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Suffering - Jess Lee (open in new window)

Narrator's POV

 

 

Step by step. Breath by breath. Ariel etched forward to Kyungsoo's bedroom door frame, trying her best to not make a sound. She could hear her heart pounding in her ears as its erratic beats nearly caused her to have a heart attack. When she regained composure, Ariel used the wall to support her balance as she continued to tiptoe. She came to an abrupt stop when she finally arrived at the front of Kyungsoo's room.

 

With a deep breathe in and out, Ariel slowly wrapped her fingers around the doorknob. Feeling extremely overwhelmed and conflicted, the young girl tightly shut her eyes closed as she gently pushed the door open. Okay. On the count of three, I'll open my eyes. one... two... thre— Her right hand quickly flew over to cover the gasp from escaping past her lips.

 

Her heartbeat soared to new speeds at the sight before her eyes. How... What...is... Why... Ariel was completely stunned and unable to form any coherent thoughts. Her breathing accelerated while her legs trembled and threatened to give way. "H-How could...he," she questioned silently to herself.

 

She painfully tore her gaze away from the horrid scene. Kyungsoo and Annabelle were cozily cuddling together on the same bed. He had his arms around her waist while she laid her head on his chest. Ariel didn't want to cry but this was just too much for her to handle. Call her naive and a hopeless romantic, but she still tried to hold optimistic thoughts that someway, somehow, she was going to have her happy ending with her prince.

 

But it was quite evident to her now that, that was not going to happen...that she was not going to get her happily ever after.

 

She placed a hand on her chest, and gripped the cloth right above her heart. What is this? Is this what love makes people feel? She felt as if her heart had been ripped out of her chest and torn into a million tiny pieces. Is this what people feel when their heart breaks? She couldn't help but laugh at this thought. Well, there's a first for everything, right?

 

Ariel clasped her hands together before stepping next to the bed. She quietly scanned Kyungsoo's sleeping figure with her eyes. He looked so serene and peaceful that she just couldn't look away. She was once again mesmerized by the prince in

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Faedra
#1
I like the adaptation although it isn't entirely an adaptation, I love it. I read this a long time ago. And stopped at some point, never getting to finish. I hope to finish reading this very soon! I especially like the way you included their songs into your story.
Squishysoo_12
#2
Chapter 39: Im late but this is beautiful
Sonja_Nguyen #3
Gonna read this ^^
bteasuga
#4
Chapter 4: luhan?where is prince Luhan?
AeSunset
#5
Chapter 39: Oh my,I love it!!! Thank you so much for writing it..its amazing,wonderful and asdfghjkl..good job and keep it up!!!
SNSD1203 #6
Chapter 36: OMG! I almost cried when she died!..Felt as if one member in exo had to write this chapter it would DEFINITELY be Chen!..you're so cruel
sukasuka #7
Chapter 19: what is an eskimo kiss? :3 enjoy reading it so far but I feel bad for Luhan.... I hope she gets her voice back soon!
CatarinaDKS13
#8
Chapter 39: Oh . My . Dear . Lord .
You don't even imagine how much I love this story . I read it in one go and seriously , I regret nothing .
to be honest , I almost cried when Ariel "died" . Damn . I thought she was gone for good and I was so , but so sad .
and also , this fic has Kyungsoo as the male lead and . Just . he's my ultimate , ULTIMATE bias . I just love this .
I love you , chinja , forever .
this story is just beautiful . and that happy ending , OH GOD OH GOD TT-TT I CANNOT HOLD THE FEELS ANYMORE I CANNOT- *drowns in feels*
you guys , I sarang you *sobs* TT-TT
imanina #9
Chapter 10: Awwww luhan :--(
Jazzilollies #10
I L.O.V.E THIS BOOK! YOU SHOULD SERIOUSLY MAKE A MOVIE OR SOMETHING... only if you could... BUT ANYWAYS I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS BOOK!