ludos by thebaroness

Title: 5/5
It's not a common name, that's for sure. I actually didn't understand why it was called Ludos until I read your Description which is bravo btw . It is definitely eye-catching ! The story is about boyxgirl who use each other for their own purpose, hence Ludos, but they start to gain feelings along the way . It's very unique and not long at all . 5 letters, 1 word, Ludos .

Description & Foreword: 10/10
It is a sneak peak at the story which is what I like . It doesn't reveal too much or too little . Just right . I actually really loved the Description & Foreword .

Characters: 20/20
I felt as if I was the main character and I was actually living in the story . During class, I would imagine that I was that girl and I met a guy like Kai and yeah, I was obsessed . The characters are portrayed originally which is what I like because even though the "type" of story is cliche, the characters made the story one-of-a-kind . Most of the characters have good/bad points which makes it more believable .

Plot: 20/20
The plot is a bit overused and cliche but we love reading it anyway because it's too cute . Your story had cute parts and deep parts . It's an emotional rollercoaster . I laughed at parts, it is a really good story if anyone is looking for romance/drama .

Flow: 5/5
I really liked the way the story flowed . It's very good . The POV's don't switch so much either which is good .

Grammar & Vocabulary: 13/15
There's mistakes like using "he" instead of "his" but nothing too major . 

Description & Emotions: 10/10
IT'S AMAZINGLY DESCRIPTIVE !

Format (Graphics & Layout): 10/10
It's readable and easy and I can just pass right through .

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
THE BEST ! You would drop my heart one moment and pick it back up the next with your writing .

Total: 98/100 // A
I am so sorry about the extremely long wait ! I can't apologize enough . I'm so (x10000000000000) sorry ! I totally forgot to update .

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