Chapter 3: Oh Daehyun... Why? :(

Chapter 6: Oh ... i hope she stay ... and i hope she stay alive :(

thank you dear author-nim ^^ <333

Chapter 6: ahhh, i hope she stay and dont die..

Chapter 6: ahhh, i hope she stay and dont die..

Chapter 5: omg..what is this! haha. please update soon!

Chapter 4: ... I seriously hate your chapters XD They are always messing up with my thoughts about the fiction and what's going to happen... Like okay she dreamt... but why is she feeling this pain, and why does it stop everytime Daehyun arrives ? Why did they all become demons ? How far are their powers (I hate the idea of reading someone's mind... she's totally ... not even able to think of a way to escape without them knowing it) ? Why is Daehyun trying to make himself weaker because he's a demon but at the same time he wants her by his side becaude besides loving her, he wants to protect her ?
... So many questions.
But I read one of the comment saying how her presence could possibly kill him too... AND DO YOU KNOW THAT EVENTHOUGH YOU WRITE GOOD ANGST, I WILL NOT AS YOUR SASAENG ACCEPT SUCH AN ENDING TO YOUR STORY... THIS COUPLE CAN'T DIE. I WANT THEM TO LEARN ONCE AGAIN HOW TO LOVE AND TRUST EACH OTHER.

I know you may not have the time to edit it, but it would be better if you could just reduce the size of some of your descriptions... The one where she exp,ains how they live together, how he eats, how she eats and stuff is definitely interesting... but sometimes confusing because there are so many things in such a little space ^.^' Or I'm too old (a one-year can be a lot you know XD)

Chapter 4: Cant wait for next parttttt ^^

Chapter 4: Omg O.O

nooo my dae isnt bad TT.TT