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Silver Crescent ( Massive Editing )
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[CONTENTID2]Chapter 23: Silver Crescent[/CONTENTID2]




[CONTENTID1]I heard the door opened and I knew it was the food. I was here for week already and still , nothing has changed at all. Everyday , they just open the door and give you your set of tray to live while you just eat, take a bath and sleep. That's all , nothing much.


At first , I thought they were trying to poison me , so I just sat there in my so-called bed and stared at it. But then , Nana told me that there's no poison in it. I didn't even trust her at all anymore , after what she did to me. Nana got pissed and tasted my food and there was no poison in it as I saw her ate some of my food.


I admit that their food is tasty and fancy , but I can't either stay or waste my time here all the time. I need a way to escape here , but how?


I stood up as I finished my food and was about to take a bath but the door opened , seeing Nana standing in the doorway. No privacy at all , right? She was wearing a black skinny pants , black boots and a black fitted top , but her hair was wavy and colored in brown. Making everyone fooled by her beauty and attractiveness. 


" The queen said that you must be well fitted and trained , so I'm here to give you this " she sighed as she threw the fabric to me , making me catch it with a surprise reaction.

She huffed " I remember those days when you were so nice to me " she stared at me , her arms crossed in front of her chest " So disgusting " she finished her words 

My brows furrowed once again as she said those to me " I saved you back then! " remembering the scene where she was bullied by the girls and threatening her poor life with a swiss knife , making her life end in a miserable way if I wasn't there. 

She laughed " Those were my plans , you fool! " 


A plan? She got me there. Before I knew her , I thought she was those typical girl who were nice and charming. A typical person who's just normal and who would be trustworthy with me. I even thought of her as an angel , because of her soft attitude and personality. But she turns out to be a devil. What a shame.


" You didn't know? " I was stunned in where I was standing , not answering her questions. Cause it's true that I have fallen for her tricks or plans. " You fell for it! " she answered herself 

I gritted my teeth " Will you now leave this room? " Pleading her.

She smiled " Sure , loser "


She left the room and I was left there in the room wondering. Wondering what will I do in my life right now. What caused this tragic and how did my life ended up like this? There were too many questions and too many answers , but I knew the answers won't match up with my questions , I guess?


I sighed and shook my head to get rid of the thoughts and wonders in my head , some of them still lingered in my thoughts , but I didn't mind them for now. I still remembered that I was still holding the fabric that Nana gave me , I looked at it and it was a different types of clothes today. 


They gave me a black shirt , black sweatpants and a black shiny boots. Not to say that my undergarments were also black since I came in here. Oh how I am so sick of the black color already. It's kinda stupid to say this but I honestly missed the other colors. How can they even live like this? 


The door opened again and Nana was there again " Not yet done? " she seemed really frustrated when she looked at me , seeing me not yet taking a bath. " Why aren't you still taking a bath?! " 

How long was I here standing and thinking? , I don't even know also. " Just give me some more time , brat! " 

She scoffe

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red_knight #1
Chapter 32: OMG. FINALLY SHE CHOSE JIMINNNNNN.
Lolypop123 #2
Chapter 32: The monster is scary,no wonder theres a thriller tag lol >o<
shereenvrm #3
this story is luv <3
Minyun25
#4
Chapter 54: Dear Story writer...
Are you still doing "massive editing" to the aff????
I really want to read it. Please read our comments and maybe add spme to the editing.
Xx
Minyun25
#5
I will bookmark this AFF but not reaf it now..
Based on the comment below i made a decision to wait till its edited.
Hop you will tho.. i like the plot fighting! !
inspirits2710
#6
Chapter 55: I'm kind of not connecting with the ending right now, but i'm going to read it again later. Maybe i'll find the answer in the second story. I feel like this story has a really great potential, but i think this story also has too many plot-twist. The writing is quite good but the story is too choppy. Like it suddenly cut here and continue with another part. The transition isn't that smooth. And i feel that it's a little bit rushed (like Hyerin met Nana only two times and she thought that Nana's her best friend already?). But i really think that it's a good story, if you guys change it a little bit (but because the title has 'editing' i'm sure you guys are gonna do that). I hope you guys don't take this comment as hate comment because it's seriously not. I really like the theme, this new 'world', and Hyerin's character.
misspiggy-
#7
Chapter 29: Oh em geee. You guys are from PH *^* i admire you lol. Im a fil yet i can't even write properly (rip grammar) ;0;
kookiemylove #8
AND IT IS A SEQUEL, WOW. IMMA SUBSCRIBE AND UPVOTE ALREADY.
kookiemylove #9
OMG A NEW STORY AHSHAJHSNAJSBQ
Elizabeth49 #10
Chapter 53: You made me cry author-nim ;-;