C16 - Part Three.

Parallel Lines
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After all the groups split up and headed off to their own places, which Sehun promised he’d call me when he was on his way back home. I parked my car in front of Amber’s garage but Luhan grabbed my wrist and pulled me away from the door.

“Luhan what are you doing?” I asked him as he pulled me in the opposite direction of the garage,

He smiled back at me, “Trust me?”

“Well yeah but –”

He turned swiftly and cut me off with a chaste kiss; he pulled away and laced his fingers through mine, “Then don’t question it okay?”

                I was stunned as I allowed him to pull me up a small hill just a little walks away from Amber’s garage. Once I could spot a lone bench at the very top of it, Luhan began picking up his pace before he sighed and turned around, scooping me up into his arms in surprise.

“Luhan!” I protested “I can walk!”

“I know,” He laughed as we reached the top, “But I can’t help it,” he sat down on the bench, refusing to let me go as he put me on his lap, wrapping his arms securely around me, “Thank you, you… you were so amazing tonight,”

I sighed, “Thanks,”

“I’ve never…” He swallowed harshly as he brought his hand up to my cheek, “I have never been so attracted to someone in my entire life,”

“Luhan…” I brought my hand up to cup his cheek, startling him slightly, “I’ve never enjoyed a race so much in my life, hearing you speaking through my ear the entire time… it made me happy,”

He smiled and let out a slight chuckle, “Can we… pretend that everything is normal? For now? As if no one could ruin this moment for us?”

“I couldn’t say no even if I wanted,” I told him,

                He connected our lips together, but instead of leaving it as a chaste kiss he swept his tongue along the bottom of my lip as if pleading for entrance. I allowed for him to slip his tongue into my mouth, warm and wet against my own as I shifted myself so that I was straddling him on the bench.

                His warm hands trailing over the lower part of my back as I gripped into his shoulders, no one else, just us in the warmth embrace of each other with the moon shining down on us.

                He broke the kiss and started ki

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mrsJAE_tvxqJYJ #1
Chapter 60: Well I see how many people root Sara with Sehun here,yeah we all fall for his caring side and I-love-you-more-than-anything acts...but we talk about love here,when you love someone if he hurts you,giving you pain,torturing you...in the end when he come begging your forgiveness your heart just melt the second you see him.You can't even mad at him, what you want is his happiness even you'll suffer...I experienced it before,your mind telling you to be realistic but your heart just don't listen...at that time,he is you world...your everything...and I understand authornim keep the ending this way...thumbs up authornim for this good story =)
saharboukattaya #2
Chapter 60: Is this really the end of this story... woow I feel really disappointed
. I tottaly didn't like the last chapter
Mongdear
#3
Chapter 60: hey i like your story, i've read some of your stories and i kind like of the part when you always mentioned the main girl character has light weight :-)

but, i little bit dissappointed with Luhan in this story, i know that he has his own problem but i feel like he has less struggle for Sara and for his life. i think you still can expose more stories/scenes between Sara and Luhan as the main character in this story, and tell more specifically about Luhan and Sara character. but the story is done and it's still good and i like the whole story and the happy ending too :-) thankyu, keep writing and good luck emm!
starlitnight #4
Chapter 60: This was a nice story, but in my opinion I wouldn't have chosen Luhan for her. Especially since he was basically toying with her with the "I love you but cant be with you so let me torture the both of us while I force kisses on you." That's unfair and I felt that sera was stronger than that. But what's done is done. Great fic with good details. I was just a bit disappointed with the ending

This is like when I watch kdramas, I always root for the guy that never gets the girl TT_TT
hasegawa_asuka #5
Chapter 60: Author nim, i like this story a lot as its very new i mean its racing abd your description is great. The character you shown are all lively but i have say, i like Sehun far more better than Luhan. Just like what Chansung said, i approve Sehun with Sara since Sehun truly is loving Sara and dedicated for his life in saving her no matter what... indeed, i think it is sad to see they are apart. Although He finally found Sulli but...its a bit odd but, well, Sara found Luhan first..thats a painful reality...to be true. Thx for writing us the story.
Leina1996 #6
Chapter 60: The ending was cute ;)
yooiris
#7
Chapter 59: That was harsh......
GoJangMi
#8
Chapter 59: TT-TT But Sehunniee.. OTL. After all that's happened you're still the 'second' lead. :((( Come here baby. I'll make you feel better.
Beti27 #9
Chapter 59: Heart shattered i kind of hoped she would end up with sehun but i guess that is how it normally goes :(:(