Raid

Silver Crescent ( Massive Editing )
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[CONTENTID2]Chapter 30: Silver Crescent[/CONTENTID2]




[CONTENTID1]" How did you get inside? " I remembered that my door needed a password to enter the room. 

He rubbed his neck " Well , I sort of hacked your lock " 

" I feel violated for that " I joked 

He chuckled " Sorry about that- "


Our conversation was interrupted when we heard the knocks , the knocks were loud anc clear. We stared at each other in the eyes , our gaze locked. The knocks were heard again and it looks like that person was in a hurry. My heart beated fast as I was starting to get nervous without a reason.


I stood up to get the door , but a hand stopped me " I'll go get it "


he stood up and I understand that he just did that because he was worried about my safety. After what happened to me before , it was traumatizing indeed. But that doesn't mean that I wouldn't fight for our rights , right? We shouldn't be hid in the darkness forever , we should face our obstacles for ourselves. 


Taehyung opened the door with a click and I went behind him , if everything's fine. I was shocked to see Jin in front of us , what was he doing here? Once he saw Taehyung , his face turned into a confused face. His eyes met mine and he may had the wrong idea of it , but he didn't dare to tease or talk about it. 


" What's wrong? " Taehyung spoke first. 


We could both see that Jin was panting from the run , I guess 


" Hurry up and get out there " he clearly said it out loud 

" What do you mean- " before I could finish my sentence , a loud pop and crash was heard. Taehyung and I looked at each other with a shock in our faces , as we get out of the room immediately. 


What was happening? Another raid? I hope they're all fine , no more death , please. I can't stand to see many people dying , especially in front of my eyes. It makes my stomach turn into a knot. 


" Where are we going? " I said while we're running for our lives

" I don't even know , but we must escape " Jin admitted 

" Where are the others? " Taehyung asked 

" They'll make it for sure , we talked about it before we got separated " 

" Separated? " I nervously said 

" We went our own ways to help the others " Jin explained

" They even got Taegeuk already , so you don't have to worry anything , Taehyung " Taehyung's breathing became calm as he heard that his sister was safe , but of course , nowhere is safe right now anymore. At least , she's with them , to protect her at all times.


I deeply exhaled as I thought they were separated for good , just like what happened to me before. I didn't want that to happen to them as well , how much I suffered in that hell hole. We just needed to hope and pray that everyone's alright 


The place was starting to get messy , as we heard many crashes and scream , horrible screams. I bit my lower lip as I remained calm , knowing what's happening already.


They're here. 


They came again. They want to rule the world and to destroy everything that's stopping or blocking their way. They're dominant and desperate for it while we were desperate for peace and freedom in our world. 


We saw a tiny creature , just around 3 feet tall and it was lurking around. It saw us and we saw its face. I knew this creature , but never fought with this creature. No eyes , just a big mouth , that was drooling from its mouth. Its teeth were so sharp and it was jagged , too. Their skin , dirty and horrifying. 


It screamed and it almost made us deaf. In an instant it went towards me as it was alrea

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red_knight #1
Chapter 32: OMG. FINALLY SHE CHOSE JIMINNNNNN.
Lolypop123 #2
Chapter 32: The monster is scary,no wonder theres a thriller tag lol >o<
shereenvrm #3
this story is luv <3
Minyun25
#4
Chapter 54: Dear Story writer...
Are you still doing "massive editing" to the aff????
I really want to read it. Please read our comments and maybe add spme to the editing.
Xx
Minyun25
#5
I will bookmark this AFF but not reaf it now..
Based on the comment below i made a decision to wait till its edited.
Hop you will tho.. i like the plot fighting! !
inspirits2710
#6
Chapter 55: I'm kind of not connecting with the ending right now, but i'm going to read it again later. Maybe i'll find the answer in the second story. I feel like this story has a really great potential, but i think this story also has too many plot-twist. The writing is quite good but the story is too choppy. Like it suddenly cut here and continue with another part. The transition isn't that smooth. And i feel that it's a little bit rushed (like Hyerin met Nana only two times and she thought that Nana's her best friend already?). But i really think that it's a good story, if you guys change it a little bit (but because the title has 'editing' i'm sure you guys are gonna do that). I hope you guys don't take this comment as hate comment because it's seriously not. I really like the theme, this new 'world', and Hyerin's character.
misspiggy-
#7
Chapter 29: Oh em geee. You guys are from PH *^* i admire you lol. Im a fil yet i can't even write properly (rip grammar) ;0;
kookiemylove #8
AND IT IS A SEQUEL, WOW. IMMA SUBSCRIBE AND UPVOTE ALREADY.
kookiemylove #9
OMG A NEW STORY AHSHAJHSNAJSBQ
Elizabeth49 #10
Chapter 53: You made me cry author-nim ;-;