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Parallel Lines
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                Three days after Christmas, and we all met up at Amber’s garage, I wore my new jewellery with pride and every time one of the guys noticed their gifts, they smiled at me. But my eyes were constantly on Luhan and the fact that he had brought me a Cartier love ring.

“What are you all doing for new year’s?” Amber asked as she checked out my car,

Kris shrugged, “I think my parents are going to some event, but I’m really not sure,”

“Okay let me rephrase that,” Amber rolled her eyes as she stood up straight, “Who is free for New Years?” Everyone raised their hands and Amber sighed, “Then let’s do something together,”

“Sounds good to me,” Chanyeol wrapped an arm around my shoulder, “Especially if my little –”

Kai pulled Chanyeol away from me, “Yours?”

Chanyeol coughed awkwardly, “Uh I meant ours,”

I sighed, “Goodness,”

“So what do you have in mind?” D.O asked Amber,

Amber shrugged, “We could throw a party at one of the garages,”

“I have a better idea,” Suho stood up and smoothed out his shirt, “I have a free house, but you guys can’t make a mess,”

“Well then party at yours,” Chen smirked,

I rolled my eyes as I pulled out my phone which was going off, walking away from them as I answered it, “Hello?”

“Sara!” Jimin’s voice came through the phone, almost deafening me in the process.

I blinked harshly, “Ow, what the hell? You almost deafened me!”

“I-I…” Jimin stuttered,

I went rigid, “You’re beginning to scare me,”

“Sara please… we… we got into a fight and they won’t stop,” Jimin said as he panted down the phone,

My mind went blank, “Where are you?” I moved towards my car, “Tell me where you are right now!”

“The abandoned car park… near –” The line went dead,

Sehun frowned, “Sara what’s wrong?”

“I have to go,” I shoved my phone into my pocket as I opened the car door, “My brother is in trouble,”

“Wait what?” Luhan stared at me in shock, “Wait Sara we could help,”

                I wasn’t thinking straight as I grabbed the bat from the other side of the garage and got into my car, shoving the bat into the passenger seat, ignoring the guys completely before I backed out of Amber’s garage.

                My phone constantly buzzed in my trousers as I basically sped across town towards the only abandoned car park I knew. No one was going to with my family, I noticed seven figures in the parking lot, some of them were crouching, and others were holding various places whilst another group of guys advanced on th

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mrsJAE_tvxqJYJ #1
Chapter 60: Well I see how many people root Sara with Sehun here,yeah we all fall for his caring side and I-love-you-more-than-anything acts...but we talk about love here,when you love someone if he hurts you,giving you pain,torturing you...in the end when he come begging your forgiveness your heart just melt the second you see him.You can't even mad at him, what you want is his happiness even you'll suffer...I experienced it before,your mind telling you to be realistic but your heart just don't listen...at that time,he is you world...your everything...and I understand authornim keep the ending this way...thumbs up authornim for this good story =)
saharboukattaya #2
Chapter 60: Is this really the end of this story... woow I feel really disappointed
. I tottaly didn't like the last chapter
Mongdear
#3
Chapter 60: hey i like your story, i've read some of your stories and i kind like of the part when you always mentioned the main girl character has light weight :-)

but, i little bit dissappointed with Luhan in this story, i know that he has his own problem but i feel like he has less struggle for Sara and for his life. i think you still can expose more stories/scenes between Sara and Luhan as the main character in this story, and tell more specifically about Luhan and Sara character. but the story is done and it's still good and i like the whole story and the happy ending too :-) thankyu, keep writing and good luck emm!
starlitnight #4
Chapter 60: This was a nice story, but in my opinion I wouldn't have chosen Luhan for her. Especially since he was basically toying with her with the "I love you but cant be with you so let me torture the both of us while I force kisses on you." That's unfair and I felt that sera was stronger than that. But what's done is done. Great fic with good details. I was just a bit disappointed with the ending

This is like when I watch kdramas, I always root for the guy that never gets the girl TT_TT
hasegawa_asuka #5
Chapter 60: Author nim, i like this story a lot as its very new i mean its racing abd your description is great. The character you shown are all lively but i have say, i like Sehun far more better than Luhan. Just like what Chansung said, i approve Sehun with Sara since Sehun truly is loving Sara and dedicated for his life in saving her no matter what... indeed, i think it is sad to see they are apart. Although He finally found Sulli but...its a bit odd but, well, Sara found Luhan first..thats a painful reality...to be true. Thx for writing us the story.
Leina1996 #6
Chapter 60: The ending was cute ;)
yooiris
#7
Chapter 59: That was harsh......
GoJangMi
#8
Chapter 59: TT-TT But Sehunniee.. OTL. After all that's happened you're still the 'second' lead. :((( Come here baby. I'll make you feel better.
Beti27 #9
Chapter 59: Heart shattered i kind of hoped she would end up with sehun but i guess that is how it normally goes :(:(