His Vow vs. His Loyalty

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One man vowed to love her forever, the other man swore his loyalty and life to protect his Boss. She was an innocent bystander whose love for one man brought her directly into the underground world...where her love for him, will mean her death. Will they betray their hearts for the sake of living? Or will an innocent love end in blood shed?

Foreword

Niddie sat staring out of her window. Today was one of the saddest days of her life, it has been one year since he left her. She tried to go with him, but even in death he wouldn't let her do anything rash. He wouldn't even let her die with him.
He died saving her and she hated that, "Golf...you're so stupid. You should've just let me died that day. Then you'd be alive giving happiness to the world around you." She whispered, her breath fogging up the window in front of her.
She thought about his dorky grins and his silky soft brown hair. She missed his stupid jokes even though she hated when he'd tell her one.
She started to cry, "Golfie...I miss you so much. Did you really have to leave me?" She asked out loud. She thought about the day that she first met him, it was the day that she also found out she was in an arranged marriage with him.

When does one love begin and another ends?
 

November 23, 2009. I had typed this story about 2 years ago. I can't believe it's been this long already. This was my first fan fic that I shared with the world. I was very scared to do so at first. Not sure how people would react to the story, considering not a lot of people knew who Golf Mike were. However, I am VERY thankful to those who read the story and enjoyed it for what it is. I am very happy to share my first fan fic ever with my old friends and now with the new friends who I HOPE will enjoy this story as much as the first group!

Thank you!
heroslilbit

 

Edited.
Begin. 9.7.2013
Completed. 9.9.2013

 

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this sounds interesting and has a nice description I will read this soon
Dailycommenter 98 streak #2
What it is Mike

Yeah yeah
khaomankai
#3
Chapter 60: *clap*clap* I love it! Great story!
Though I kind of wish the story can be longer~ Hehe...
Why don't you write anymore thai ff? It's good ^^
ps. who did Min end up with? And thanks for unhiding this story ;)
khaomankai
#4
Chapter 4: Waii~!! I remember listening to that song once before from my cousin's phone ^^
"toh uhyy" LOL
khaomankai
#5
Yeah! You unhide the story~!
Now I can read it... ^^
Thanks, author-nim!! ;D
OhItsVern
#6
ok! hands down, this is the best story I have ever read. at first I didn't know who golf and mike was, and after reading this. I'm in love with them now! thank you for sharing this wonderful story!!! I pulled an all nighter just to finish reading this! ^^
meeeyi #7
WAHAHHAHAA<br />
i've finally finished it XDD<br />
well i'd say your later stories were better (no i'm not biased towards the guys in this)<br />
just that... the whole issue of suspense?<br />
i sorta figured things out before i should've...<br />
well yeah there're still surprises here and there but it didn't hit me as much as compared to the other stories... hehs XD<br />
anyways. i'll read the other golfmike one later on ^^
doughkyungsoo #8
Finally I thought about reading this and finally finished after about 3 days XD it's supa goood :3 make more golfmike FICS ! In saying now because I just finished this story that was made and posted last year ? LOL. At first I got lazy to read this but I got time :3
iammee
#9
Awwwww.... This is an awesome story!!!
bumkeyk
#10
NGAAAWWWW~! Happy endings always makes me all gooey and mushy :3<br />
But one thing I'm confused about? Golf's parents mentioning that they couldn't find his body? And that they didn't know when Golf was going to come back?<br />
Wow this is REALLY good for a first fanfic! Kekeke another GREAT story Bea ^^