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Parallel Lines
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I ended up going home a lot later than I had planned, but when I told my parents it was because of my new friend Amber who was showing me around town, they immediately let me off the hook which was easier than I thought it would be.

                The next day however, I was more interested in what this weekend was going to be like and immediately sat down behind Amber in class and tapped her on the shoulder, ignoring the good morning that Chen gave me.

“About this weekend,” I muttered to her,

Amber smirked, “What about it?”

“When should I pick you up?” I asked,

She shrugged, “We’ll sort out the minor details later, but don’t tell anyone you’re going, I want to see their faces when they see the innocent looking new girl pulling up in your pimped out Audi,”

“Believe me, I got home faster than I thought I would,” I admitted to her, “My parents almost grilled me for being late home but I told them you showed me around town,”

Amber laughed, “What about this weekend?”

“I have the room with the balcony, don’t worry about it,” I smirked at her,

“Wow, what are you girls discussing?” Chen said from his table, “Enough to ignore me?”

I turned to look at him and feigned innocence, “Oh! Sorry Camel, were you there this entire time?”

“You know Sara,” Chen sighed, “You’re so mean, you’re lucky you’re hot,”

I snorted, “And if I wasn’t?”

“I don’t know,” He shrugged with a teasing smile, “I didn’t know where I was going with that one,”

“Yeah you never do,” Amber rolled her eyes,

                What I didn’t expect was that during P.E that afternoon, after successfully avoiding going into the cafeteria and not seeing Luhan at all, that he would in fact be in my P.E lesson, actually everyone was there.

Amber frowned at my expression, “What’s up?”

“Nothing,” I said to her bluntly, “I ju –”

“Sara!” Chen shouted from across the gym, forcing his voice to echo in the open space,

I cringed, “My god,” I turned to look at him in annoyance, “Why don’t you shout a little louder?! I don’t think Jupiter heard you!”

“Ah come on Sara!” He said as he ran towards me, “You know you love m

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mrsJAE_tvxqJYJ #1
Chapter 60: Well I see how many people root Sara with Sehun here,yeah we all fall for his caring side and I-love-you-more-than-anything acts...but we talk about love here,when you love someone if he hurts you,giving you pain,torturing you...in the end when he come begging your forgiveness your heart just melt the second you see him.You can't even mad at him, what you want is his happiness even you'll suffer...I experienced it before,your mind telling you to be realistic but your heart just don't listen...at that time,he is you world...your everything...and I understand authornim keep the ending this way...thumbs up authornim for this good story =)
saharboukattaya #2
Chapter 60: Is this really the end of this story... woow I feel really disappointed
. I tottaly didn't like the last chapter
Mongdear
#3
Chapter 60: hey i like your story, i've read some of your stories and i kind like of the part when you always mentioned the main girl character has light weight :-)

but, i little bit dissappointed with Luhan in this story, i know that he has his own problem but i feel like he has less struggle for Sara and for his life. i think you still can expose more stories/scenes between Sara and Luhan as the main character in this story, and tell more specifically about Luhan and Sara character. but the story is done and it's still good and i like the whole story and the happy ending too :-) thankyu, keep writing and good luck emm!
starlitnight #4
Chapter 60: This was a nice story, but in my opinion I wouldn't have chosen Luhan for her. Especially since he was basically toying with her with the "I love you but cant be with you so let me torture the both of us while I force kisses on you." That's unfair and I felt that sera was stronger than that. But what's done is done. Great fic with good details. I was just a bit disappointed with the ending

This is like when I watch kdramas, I always root for the guy that never gets the girl TT_TT
hasegawa_asuka #5
Chapter 60: Author nim, i like this story a lot as its very new i mean its racing abd your description is great. The character you shown are all lively but i have say, i like Sehun far more better than Luhan. Just like what Chansung said, i approve Sehun with Sara since Sehun truly is loving Sara and dedicated for his life in saving her no matter what... indeed, i think it is sad to see they are apart. Although He finally found Sulli but...its a bit odd but, well, Sara found Luhan first..thats a painful reality...to be true. Thx for writing us the story.
Leina1996 #6
Chapter 60: The ending was cute ;)
yooiris
#7
Chapter 59: That was harsh......
GoJangMi
#8
Chapter 59: TT-TT But Sehunniee.. OTL. After all that's happened you're still the 'second' lead. :((( Come here baby. I'll make you feel better.
Beti27 #9
Chapter 59: Heart shattered i kind of hoped she would end up with sehun but i guess that is how it normally goes :(:(