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Silver Crescent ( Massive Editing )
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[CONTENTID2]Chapter 29: Silver Crescent[/CONTENTID2]

 

 

 

 

[CONTENTID1]" Taegeuk , I didn't mean to show you that side of me- " 

 

" Oppa! " she blurted out when she saw Taehyung came inside as she ran towards him and hugged him so tight. She was frightened because of me. 

 

" Never do that again , we got scared that we might've lost you! " Taehyung muttered as he embraced his youngest sibling. Taehyung's eyes met my eyes as he mouthed Thank you while I just smiled in response.

 

 

I left the destroyed visual room and had my head hung low. Of course it hurt me , especially my pride. I didn't wanted a child to be scared of me , because of what she have seen for the past few days. She absolutely saw me before and she got terrified , I don't remember at all when but all I know is that she've seen me. 

 

 

" Are you alright? " I heard a voice ahead of me 

 

I lifted my head and just smiled " Yeah , I'll be " 

 

" You should smile more , princess " he said 

 

" Princess? Me? " I laughed " Maybe you're just describing about yourself , Jin " I joked 

 

" Hyerin " 

 

" Kidding! "

 

 

Jin brought me to smile again , but that only lasted for a while. It really just bothered me about what happened earlier in the visual room. I didn't want her to be afraid of me , especially when she's still a child. Only they should be afraid of me , not Taegeuk , not my loved one's , but them only. 

 

 

" You look pretty upset today " he searched for my eyes as he stared at me for a while " What happened , princess? "

 

I sighed in defeat " Taegeuk is afraid of me after what she have seen before " 

 

Now it was his turn to sigh " She's still a kid , so it's normal to have a kid frightened about what she've seen , right? " 

 

" Yeah , you're not helping me at all " I glared at him 

 

" Just give her some time " he said as he patted both of your shoulders and gave them a slight squeeze on my shoulders " She just need some time " 

 

I nodded " Maybe she does " 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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My sweat was dripping like a river right now from all the hardworks that I am doing. Training is part of my life right now and it can't be removed. I have noticed that I was starting to gain some muscles after all the trainings I've received back then. 

 

 

I've betrayed them , and I'm coming to go get them , destroy them and kill them for what they had done to us. They weren't done yet , they were still craving for blood and wars. We have to stop it , I have to end this.

 

 

" You changed alot "  My head turned and saw him walking towards my direction.

 

I let out a small chuckle " This is what I've been doing the whole time when I was locked up in that hell place " 

 

He smiled " Should we spar? " 

 

I smirked " You sure? " 

 

" Let's see what you've got " 

 

 

The sparring was alot easier for me right now , but we've been sparring for how may minutes now? I don't even know , but it has been like 1 hour already. 

 

 

" Yah , don't you cheat on me " he said talking about my abilities 

 

" Why not? " I pouted 

 

" Cause it's not fair? " 

 

I huffed " Fine , fair fight then " 

 

 

After for a few minutes , I finally beat him. But I kind of cheated , I guess? I didn't used my abilities of course! , but I got a way of how I defeated him.

 

 

He rubbed his eyes " That hurt " shaking his head like a dog 

 

" No choice " I said 

 

 

I had won by kicking some sand up to his eyes , just to take him down and win the sparring. It wasn't called cheating , it's what you call strategy. 

 

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red_knight #1
Chapter 32: OMG. FINALLY SHE CHOSE JIMINNNNNN.
Lolypop123 #2
Chapter 32: The monster is scary,no wonder theres a thriller tag lol >o<
shereenvrm #3
this story is luv <3
Minyun25
#4
Chapter 54: Dear Story writer...
Are you still doing "massive editing" to the aff????
I really want to read it. Please read our comments and maybe add spme to the editing.
Xx
Minyun25
#5
I will bookmark this AFF but not reaf it now..
Based on the comment below i made a decision to wait till its edited.
Hop you will tho.. i like the plot fighting! !
inspirits2710
#6
Chapter 55: I'm kind of not connecting with the ending right now, but i'm going to read it again later. Maybe i'll find the answer in the second story. I feel like this story has a really great potential, but i think this story also has too many plot-twist. The writing is quite good but the story is too choppy. Like it suddenly cut here and continue with another part. The transition isn't that smooth. And i feel that it's a little bit rushed (like Hyerin met Nana only two times and she thought that Nana's her best friend already?). But i really think that it's a good story, if you guys change it a little bit (but because the title has 'editing' i'm sure you guys are gonna do that). I hope you guys don't take this comment as hate comment because it's seriously not. I really like the theme, this new 'world', and Hyerin's character.
misspiggy-
#7
Chapter 29: Oh em geee. You guys are from PH *^* i admire you lol. Im a fil yet i can't even write properly (rip grammar) ;0;
kookiemylove #8
AND IT IS A SEQUEL, WOW. IMMA SUBSCRIBE AND UPVOTE ALREADY.
kookiemylove #9
OMG A NEW STORY AHSHAJHSNAJSBQ
Elizabeth49 #10
Chapter 53: You made me cry author-nim ;-;