a:b:ab:o by xiuminbaozi99



Criticism Level: 9

Title: 4/5
I think it's unique to use the types of blood as your story title since I haven't heard this kind of title before. But somehow the way you write it doesn't make it seem catchy enough because I don't know it's just only me or not, but I am burdened with the colons that you use after each type. I guess it's easier to digest if you use comas instead.

Description & Foreword: 10/10
I like this part, because even though it's quite long, but I'm already engaged which means it is attractive enough. Also, whether readers don't know what would happen later on in the story, but the description intrigued them to know more about this heartless girl and her relationship with the EXO members. 

Characters: -/20

Plot: -/20

Flow: -/5

Grammar & Vocabulary: 13/15
Although it is a dark fic, but you write it clearly so that readers can understand what you are trying to deliver. On the other hand, I still found some grammatical errors like what should be "could" you wrote it as "can". Somehow you didn't make many mistakes in this which drew me a conclusion that you are such grammar conscious.

Description & Emotions: -/10

Format (Graphics & Layout): -/10

Overall Enjoyment: -/5

Total: 27/30 (90%) //A (*)
It's quite attractive although at first I was kind of confused when I read the title. But when I read the desc and foreword I was engaged.

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