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Silver Crescent ( Massive Editing )
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[CONTENTID2]Chapter 10: Silver Crescent[/CONTENTID2]




[CONTENTID1]" 1 , 2 , 3." The door of the closet opened on time. Taehyung aimed a punch at the man, and he blew off the head of the man with his gun. The sound was deafening, and it was a horrifying view ,too. 


" You will get used to it , soon ," Taehyung said. 


I just smiled, and Taehyung pulled another trigger just behind me , making another deafening sound. I turned around and saw another dead body lying down on the floor. He protected me from the attacker, or should I say them. 


" Let's get out of here , now. " He was about to go out using the main door , but I stopped him.

" We can't go out there , what if there are many of them, " I hissed.

" Then are there any exit? " He whispered.


I came to thought about it that there are no other exit than that , but I remembered what Dad and I did before he was tortured and killed by those men. I grabbed his wrist and dragged him to the exact spot. Here we are now , face to face to the wall. I recalled the beats and the pace of the knocks that my father did. Taehyung just stood there expressionless. Well I just let him be there expressionless, while I try to do the knockings on my first try.


The knocks were clear and strong; all we have to do is to put my hand on the wall, and maybe link my hand to his hand, so we wouldn't get separated in our own ways. I took his hand and linked it with mine, as I placed my hand to the wall .A familiar bright white light came; and once I opened my eyes , we were on a street and infront of that was their house. 


" I did it," I mumbled.

 

 

 

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" How was it? " Jin asked.

Taehyung shook his head," they came back again and until now they're still looking for her." Taehyung went towards the staircase as he lifted his shirt up , leaving him shirtless. " I'll just change my shirt. " Maybe , there was blood on it. He didn't even react on how we escaped earlier , was he really like that?

" Hyerin~ " I heard Jimin's voice from the kitchen and I can feel it that he's coming towards me now. I hid behind Jin and told him to act as if nothing happened.

" Where did she go? " Jimin stared at Jin, " have you seen her? " 

Jin shook his head. " Nope , why? " 

" Aish , did she go outside all by herself? " Jimin questioned himself.

The main door opened, and I was face to face with Hoseok. " Oh Hyerin , what are you doing here. " I faced-palm and sighed, as I just glared at Hoseok while he just shrugged.

" There you are! " 

" What do you need, " I said.

" Please help me with this, " he lifted his math notebook and pleased.

I groaned. " Jin can do it , he's smart " 

" Ey~ , he always get zero- " Jin covered Jimin's blabbering mouth ,as he dragged Jimin

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For those who doesn't get the ending , you just have to wait hahaha

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red_knight #1
Chapter 32: OMG. FINALLY SHE CHOSE JIMINNNNNN.
Lolypop123 #2
Chapter 32: The monster is scary,no wonder theres a thriller tag lol >o<
shereenvrm #3
this story is luv <3
Minyun25
#4
Chapter 54: Dear Story writer...
Are you still doing "massive editing" to the aff????
I really want to read it. Please read our comments and maybe add spme to the editing.
Xx
Minyun25
#5
I will bookmark this AFF but not reaf it now..
Based on the comment below i made a decision to wait till its edited.
Hop you will tho.. i like the plot fighting! !
inspirits2710
#6
Chapter 55: I'm kind of not connecting with the ending right now, but i'm going to read it again later. Maybe i'll find the answer in the second story. I feel like this story has a really great potential, but i think this story also has too many plot-twist. The writing is quite good but the story is too choppy. Like it suddenly cut here and continue with another part. The transition isn't that smooth. And i feel that it's a little bit rushed (like Hyerin met Nana only two times and she thought that Nana's her best friend already?). But i really think that it's a good story, if you guys change it a little bit (but because the title has 'editing' i'm sure you guys are gonna do that). I hope you guys don't take this comment as hate comment because it's seriously not. I really like the theme, this new 'world', and Hyerin's character.
misspiggy-
#7
Chapter 29: Oh em geee. You guys are from PH *^* i admire you lol. Im a fil yet i can't even write properly (rip grammar) ;0;
kookiemylove #8
AND IT IS A SEQUEL, WOW. IMMA SUBSCRIBE AND UPVOTE ALREADY.
kookiemylove #9
OMG A NEW STORY AHSHAJHSNAJSBQ
Elizabeth49 #10
Chapter 53: You made me cry author-nim ;-;