Tear #4

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Kyungsoo's POV

 

"I really hate you, you know that right?!" Luhan bitterly spat at me as we rode on the back of our horses.

"Hey, I know your angry but calm down. That wasn't my fault!" I stifled a giggle as I replied back.

 

 

Narrator's POV

 

A now fuming Prince hauled his horse to a stop. He then hopped off, and walked to the middle of the open field before lying on his back. His friend followed suit not long after.

Still not letting his friend off the hook so easily, Luhan shouted, "What are you talking about? Of course it was your fault!"

 

>>>Flashback<<<

Luhan's POV

 

Crap! Where in the world did Kyungsoo go?! Aish, that bastard of a friend must have escaped without me! But lucky for me, I know how to swim. Without a second thought, I grabbed a piece of the wooden floorboard, and jumped off the tipping ship and into the the ocean.

Upon landing in the water safely, I thought of ways to kill that bastard. Oooh, Kyungsoo~ Kyungsoo, Kyungsoo, Kyungsoo. You messed with the wrong Prince. You're so going to get it once I get my hands on you!

>>>End of Flashback<<<

 

"Oh my gosh! How many times do I have to say that it wasn't my fault! I can't control the weather?! You're talking as if I conjured up the storm!" Kyungsoo defended.

"No, I wasn't talking about that, you Buffoon!" Luhan argued.

"Don't call me a buffoon, you playboy!" Kyungsoo spat out, now getting irritated with his friend.

"Excuse me~ Since when was it a crime to be handsome?! It's not my fault I was born with a handsome face that allures females," Luhan countered with an arrogan

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Faedra
#1
I like the adaptation although it isn't entirely an adaptation, I love it. I read this a long time ago. And stopped at some point, never getting to finish. I hope to finish reading this very soon! I especially like the way you included their songs into your story.
Squishysoo_12
#2
Chapter 39: Im late but this is beautiful
Sonja_Nguyen #3
Gonna read this ^^
bteasuga
#4
Chapter 4: luhan?where is prince Luhan?
AeSunset
#5
Chapter 39: Oh my,I love it!!! Thank you so much for writing it..its amazing,wonderful and asdfghjkl..good job and keep it up!!!
SNSD1203 #6
Chapter 36: OMG! I almost cried when she died!..Felt as if one member in exo had to write this chapter it would DEFINITELY be Chen!..you're so cruel
sukasuka #7
Chapter 19: what is an eskimo kiss? :3 enjoy reading it so far but I feel bad for Luhan.... I hope she gets her voice back soon!
CatarinaDKS13
#8
Chapter 39: Oh . My . Dear . Lord .
You don't even imagine how much I love this story . I read it in one go and seriously , I regret nothing .
to be honest , I almost cried when Ariel "died" . Damn . I thought she was gone for good and I was so , but so sad .
and also , this fic has Kyungsoo as the male lead and . Just . he's my ultimate , ULTIMATE bias . I just love this .
I love you , chinja , forever .
this story is just beautiful . and that happy ending , OH GOD OH GOD TT-TT I CANNOT HOLD THE FEELS ANYMORE I CANNOT- *drowns in feels*
you guys , I sarang you *sobs* TT-TT
imanina #9
Chapter 10: Awwww luhan :--(
Jazzilollies #10
I L.O.V.E THIS BOOK! YOU SHOULD SERIOUSLY MAKE A MOVIE OR SOMETHING... only if you could... BUT ANYWAYS I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS BOOK!