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Silver Crescent ( Massive Editing )
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[CONTENTID2]Chapter 26: Silver Crescent[/CONTENTID2]

 


[CONTENTID1]THE BOY'S POV


 

Days were wasted that we couldn't still bring back her own self. Hopes were decreased , too. But that hope never died or faded , it was still there , in our hearts. 


We were scared , too , at the same time. That we might couldn't accomplish what we want , it was frightful. Were we waiting for a dead end? We don't even know the answer. We want to know the answer , but knowing it might scare us.


" When will she realize herself? " Suga sighed 

Namjoon clicked his tongue " Worry about yourself, first  , if you're alright " 

Suga just chuckled " I'm absolutely fine right now " 

" I don't wanna say this but , what if she never comes back? " Jin said , talking about her. 


It was true , though. What if she never comes back to her own self? What will happen to us , to her and to the world? Are we going to end up like this? Living in a world full of lies and hatred?


" She will , just trust her " Namjoon sighed " Just trust her " 






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" Just eat it " 


She just looked away and stared at the other side of the wall , which was white. There was nothing fancy in this room exactly , so how is she still living upto this? 


" Why can't you let me feed you at least? " Jungkook sighed 

" Cause I don't want to eat " she said 

" You're going to die here , if you don't eat " 

she faced back " I'd rather die here now than you selfish people use me till I die " 


 



 

HYERIN'S POV



 

The words still lingered in my mind , about what the boy has said to me. I knew that my parents hated me , but something is still confused in myself. What am I missing? 


I wanted to get out of here , it was suffocating. I needed fresh air to breathe and to do my job. These thick metal chains were not a normal thick metal chains that you can just break it. It your energy , so that you can't use your power or your abilities. 


Every second , minutes and days that I was here , it was my energy. There was a time that I wanted to die , but I remembered that I have a task to do. 


My energy was weak , but there was still remaining power and energy in me. I haven't even eaten for the past few days already , just this IV fluid that was stucked in my skin. It was there when I came here already , it never leave out of my sight. 


A boy came in sight holding a bowl , obviously the food. He never do give up , does he? He always came here to feed me , since I can't use my hands. It was definitely tight , not able to lift up my arms or hands. 


I scoffed " Why don't you just give up ? " 

" Cause that will never happen " he smiled as he lifted up the spoon in front of my face " Just eat , will you? " 






 

BOY'S POV



 

" Did she ate? " Taehyung asked while all six of their eyes dropped on Jungkook.

" She did " Jungkook smiled " It was unbelievable , though "

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red_knight #1
Chapter 32: OMG. FINALLY SHE CHOSE JIMINNNNNN.
Lolypop123 #2
Chapter 32: The monster is scary,no wonder theres a thriller tag lol >o<
shereenvrm #3
this story is luv <3
Minyun25
#4
Chapter 54: Dear Story writer...
Are you still doing "massive editing" to the aff????
I really want to read it. Please read our comments and maybe add spme to the editing.
Xx
Minyun25
#5
I will bookmark this AFF but not reaf it now..
Based on the comment below i made a decision to wait till its edited.
Hop you will tho.. i like the plot fighting! !
inspirits2710
#6
Chapter 55: I'm kind of not connecting with the ending right now, but i'm going to read it again later. Maybe i'll find the answer in the second story. I feel like this story has a really great potential, but i think this story also has too many plot-twist. The writing is quite good but the story is too choppy. Like it suddenly cut here and continue with another part. The transition isn't that smooth. And i feel that it's a little bit rushed (like Hyerin met Nana only two times and she thought that Nana's her best friend already?). But i really think that it's a good story, if you guys change it a little bit (but because the title has 'editing' i'm sure you guys are gonna do that). I hope you guys don't take this comment as hate comment because it's seriously not. I really like the theme, this new 'world', and Hyerin's character.
misspiggy-
#7
Chapter 29: Oh em geee. You guys are from PH *^* i admire you lol. Im a fil yet i can't even write properly (rip grammar) ;0;
kookiemylove #8
AND IT IS A SEQUEL, WOW. IMMA SUBSCRIBE AND UPVOTE ALREADY.
kookiemylove #9
OMG A NEW STORY AHSHAJHSNAJSBQ
Elizabeth49 #10
Chapter 53: You made me cry author-nim ;-;