Dawn of the Rising Star

Description

Kim Lyorin strived by everyday just like any other 17 year old girl. But there is one odd thing; her life has no beginning. Wait, it has a beginning but it is not known. Like a diary with the first pages blank; her story starts in the middle. Her past is nothing but unfilled chapters. Pages are there, hard and crisp but nothing is written. Zilch. Someone must have erased it all away. 

To have a past and not know about it might actually be more painful than not having one at all. 

 

Why?

 

Because the empty pages of the diary will never leave its spot 

Either she tears it away or hunts its content

And either way, she will bound to get hurt

 

 

 

“A brightest child will be born among the stars; the consequence of a pure but forbidden love. She can unite the dawn and dusk, the fire and ice; and the east and west. She will return the light that has gone far too long. Free your thoughts away and look at the vast, clear sky. Remember; seek the sun for it shines at the brightest star. Protect her with all your life if you do not wish to remain in the darkness.”

 

- Book of Fate

 

Foreword

I'm a newbie. Please pardon my English, as it is not my native language, though it is actually my main language. HAHA! Confused? Anyway, if there are grammatical or spelling errors along the way, please don't take it too hard because like I've said, English is not my native. The story is inspired by the movie Wanted, sort of. I love fantasy so this story has fantastical elements in terms of superhuman abilities and magic. This story is based on my weird imagination so if you encounter something not quite understandable, oh well just use your imagination, that's all I can say. Hope you enjoy. ^^

 

Characters used are based on the names of kpop idols so you can picture them as the people in the story. 

 

Just a warning, there is a tragic ending to one or more of the characters.

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silent_Asian
#1
You. My dear author. Are insanely amazing! I read the sequel too and i loved it!!! I cried for Yoona TT TT I couldn't handle it. But I'm just so happy everyone is happy in the end <3
Hyaenidae
#2
For someone who's not a native English speaker, your skills at it are almost spot on!
Lolypop123 #3
Chapter 60: Oo sequel =)
alicia_kpop
#4
Chapter 45: I like the story, but i don't like when luhan fall inlove with yoona. I thought the exo boys only love lyorin
minxdahye94
#5
Chapter 60: Great story... I hope that Lyorin will end up with Kai... Why is it that EXO and Mr. Lee always keeping a secret to Lyorin?? It's only make the matters worse because she didn't know anything... At first, I detest Yongguk, and then I like him a little bit after he say that he will protect Lyorin and then I hate him for his mistakes when he's drunk and overdrown with jealousy... So, I'm guessing that Lyorin was not a simple star right?? Her mother maybe the star to BAP clan and fall in Love with the choosen one from EXO clan... 2 different person with a a bigger role and power have give birth to beautiful daughter who fate has choosen her to be EXO star and the one who can bring all the clan united again... I kind of like this story if there is less drama in this story... Thank god, there was less drama in this story with Sori being all y toward Lyorin and Yuri bullied Lyorin.. I'm glad... I don't really like drama and the heroin in this story, eventhough weak, stubborn amd vulnerable but she's not playing a role Damsel in Distress although sometimes she can be quite stubborn but, yup she can survive without EXO 24/7 help her like the incident when she had hanging with Yunna for the 1st time after leaving with EXO, she did not showing them they are afraid and they were scared... she even protect Yoona eventhough she can run faster..I like her strong, fierce, stubborn and athletic character... I like feisty character rather than Damsel in Distress..
xadrimusicx
#6
Chapter 3: I don't know why... But I hate the stories that start off with the parent forcing the kid to do something that is against her will.. And yet the kid isn't doing anything to fight back... The aunt should understand that she didn't want to be there and not force her to do everything.. I swear... Idk... It just annoys me....>__<
caviar
#7
Chapter 60: Aw yongguk t.t Off to sequel ~
Indigoh
#8
Chapter 60: I like this story!!! Poor YongGuk, he did wrong, I know and it is only fair that she wants him to stay away from her and her beloved ones, but still... poor bb.
HyoJin_Shim
#9
Chapter 60: i like your story,,^^