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Parallel Lines
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                The next day I didn’t get out of bed until about noon, so I grabbed a quick bite to eat before I grabbed my swim suit and headed off in search of the spa, leaving everything but my keys and some money with me. I got changed into my swim suit and shoved the keys, along with my money inside of the locker, taking the locker key and wrapping it around my ankle before I moved towards the pool.

My jaw practically dropped, not only at the overly large and amazing pool, but it seemed like everyone had the same idea.

Baekhyun who was lying on an inflatable Lillo, looked over at me, his eyes widened before he fell off it and into the water, he came back up gasping for air as he stared at me in shock, “H-Holy ,”

“What?” Lay frowned before he turned to look at me; he instantly choked on his drink, “Sara?”

I frowned, “Are you serious? You’re all here?”

“What the hell is that?!” Chanyeol stared at me, “Can you wear any less?”

“Come here so I can drown you, not only for that comment but for making me crash yesterday!” I snapped at him,

Suho turned to look at Chanyeol, “You… it was you?”

“U-Uh…” Chanyeol panicked,

Kai smirked at me, “Looking good Angel,”

“I’m going back upstairs,” I turned around and began to walk,

“Ah, no you don’t!” Tao said as he fire man lifted me over his shoulder, “Wow you’re surprisingly light,”

I gasped, “Tao! Put me down!”

Sehun glared at Tao, “Put her down,”

“Easy,” Tao winked, “I will,” he walked towards the edge of the pool,

Luhan frowned, “Tao… don’t throw her in,”

“Who said I was?” Tao asked before he stepped off the side of the pool, submerging us both in water.

I pushed myself far away from him as I swam under the water, under the Lillo that Baekhyun had managed to clamber back onto and to the other side of the pool before I came back up for air, “,”

“So Luhan tells me that you had hot chocolate with some stranger yesterday,” Kris mutters with a not so impressed face, “Care to share?”

I scoffed, “Yunho is fine,” I told them, “He helped me with the cut on my head you weirdo’s,”

“Oh so it has a name?” Chen raised an eyebrow,

I glared at him, “I really hate you all do you know that?”

“All?” D.O blinked,

I laughed, “You know when I say all it doesn’t include you,”

“And me?” Xiumin smirked,

I rolled my eyes, “Of course,”

Amber dove into the pool, swimming up until she was beside me, “Well I’m glad I’m not the only one here now,”

“Round two?” I asked her,

Lay frowned, “Round two what?”

Amber laughed, “Hell yeah,”

I swam backwards a little before I splashed the four in front of me which consisted of Sehun, Kai, Luhan, Suho unfortunately, and almost getting Kris in the proce

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mrsJAE_tvxqJYJ #1
Chapter 60: Well I see how many people root Sara with Sehun here,yeah we all fall for his caring side and I-love-you-more-than-anything acts...but we talk about love here,when you love someone if he hurts you,giving you pain,torturing you...in the end when he come begging your forgiveness your heart just melt the second you see him.You can't even mad at him, what you want is his happiness even you'll suffer...I experienced it before,your mind telling you to be realistic but your heart just don't listen...at that time,he is you world...your everything...and I understand authornim keep the ending this way...thumbs up authornim for this good story =)
saharboukattaya #2
Chapter 60: Is this really the end of this story... woow I feel really disappointed
. I tottaly didn't like the last chapter
Mongdear
#3
Chapter 60: hey i like your story, i've read some of your stories and i kind like of the part when you always mentioned the main girl character has light weight :-)

but, i little bit dissappointed with Luhan in this story, i know that he has his own problem but i feel like he has less struggle for Sara and for his life. i think you still can expose more stories/scenes between Sara and Luhan as the main character in this story, and tell more specifically about Luhan and Sara character. but the story is done and it's still good and i like the whole story and the happy ending too :-) thankyu, keep writing and good luck emm!
starlitnight #4
Chapter 60: This was a nice story, but in my opinion I wouldn't have chosen Luhan for her. Especially since he was basically toying with her with the "I love you but cant be with you so let me torture the both of us while I force kisses on you." That's unfair and I felt that sera was stronger than that. But what's done is done. Great fic with good details. I was just a bit disappointed with the ending

This is like when I watch kdramas, I always root for the guy that never gets the girl TT_TT
hasegawa_asuka #5
Chapter 60: Author nim, i like this story a lot as its very new i mean its racing abd your description is great. The character you shown are all lively but i have say, i like Sehun far more better than Luhan. Just like what Chansung said, i approve Sehun with Sara since Sehun truly is loving Sara and dedicated for his life in saving her no matter what... indeed, i think it is sad to see they are apart. Although He finally found Sulli but...its a bit odd but, well, Sara found Luhan first..thats a painful reality...to be true. Thx for writing us the story.
Leina1996 #6
Chapter 60: The ending was cute ;)
yooiris
#7
Chapter 59: That was harsh......
GoJangMi
#8
Chapter 59: TT-TT But Sehunniee.. OTL. After all that's happened you're still the 'second' lead. :((( Come here baby. I'll make you feel better.
Beti27 #9
Chapter 59: Heart shattered i kind of hoped she would end up with sehun but i guess that is how it normally goes :(:(