it live there? you were still confused.

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stephanie1138 #1
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: To be frank, I don't really like your writing.
First of all, the characters are boring. They are pratically the same person. They act the same. All of them are nice, good looking and insanely attractive. In short, flawless. It makes your story seems dead. Secondly, you narrate too much. Specifically, you wrote about everything which is very unnecessary. For example, the narration about Minyong's doing in the school. You narrate on her going to school, about her opening the locker, about her being boring in class. You can include them in the story but try to make them less obvious. Don't be too direct. Thirdly, you're making me confused by not sticking to any point of view. At first, you'd addressed Minyoung as 'you' and then as 'I'. It's hard to keep track on who's point of view is it. Because some of the stories out there is written from various characters' point of view.Also, you're using the word 'then' too much in your writing. I see that you try to connect the story using it but you keep repeating it over and over again. Lastly, I don't see the connection of the storyline. It doesn't flow nicely. The plot keep jumping all over the place. Try to be specific in writing the scenario. But don't write too much by writing unnecessary things. You're supposed to make the reader understand what's going on in your story. It able them to visualize the story easily.

Btw, I'm sorry for being harsh with my comment. I'm not trying to bash you with my comment. I just want to point out your flaws in writing so that you can improve them.
You also have your own strengths in writing. What's good about you is your idea. You have a great idea on wrtin it's just that your delivery is still poor. But, it's okay. I know you could improve your writing because I can see your potential as a good writer. I hope you're not going to get hurt by my comment. I'm sorry if my words is too harsh. Thank you and have a nice day.

And congratulations for being featured!
Iminthezone #2
Congrats
agentllama08 #3
Chapter 35: Update please
ShineeLeeJinki #4
SEQUEL!!
naznew #5
i will read it..
EXOtic123 #6
umm....new reader here. you wrote infinate when its infinite on the foreward and you also used an old u-kiss photo but used the new members name........ but i'll start reading soon^^
unfixed-soul #7
Sequel because it doesn't make sense to just end it like that.
naznew #8
Gomawo update...
a sequel because you make the story suspended..
LeeMinJi #9
Gomawo for the update :D Sequel please!
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