Author's Note
The Heart Never Forgets(EDITED: LAST UPDATE 2nd Jan)
I really don't wanna create another post of Author's Note, Its a little misleading on the number of Chaps for this story :/
So... I'm gonna add on the correction of mistakes in this chap.
It'll be in blue.
(This was originally written before Chap 24)
Ohmygosh, I just realised how much mistakes I have made..
Firstly..
Ji Yeon.. Is a Baby as mentioned in chapter 5.
But it was just a passing remark by Yong Guk, because she's a fan of them.
But she never really take notice of their profile..etc.
So.. she didn't know about the Matoki Planet..
Their,.. bunny names..etc.
She only supports them..
And please do recall that she has separated from Daehyun before B.A.P got famous..
or just a few monhs after their debut.
So...
Chapter 23.
Emphasised on how she was doing research to understand B.A.P
Ironically when she has known them for so long... but she realised she never did know them as well. :)
And...
I know it has been a long and draggy string of chapters..
But I wanted to portray the gap of two years.
And how both of them are suffering.
They thought it was the best decision for each other,... But both of them are suffering.
And..
I also felt it wouldn't be nice to end off her trip to Australia with a couple of chapters.
AND....
I am sorry for the cliff hanger :)
AND AND...
In case anyone is confused..
Daehyun never opened the shoe box xD
(SPOILERS )
So.. he didn't know he received a letter
(Chapter 21 when he met Tim and wondered why she didn't let him know anything)
LASTLY... In case anyone don't get chapter 22..
She kept those couple stuff because she still can't forget him.
She.. is alone in the country..
And.. she bought these as a way to comfort her heart.
Any confused areas please let me know :)
I am constantly re-reading my story to make sure there's a link..
But.. I may be lacking at times >.<
Love you guys :D
As mentioned in my previous chapter, I had noticed a mistake...
I mentioned that JiYeon:
Your mouth spoke on your own.
"I'm.. " you hesitated a little.
Be brave Baek Ji Yeon, "happy to see you too. "
replied to his greeting in the interview. At Chap 31.
But at Chap 33..
I made a mistake and say that Daehyun realised she was referring to his reply in the interview.
I was thinking of the sudden interruption at Chap 28 :
I looked at them and they remained silent.
I took the cue to continue.
" The-"
" And.. " Daehyun cut in.
I looked up.
He was looking at me.
" I feel.. " he paused.
He seems to be thinking.
" thankful. " he stopped.
Silly me D:
So... to clear things up, I am still thinking of the " I am happy to see you"...
But just get the feelings conveyed across and what Daehyun realised was, she was indeed happy to see him.
That took him by surprise.
But then he figured it may be a formal greeting among friends.
I know its pretty confusing.
I hope I cleared this up :(
On a side note: I realised the story is progressing so slowly... Ughs. You guys are not mad at me are you?
I received feedbacks that two sides of POV actually bring about a clearer picture to the actual events..
But.. I wouldn't lie..
Writing another POV actually takes a whole lot more time as compared to writing fresh ideas.
Of course, my lovelies, if you guys still love both POV. I would gladly write them.
I am indeed more free now, but I have two other pending stories,.. and I may have to get a job soon.
So... I would apologise first handly, for any lack of updates.
And as usual, thank you thankyou for the love for my modest story.
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