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Parallel Lines
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A/N - Double update incase you haven't seen.

 

                Amber refused to leave me alone whenever Luhan was near me, so even before the races had started the next day and we watched as Kris raced from the tablet that Amber held with Luhan peering over our shoulders, she refused to leave us both alone.

“You’re going to be up against Leeteuk,” Amber said to me as we watched Kris over take a black Mercedes, “I don’t need to tell you to be careful do I?”

“I’ll be fine,” I muttered, “I thought he was a part of the duo race,”

“Yeah he changed yesterday,” Luhan spoke up,

Amber scoffed, “He’s trying to psyche you out Sara,”

“Whatever,” I shrugged, “He doesn’t know what he’s ing with,”

Lay raised an eyebrow at me, “Your swearing is getting worse,”

“Sue me for it,” I muttered to him,

Sehun jogged up to me with a smile, “You’ll be racing with Suho, he’s looking forward to it but we just found out that Leeteuk has moved to the same race,”

“I’ll be careful Sehun I promise,” I smiled at him,

Tao sighed, “Are you ever going to be that nice to us?”

“Maybe if you learnt a lesson or two from Sehun on how to not be annoying then I could try,” I ,

Sehun laughed, “Well we’ll be watching out for you too, but… we’re also hoping that Suho wins,”

“Of course, when it’s on the track I completely understand,” I smirked at him, “You’ll do well out there during your race right?”

He nodded, “Of course,”

“Since when did you two get so close?” Luhan asked with an annoyed look on his face,

I didn’t even spare him a glance when I answered him, “Not everything I do is revolved around you guys,”

“Alright I’ll get back to the others,” Sehun muttered, “D.O and the others say hello, and good luck,”

I nodded, “Tell Suho I’ll see him on the track,”

“I will do,” He smiled at me before turning to look at the others, “See you guys later!” he jogged back towards his own crew,

Xiumin sighed, “Well at least the feud between us lot seems to have died down,”

“Probably the only good thing to happen,” I said to him, “How is Kris doing?”

“Actually he’s winning,” Amber informed me with a smile, “I’m surprised he’s so focused since he can hear everything we’re saying,”

“Shut up,” Kris’ voice came through our ears,

Lay came to stand beside me and eyed Leeteuk who was on the other side of the road, “This guy won’t stop looking at you,”

“Let him look,” I scoffed as I walked towards my car, “It’s my turn next right?”

“Yeah,” Amber muttered as she concentrated on the tablet,

Luhan followed me to my car without me realising it, so when I sat down in the driver’s seat, he stopped me from shutting the door and covered his mic, whispering, “Sara, I’m sorry about our date,”

“Luhan,” I looked up at him in annoyance as I covered my own mic, “Don’t say sorry to me anymore,”

He sighed, “Good luck out there,” he shut the door for me and reluctantly walked back to t

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mrsJAE_tvxqJYJ #1
Chapter 60: Well I see how many people root Sara with Sehun here,yeah we all fall for his caring side and I-love-you-more-than-anything acts...but we talk about love here,when you love someone if he hurts you,giving you pain,torturing you...in the end when he come begging your forgiveness your heart just melt the second you see him.You can't even mad at him, what you want is his happiness even you'll suffer...I experienced it before,your mind telling you to be realistic but your heart just don't listen...at that time,he is you world...your everything...and I understand authornim keep the ending this way...thumbs up authornim for this good story =)
saharboukattaya #2
Chapter 60: Is this really the end of this story... woow I feel really disappointed
. I tottaly didn't like the last chapter
Mongdear
#3
Chapter 60: hey i like your story, i've read some of your stories and i kind like of the part when you always mentioned the main girl character has light weight :-)

but, i little bit dissappointed with Luhan in this story, i know that he has his own problem but i feel like he has less struggle for Sara and for his life. i think you still can expose more stories/scenes between Sara and Luhan as the main character in this story, and tell more specifically about Luhan and Sara character. but the story is done and it's still good and i like the whole story and the happy ending too :-) thankyu, keep writing and good luck emm!
starlitnight #4
Chapter 60: This was a nice story, but in my opinion I wouldn't have chosen Luhan for her. Especially since he was basically toying with her with the "I love you but cant be with you so let me torture the both of us while I force kisses on you." That's unfair and I felt that sera was stronger than that. But what's done is done. Great fic with good details. I was just a bit disappointed with the ending

This is like when I watch kdramas, I always root for the guy that never gets the girl TT_TT
hasegawa_asuka #5
Chapter 60: Author nim, i like this story a lot as its very new i mean its racing abd your description is great. The character you shown are all lively but i have say, i like Sehun far more better than Luhan. Just like what Chansung said, i approve Sehun with Sara since Sehun truly is loving Sara and dedicated for his life in saving her no matter what... indeed, i think it is sad to see they are apart. Although He finally found Sulli but...its a bit odd but, well, Sara found Luhan first..thats a painful reality...to be true. Thx for writing us the story.
Leina1996 #6
Chapter 60: The ending was cute ;)
yooiris
#7
Chapter 59: That was harsh......
GoJangMi
#8
Chapter 59: TT-TT But Sehunniee.. OTL. After all that's happened you're still the 'second' lead. :((( Come here baby. I'll make you feel better.
Beti27 #9
Chapter 59: Heart shattered i kind of hoped she would end up with sehun but i guess that is how it normally goes :(:(