C5 - Part Two.

Parallel Lines
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Even after we had entered the club, I was bombarded with offers from the people I had already spoken to, so in a bid to escape them I apologized to Amber before running off to the bathroom.

“Stupid people,” I muttered as I washed my hands,

I heard a distinctive clicking noise before a deep cough was heard coming from the bathroom door, which confused me because I could have sworn I walked into the girls toilets.

I turned to see who it was and was shocked to see Luhan leaning against the bathroom door, with a not so pleasant expression, “Right, even though your face could pull off being in here, we all know better than that,” I moved to dry my hands,

“Sara,” He said my name as if it was butter, “We need to talk,”

“I’m sorry,” I turned to give him a sarcastic look, “Hulan was it?”

He frowned, “Look,” he pushed himself from the door and came towards me, “I meant everything I said during the summer,”

“Oh really?” I blinked at him, feigning confusion, “Did we meet this summer?”

He sighed, “Sara, stop it,” he snapped as he grabbed my wrist, “As you can see I didn’t exactly expect you to have the same secret I did,”

“Well,” I shrugged, “Why does that stop you?”

“It’s not just my secret,” Luhan said with a stern voice, “We really can’t be together,”

I felt my heart drop into the pit of my stomach, “Oh… if you came in here just to tell me that then I think I got the message when you pretended like you didn’t know me at all,”

“It doesn’t mean that I don’t want you,” he released my wrist and took my chin with his thumb and index finger,

I slapped his hand away, “I don’t work like that Luhan, whatever happened this summer was clearly a mistake, and after all you’re not the only one with secrets,”

“Don’t call it that,” he said with an icy tone, “It wasn’t a mistake!”

“So why are you acting like it?!” I snapped at him, “After that summer, and being forced to move I thought that I wasn’t allowed to have happiness but then I saw you at school – but you just ing ignored me, do you understand what that’s like?”

He pushed me against the wall, grasping my chin with his hand again, “You weren’t supposed to be here, I’m not allowed to be happy Sara but I don’t want to give you to anyone else,”

“That’s not your call,” I frowned at him, “I’m not your ing possession Luhan,”

“I ing know that,” he moved his face closer, “If it was simple, then I’d do it but it’s not, it’s not up to me,”

I shoved him, “Get away from me Luhan, and don’t play mind games with me,”

“I’m not playing mind games with you!” He shouted as he raked his hands through his hair, “! Why did you have to come here?!”

I felt anger coursing through my veins, “Well ing sorry I got caught sneaking out back in my home town, I’m so ing sorry that my presence is such a ing burden to you,” I shoved past him towards the door,

He grabbed my arm and swirled me around, p

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mrsJAE_tvxqJYJ #1
Chapter 60: Well I see how many people root Sara with Sehun here,yeah we all fall for his caring side and I-love-you-more-than-anything acts...but we talk about love here,when you love someone if he hurts you,giving you pain,torturing you...in the end when he come begging your forgiveness your heart just melt the second you see him.You can't even mad at him, what you want is his happiness even you'll suffer...I experienced it before,your mind telling you to be realistic but your heart just don't listen...at that time,he is you world...your everything...and I understand authornim keep the ending this way...thumbs up authornim for this good story =)
saharboukattaya #2
Chapter 60: Is this really the end of this story... woow I feel really disappointed
. I tottaly didn't like the last chapter
Mongdear
#3
Chapter 60: hey i like your story, i've read some of your stories and i kind like of the part when you always mentioned the main girl character has light weight :-)

but, i little bit dissappointed with Luhan in this story, i know that he has his own problem but i feel like he has less struggle for Sara and for his life. i think you still can expose more stories/scenes between Sara and Luhan as the main character in this story, and tell more specifically about Luhan and Sara character. but the story is done and it's still good and i like the whole story and the happy ending too :-) thankyu, keep writing and good luck emm!
starlitnight #4
Chapter 60: This was a nice story, but in my opinion I wouldn't have chosen Luhan for her. Especially since he was basically toying with her with the "I love you but cant be with you so let me torture the both of us while I force kisses on you." That's unfair and I felt that sera was stronger than that. But what's done is done. Great fic with good details. I was just a bit disappointed with the ending

This is like when I watch kdramas, I always root for the guy that never gets the girl TT_TT
hasegawa_asuka #5
Chapter 60: Author nim, i like this story a lot as its very new i mean its racing abd your description is great. The character you shown are all lively but i have say, i like Sehun far more better than Luhan. Just like what Chansung said, i approve Sehun with Sara since Sehun truly is loving Sara and dedicated for his life in saving her no matter what... indeed, i think it is sad to see they are apart. Although He finally found Sulli but...its a bit odd but, well, Sara found Luhan first..thats a painful reality...to be true. Thx for writing us the story.
Leina1996 #6
Chapter 60: The ending was cute ;)
yooiris
#7
Chapter 59: That was harsh......
GoJangMi
#8
Chapter 59: TT-TT But Sehunniee.. OTL. After all that's happened you're still the 'second' lead. :((( Come here baby. I'll make you feel better.
Beti27 #9
Chapter 59: Heart shattered i kind of hoped she would end up with sehun but i guess that is how it normally goes :(:(