Author's Note

The Heart Never Forgets

(EDITED: LAST UPDATE 2nd Jan) 


I really don't wanna create another post of Author's Note, Its a little misleading on the number of Chaps for this story :/ 
So...  I'm gonna add on the correction of mistakes in this chap. 
It'll be in blue. 




(This was originally written before Chap 24)
Ohmygosh, I just realised how much mistakes I have made.. 

Firstly.. 
Ji Yeon.. Is a Baby as mentioned in chapter 5. 

But it was just a passing remark by Yong Guk, because she's a fan of them. 
But she never really take notice of their profile..etc. 
So.. she didn't know about the Matoki Planet.. 
Their,.. bunny names..etc. 
She only supports them.. 

And please do recall that she has separated from Daehyun before B.A.P got famous..
or just a few monhs after their debut. 
So... 
Chapter 23. 
Emphasised on how she was doing research to understand B.A.P

Ironically when she has known them for so long... but she realised she never did know them as well. :) 



And... 
I know it has been a long and draggy string of  chapters.. 

But I wanted to portray the gap of two years. 

And how both of them are suffering. 

They thought it was the best decision for each other,... But both of them are suffering. 

And.. 
I also felt it wouldn't be nice to end off her trip to Australia with a couple of chapters. 
AND.... 
I am sorry for the cliff hanger :) 


AND AND... 

In case anyone is confused.. 
Daehyun never opened the shoe box xD
(SPOILERS ) 
So.. he didn't know he received a letter
(Chapter 21 when he met Tim and wondered why she didn't let him know anything) 


LASTLY... In case anyone don't get chapter 22.. 
She kept those couple stuff because she still can't forget him. 
She.. is alone in the country.. 
And.. she bought these as a way to comfort her heart. 

Any confused areas please let me know :) 

I am constantly re-reading my story to make sure there's a link.. 
But.. I may be lacking at times >.< 


Love you guys :D

 

 

As mentioned in my previous chapter, I had noticed a mistake... 

I mentioned that JiYeon: 

Your mouth spoke on your own. 
"I'm.. " you hesitated a little. 
Be brave Baek Ji Yeon, "happy to see you too. "
replied to his greeting in the interview. At Chap 31. 

But at Chap 33.. 
I made a mistake and say that Daehyun realised she was referring to his reply in the interview. 

I was thinking of the sudden interruption at Chap 28 : 
I looked at them and they remained silent. 
I took the cue to continue. 

" The-" 

" And.. " Daehyun cut in. 

I looked up. 
He was looking at me. 

" I feel..  " he paused. 

He seems to be thinking. 

" thankful. " he stopped. 
Silly me D:  
So... to clear things up, I am still thinking of the " I am happy to see you"... 
But just get the feelings conveyed across and what Daehyun realised was, she was indeed happy to see him. 
That took him by surprise. 

But then he figured it may be a formal greeting among friends. 

I know its pretty confusing. 
I hope I cleared this up :(



On a side note: I realised the story is progressing so slowly... Ughs. You guys are not mad at me are you? 
I received feedbacks that two sides of POV actually bring about a clearer picture to the actual events.. 
But.. I wouldn't lie.. 
Writing another POV actually takes a whole lot more time as compared to writing fresh ideas. 
Of course, my lovelies, if you guys still love both POV. I would gladly write them. 
I am indeed more free now, but I have two other pending stories,.. and I may have to get a job soon. 
So... I would apologise first handly, for any lack of updates. 
And as usual, thank you thankyou for the love for my modest story. 

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vivibest21 #1
Chapter 17: Omg im reading chapter 17 in the train! I just cant stop cryin why do you this to me?????
krystalsulli
#2
This chapter was beautifulllll
sapphire11 #3
Chapter 53: Omo....this is all channie fault..
Daemibaby #4
Chapter 51: Hello i read you're fanfiction since a week and.. i swear i cry i laugh i was sad and same time soo happy i usaly sleep not good..but since i read you're fanfiction i sleep very very well have nice dreams and no horror dreams like couple if years in the past my dreams were the real hell and i don't want too sleep i always stay until i sleep with tears in my pillow...thanks you and daehyun i can finally sleep without tears... i really really love youre story its like i read my thoughts... thank you very very much.. please write this for a long time i hope you're months get better no stress or something... I'm looking forward for the next chapter.... ps: sorry for my bad english.. I'm always support you.. you're the best
am5284
#5
Chapter 51: This chapter was beautifulllll <33
I hope your months get better from now T.T don't be so saddddd
Mangegardien #6
Chapter 51: Stomach is growling... You never know...

Thank you for updating, and congratulations for your uni =)

^(¤u¤)^

Ok . My emoticon is horrible, but it's my creativity mood right now with my maths lessons =P
Mangegardien #7
Chapter 51: Mangie is a nice sasaeng, but still a sasaeng... Though she chose the wrong person because she should be after purplegyu... I need to tell her.

Ahahah I'm not confused at all because I know who was talking with who (or more accurately I guessedit because you haven't told me anything) but it's nice not to say it now.

Ahahah maybe Dae was just hungry and he wanted to go to a late night restaurant and now his.
Mangegardien #8
Chapter 50: Is it this chapter confusing people ? Case it's not really confusing. It's totally normal Jiyeon doesn't feel good enough to be revealed as Daehyun's boyfriend, when we all know how fans usually react when you tell them their biases have girlfriends. And it's a happy ending.. Well a happy ending chapter okay, but still it's fluffy and stuff and it's adorable and you just want to hug them both because they're adorable (... yeah yeah more than I am XD).

I look forward to reading the next chapters, cause right now there are some black holes I need to understand ^.^'
sarahsohn77 #9
Chapter 50: HanBYUL...... I don't like this (even though I actually love hanbyul haha) himchan needs to get a girlfriend haha