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Parallel Lines
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                I drove around for hours looking for him, I had no idea where he would be as I drove home, it was dark outside now and I was pretty sure my dad was going insane by now. I got out of the car and headed inside, my dad simply greeted me and said that Sehun told me that I was catching up on the school work I missed with Amber, I had to remind myself to thank Sehun tomorrow because it was already getting late.

As I walked up the stairs, I pulled out my phone and attempted to call Luhan one last time, “Come on,” I muttered as I moved towards my room, but I heard a ringing coming from upstairs, “That’s weird,”

                I moved closer towards my bedroom and the ringing got louder, when the call stopped, so did the ringing. Of course, where else would Luhan go? I opened my bedroom door and flipped the light on, locking the door behind me.

I couldn’t see Luhan anywhere, “Luhan?” I moved closer to the bed and noticed a blonde tuft of hair appearing over the edge of the bed, I moved quickly around the bed and my heart dropped at the image before me,

                Luhan was slumped against the side of my bed, his head in his hands; he looked disgruntled and disorientated as soft sobs filled my ears.

I knelt down beside him and ran my fingers through his hair; he flinched before he looked up at me, his face tear stricken, “Luhan… what happened?”

He moved towards me and wrapped his arms around my waist as he placed his head down on my lap, “I-I’ll never be happy,”

I frowned as I ran my fingers through his hair soothingly, “What are you talking about Luhan?”

“He…” Luhan gripped me tighter, “He’s already trying to find me another fiancée Sara, he… he wouldn’t listen to me! I don’t wa

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mrsJAE_tvxqJYJ #1
Chapter 60: Well I see how many people root Sara with Sehun here,yeah we all fall for his caring side and I-love-you-more-than-anything acts...but we talk about love here,when you love someone if he hurts you,giving you pain,torturing you...in the end when he come begging your forgiveness your heart just melt the second you see him.You can't even mad at him, what you want is his happiness even you'll suffer...I experienced it before,your mind telling you to be realistic but your heart just don't listen...at that time,he is you world...your everything...and I understand authornim keep the ending this way...thumbs up authornim for this good story =)
saharboukattaya #2
Chapter 60: Is this really the end of this story... woow I feel really disappointed
. I tottaly didn't like the last chapter
Mongdear
#3
Chapter 60: hey i like your story, i've read some of your stories and i kind like of the part when you always mentioned the main girl character has light weight :-)

but, i little bit dissappointed with Luhan in this story, i know that he has his own problem but i feel like he has less struggle for Sara and for his life. i think you still can expose more stories/scenes between Sara and Luhan as the main character in this story, and tell more specifically about Luhan and Sara character. but the story is done and it's still good and i like the whole story and the happy ending too :-) thankyu, keep writing and good luck emm!
starlitnight #4
Chapter 60: This was a nice story, but in my opinion I wouldn't have chosen Luhan for her. Especially since he was basically toying with her with the "I love you but cant be with you so let me torture the both of us while I force kisses on you." That's unfair and I felt that sera was stronger than that. But what's done is done. Great fic with good details. I was just a bit disappointed with the ending

This is like when I watch kdramas, I always root for the guy that never gets the girl TT_TT
hasegawa_asuka #5
Chapter 60: Author nim, i like this story a lot as its very new i mean its racing abd your description is great. The character you shown are all lively but i have say, i like Sehun far more better than Luhan. Just like what Chansung said, i approve Sehun with Sara since Sehun truly is loving Sara and dedicated for his life in saving her no matter what... indeed, i think it is sad to see they are apart. Although He finally found Sulli but...its a bit odd but, well, Sara found Luhan first..thats a painful reality...to be true. Thx for writing us the story.
Leina1996 #6
Chapter 60: The ending was cute ;)
yooiris
#7
Chapter 59: That was harsh......
GoJangMi
#8
Chapter 59: TT-TT But Sehunniee.. OTL. After all that's happened you're still the 'second' lead. :((( Come here baby. I'll make you feel better.
Beti27 #9
Chapter 59: Heart shattered i kind of hoped she would end up with sehun but i guess that is how it normally goes :(:(