C15 - Part Two.

Parallel Lines
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It wasn’t long at all until we had to line up, when my car lined up next to Luhan’s a lot of people started whispering.

“Be careful Sara,” Xiumin said through the ear piece, “No matter how friendly it looks, it’s never friendly.”

I laughed, “Yeah because everyone has been such an to me,”

“Don’t get cocky,” Kris warned,

“Good luck Sara,” Luhan muttered,

Chen hummed, “Win it for us guys!”

“Sara remember what I told you about the adjustments I made to your car that very first time,” Amber said to me, “Don’t forget what I told you,”

“I got it,” I told her,

“Wait… what adjustments?” Lay asked,

“You didn’t tell us you made adjustments Amber,” Tao said with an annoyed tone,

                An amber flag was waved, indicating that we rev our engines which I did, even though to my right I saw Luhan in his black Honda NSX, there was a dark grey Lamborghini Veneno to my left, another car similar to it on his side and then I saw Kai’s Black Nissan Skyline.

“Don’t underestimate them Sara,” Xiumin warned her,

                The minute I spotted that green flag being waved, I was off, far ahead of everyone else, so much so that I heard a ray of shouts down my ear. It wasn’t long until we hit a sharp curve; I hit the brakes just before it, being a head of everyone else as I spun around the corner, drifting with ease before lining the car back up.

“Holy !” Chen shouted down my ear, “Did you ing see that skill!?”

“Oh my god!” Xiumin laughed, “That was a sweet ing turn Sara, well done,”

Luhan laughed too, “, that was a sweet move; you’re going to have to teach me,”

I smiled at myself, more so for the thought of me teaching Luhan how to drift, “Keep up, it’s not over yet,”

                I noticed Kai’s car and Luhan’s car coming up behind me, Kai flashed his lights at me and I shook my head before I put my foot down on the accelerator, speeding off away from them both.

“Careful now,” Lay muttered, “The Yellow Ascari A10 from GOT7 is coming up behind you Lu,”

Luhan scoffed, “Jackson can eat dirt,”

Another sharp turn came into my line of sight, “Luhan there is a sharp turn coming up for you,” I said before I hit the brakes again, drifting as if it was second nature.

“Thanks for the heads up,” Luhan said gratefully,

                I ignored all of the voices going on in my ear as I held onto the steering wheel as I drifted, it wasn’t long until I had to line my car up right again and zoomed off. I was informed by Amber that Kai was over taking Luhan which meant he was coming for me.

“Use it now Sara, Kai and L are on your tail,” Amber muttered,

Xiumin had a concerned tone when he spoke, “What do you mean ‘use it’?”

I spotted the Lamborghini in my rear view along with Kai’s car and smirked, “Ah did you

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mrsJAE_tvxqJYJ #1
Chapter 60: Well I see how many people root Sara with Sehun here,yeah we all fall for his caring side and I-love-you-more-than-anything acts...but we talk about love here,when you love someone if he hurts you,giving you pain,torturing you...in the end when he come begging your forgiveness your heart just melt the second you see him.You can't even mad at him, what you want is his happiness even you'll suffer...I experienced it before,your mind telling you to be realistic but your heart just don't listen...at that time,he is you world...your everything...and I understand authornim keep the ending this way...thumbs up authornim for this good story =)
saharboukattaya #2
Chapter 60: Is this really the end of this story... woow I feel really disappointed
. I tottaly didn't like the last chapter
Mongdear
#3
Chapter 60: hey i like your story, i've read some of your stories and i kind like of the part when you always mentioned the main girl character has light weight :-)

but, i little bit dissappointed with Luhan in this story, i know that he has his own problem but i feel like he has less struggle for Sara and for his life. i think you still can expose more stories/scenes between Sara and Luhan as the main character in this story, and tell more specifically about Luhan and Sara character. but the story is done and it's still good and i like the whole story and the happy ending too :-) thankyu, keep writing and good luck emm!
starlitnight #4
Chapter 60: This was a nice story, but in my opinion I wouldn't have chosen Luhan for her. Especially since he was basically toying with her with the "I love you but cant be with you so let me torture the both of us while I force kisses on you." That's unfair and I felt that sera was stronger than that. But what's done is done. Great fic with good details. I was just a bit disappointed with the ending

This is like when I watch kdramas, I always root for the guy that never gets the girl TT_TT
hasegawa_asuka #5
Chapter 60: Author nim, i like this story a lot as its very new i mean its racing abd your description is great. The character you shown are all lively but i have say, i like Sehun far more better than Luhan. Just like what Chansung said, i approve Sehun with Sara since Sehun truly is loving Sara and dedicated for his life in saving her no matter what... indeed, i think it is sad to see they are apart. Although He finally found Sulli but...its a bit odd but, well, Sara found Luhan first..thats a painful reality...to be true. Thx for writing us the story.
Leina1996 #6
Chapter 60: The ending was cute ;)
yooiris
#7
Chapter 59: That was harsh......
GoJangMi
#8
Chapter 59: TT-TT But Sehunniee.. OTL. After all that's happened you're still the 'second' lead. :((( Come here baby. I'll make you feel better.
Beti27 #9
Chapter 59: Heart shattered i kind of hoped she would end up with sehun but i guess that is how it normally goes :(:(