C49 - Part Two.

Parallel Lines
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                It was as if everything was going in slow motion for all of the drivers, including Luhan who was literally just behind Sara as the barricade broke and she went off the side. He parked his car to the side quickly before he looked over in horror as Sara’s car spun onto the roof, crashing with the side of the steep hill, before it just kept tumbling,

“No!” Luhan shouted, “!”

Kai came to a stop behind Luhan’s car, “Don’t ing tell me she went over Luhan!”

Luhan grabbed his hair in horror, “Oh my god,”

Kai looked over the edge and felt the air out of him as Sara’s car came to a stop at the bottom, upside down, “Sara speak to me!” he pleaded, “ing say something!”

All the other cars continued to go past, now that there had been an accident they had to leave, which meant all the others too, the only person who refused to leave was Sehun as he sped up the hill, his heart pounding in his chest as he reached the top, he almost collided into the back of Kai’s car as he looked over the edge and saw the car, motionless but ruined.

Sara’s voice, who they desperately wanted to hear in their ears right now, was nowhere to be heard.

Sehun couldn’t just stand there, “,” he went to Kai and handed him the keys, “Get someone to take my car,” He moved towards the broken barricade,

Luhan stared at Sehun, “What are you going to do?”

“I’m not ing standing here like this whilst she’s down there!” Sehun jabbed a finger,

Kai frowned, “Sehun,” he walked towards him, “You can’t go down there it’s ing dangerous!”

“ing watch me,” Sehun snapped as he climbed down from the broke barricade, he slid for a while before he managed to grab onto branch,

                Slowly but surely he made his descent towards Sara’s car, he couldn’t see any movement at all and people were going ape in his ear.

Luhan paced back and forth, “Oh god,”

Kai turned to glare at Luhan, “What the happened?”

“I-I don’t know,” Luhan shook his head, “Jackson came up too strong, she hit the back of his car and then the tunnel, oh god,”

Kai grabbed Luhan, “Snap the

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mrsJAE_tvxqJYJ #1
Chapter 60: Well I see how many people root Sara with Sehun here,yeah we all fall for his caring side and I-love-you-more-than-anything acts...but we talk about love here,when you love someone if he hurts you,giving you pain,torturing you...in the end when he come begging your forgiveness your heart just melt the second you see him.You can't even mad at him, what you want is his happiness even you'll suffer...I experienced it before,your mind telling you to be realistic but your heart just don't listen...at that time,he is you world...your everything...and I understand authornim keep the ending this way...thumbs up authornim for this good story =)
saharboukattaya #2
Chapter 60: Is this really the end of this story... woow I feel really disappointed
. I tottaly didn't like the last chapter
Mongdear
#3
Chapter 60: hey i like your story, i've read some of your stories and i kind like of the part when you always mentioned the main girl character has light weight :-)

but, i little bit dissappointed with Luhan in this story, i know that he has his own problem but i feel like he has less struggle for Sara and for his life. i think you still can expose more stories/scenes between Sara and Luhan as the main character in this story, and tell more specifically about Luhan and Sara character. but the story is done and it's still good and i like the whole story and the happy ending too :-) thankyu, keep writing and good luck emm!
starlitnight #4
Chapter 60: This was a nice story, but in my opinion I wouldn't have chosen Luhan for her. Especially since he was basically toying with her with the "I love you but cant be with you so let me torture the both of us while I force kisses on you." That's unfair and I felt that sera was stronger than that. But what's done is done. Great fic with good details. I was just a bit disappointed with the ending

This is like when I watch kdramas, I always root for the guy that never gets the girl TT_TT
hasegawa_asuka #5
Chapter 60: Author nim, i like this story a lot as its very new i mean its racing abd your description is great. The character you shown are all lively but i have say, i like Sehun far more better than Luhan. Just like what Chansung said, i approve Sehun with Sara since Sehun truly is loving Sara and dedicated for his life in saving her no matter what... indeed, i think it is sad to see they are apart. Although He finally found Sulli but...its a bit odd but, well, Sara found Luhan first..thats a painful reality...to be true. Thx for writing us the story.
Leina1996 #6
Chapter 60: The ending was cute ;)
yooiris
#7
Chapter 59: That was harsh......
GoJangMi
#8
Chapter 59: TT-TT But Sehunniee.. OTL. After all that's happened you're still the 'second' lead. :((( Come here baby. I'll make you feel better.
Beti27 #9
Chapter 59: Heart shattered i kind of hoped she would end up with sehun but i guess that is how it normally goes :(:(