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Parallel Lines
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                When I got home, Sehun was waiting for me to open my bedroom door so he could hug me for how successful it all was. He left shortly afterwards, complaining about a dull ache on his scar. When I closed the door and turned back around, I was startled to see Luhan leaning against the now closed balcony doors.

I locked my bedroom and raised an eyebrow, “What are you doing here?”

“I’ve spent two months,” He muttered, “Worrying to the point where I thought my heart was broken,”

I sighed, “I’m sorry,”

“My father called me,” he said as he slowly removed his shoes and jacket, “Do you know what he said to me?”

I blinked, “No?”

He moved towards me with a smirk, “I’m not engaged anymore,” he cupped my face, “I’m free because of you,” he placed his forehead to mine,

“Well you can’t be engaged to someone who’s going to a juvenile detention center for attempted murder on my life,” I laughed,

He caressed my face, bringing his hand up to brush my hair back behind my ear, “If I had known…”

“I know,” I told him, “No one did,”

He brought his thumb up to the scar on my eyebrow, “I don’t know what I’d do if I lost you,”

“It takes more than that to get rid of me Luhan,” I smiled at him, “I think you should know better by now,”

He smiled, “Well I won’t let you go again,” he cupped my face again, “This time I will fight for you,”

I reached up and wrapped my arms around his neck; instead of answering him I pulled his face closer to mine, pressing my lips to his, finally. He removed his hands from my face and wrapped them around my waist.

He smiled into the kiss as he lifted me, moving me towards the bed, letting us both fall. He released my lips and laughed to himself.

“I feel… so carefree,” He said as he tucked my hair behind my ear again,

I smiled at him, “Good,”

“I just hope it lasts,” He told me, “My father is sceptical, he said that he can’t trust his own judgement anymore when it comes to his own choices because it seems like no matter how hard he digs, people have a past that he can’t find,”

I shrugged, “That’s a good thing though,”

“I know,” He said, “Even if he does… I’ll tell him no, when… when you went off that barricade, I honestly felt like the world got a little

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mrsJAE_tvxqJYJ #1
Chapter 60: Well I see how many people root Sara with Sehun here,yeah we all fall for his caring side and I-love-you-more-than-anything acts...but we talk about love here,when you love someone if he hurts you,giving you pain,torturing you...in the end when he come begging your forgiveness your heart just melt the second you see him.You can't even mad at him, what you want is his happiness even you'll suffer...I experienced it before,your mind telling you to be realistic but your heart just don't listen...at that time,he is you world...your everything...and I understand authornim keep the ending this way...thumbs up authornim for this good story =)
saharboukattaya #2
Chapter 60: Is this really the end of this story... woow I feel really disappointed
. I tottaly didn't like the last chapter
Mongdear
#3
Chapter 60: hey i like your story, i've read some of your stories and i kind like of the part when you always mentioned the main girl character has light weight :-)

but, i little bit dissappointed with Luhan in this story, i know that he has his own problem but i feel like he has less struggle for Sara and for his life. i think you still can expose more stories/scenes between Sara and Luhan as the main character in this story, and tell more specifically about Luhan and Sara character. but the story is done and it's still good and i like the whole story and the happy ending too :-) thankyu, keep writing and good luck emm!
starlitnight #4
Chapter 60: This was a nice story, but in my opinion I wouldn't have chosen Luhan for her. Especially since he was basically toying with her with the "I love you but cant be with you so let me torture the both of us while I force kisses on you." That's unfair and I felt that sera was stronger than that. But what's done is done. Great fic with good details. I was just a bit disappointed with the ending

This is like when I watch kdramas, I always root for the guy that never gets the girl TT_TT
hasegawa_asuka #5
Chapter 60: Author nim, i like this story a lot as its very new i mean its racing abd your description is great. The character you shown are all lively but i have say, i like Sehun far more better than Luhan. Just like what Chansung said, i approve Sehun with Sara since Sehun truly is loving Sara and dedicated for his life in saving her no matter what... indeed, i think it is sad to see they are apart. Although He finally found Sulli but...its a bit odd but, well, Sara found Luhan first..thats a painful reality...to be true. Thx for writing us the story.
Leina1996 #6
Chapter 60: The ending was cute ;)
yooiris
#7
Chapter 59: That was harsh......
GoJangMi
#8
Chapter 59: TT-TT But Sehunniee.. OTL. After all that's happened you're still the 'second' lead. :((( Come here baby. I'll make you feel better.
Beti27 #9
Chapter 59: Heart shattered i kind of hoped she would end up with sehun but i guess that is how it normally goes :(:(