And so it Begins...

His Vow vs. His Loyalty
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The week progressed and Golf still couldn't find Niddie alone, he was starting to notice that she was looking a bit pale and skinner. "Is she sick??" He thought to himself. He had to go to her house. Even if her parents killed her...he had to see her.

However, that afternoon when Golf went to Niddie's house after school, he noticed Min's car was in the car port.

Pim came outside when she heard Golf's motorcycle. "What are you doing here?" Pim asked angrily. She was suppose to be nice to him, but how could she after what he did to Niddie. He better be glad her dad wasn't home or he'd definitely get kicked out.

Golf looked at Pim, "I need to see Niddie."

"Well she's busy with a guest right now."

"It's ok...it's just Min. It will only take a second." Golf said and tried to walk past Pim. She stopped in front of him.

"Are you crazy? She's like my little sister. You hurt her so much with your stupid fake guestures and that stupid Kwan. Oh! If I was there that night she would've recieved a good beat down!! Why should I let you in? In the state that she's in right now, she doesn't need another blow to her pride...the little that she's ever had. We finally got her to come out of her shell and in one night, you send her right back into a place that none of us can reach her anymore. You're sick." Pim told Golf off.

Golf stared at Pim in disbelief. "What is going on with that girl...." he thought to himself and looking past Pim. "Look please. Just let me see her. Something isn't right with her. I know it." Golf pleaded.

"Yes we can see that too, we didn't need you to tell us."

"No. I'm serious there is something else going on with her! I'm sorry! I just need to see her." Pim looked at Golf, this boy was desperate and it showed. She wasn't sure if she should but she didn't have the heart to tell his pathetic self n

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this sounds interesting and has a nice description I will read this soon
Dailycommenter 98 streak #2
What it is Mike

Yeah yeah
khaomankai
#3
Chapter 60: *clap*clap* I love it! Great story!
Though I kind of wish the story can be longer~ Hehe...
Why don't you write anymore thai ff? It's good ^^
ps. who did Min end up with? And thanks for unhiding this story ;)
khaomankai
#4
Chapter 4: Waii~!! I remember listening to that song once before from my cousin's phone ^^
"toh uhyy" LOL
khaomankai
#5
Yeah! You unhide the story~!
Now I can read it... ^^
Thanks, author-nim!! ;D
OhItsVern
#6
ok! hands down, this is the best story I have ever read. at first I didn't know who golf and mike was, and after reading this. I'm in love with them now! thank you for sharing this wonderful story!!! I pulled an all nighter just to finish reading this! ^^
meeeyi #7
WAHAHHAHAA<br />
i've finally finished it XDD<br />
well i'd say your later stories were better (no i'm not biased towards the guys in this)<br />
just that... the whole issue of suspense?<br />
i sorta figured things out before i should've...<br />
well yeah there're still surprises here and there but it didn't hit me as much as compared to the other stories... hehs XD<br />
anyways. i'll read the other golfmike one later on ^^
doughkyungsoo #8
Finally I thought about reading this and finally finished after about 3 days XD it's supa goood :3 make more golfmike FICS ! In saying now because I just finished this story that was made and posted last year ? LOL. At first I got lazy to read this but I got time :3
iammee
#9
Awwwww.... This is an awesome story!!!
bumkeyk
#10
NGAAAWWWW~! Happy endings always makes me all gooey and mushy :3<br />
But one thing I'm confused about? Golf's parents mentioning that they couldn't find his body? And that they didn't know when Golf was going to come back?<br />
Wow this is REALLY good for a first fanfic! Kekeke another GREAT story Bea ^^