Tear #19

♥ Baby, Don't Cry
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Luhan's POV

 

Aish! I slowly approached the open field deep inside the forest. I totally screwed up! You happy now, Luhan?! "You happy now?!" I screamed aloud. You totally messed up your only chance with the Maiden! How can you do this to yourself?

 

"Gahhh," I loudly sighed as my back collasped on the grass. After letting out another frustrated sigh, I started grazing my hand across the grass. Feeling the grass strands going through my fingers reminded me of Maiden's long luscious black hair. My mind, numb from compounding consequences of one simple mistake, was replete with annoyance towards myself. 

 

Why? Why am I such an idiot? Only sighs came out as I stared up at the sky, trying to tranquilize my troubled mind. I fixated my gaze on a particular star that I laid my eyes on. It wasn't just any star, it was somehow... different. It's like one of those moments where you're just gravitated towards something with this unknown natural force, where dimensions of time cease to exist. I effortlessly stared at the star. In time, I realized what made it different from others; its brilliant light. While other stars were clumped together shining in amass, this star was all alone. The lone star glistened persistently; its beauty eclipsing the others. How precious and elegant it is. I thought how sweet the star was, even though it was alone, it was shining brightly as though it had a deep longing for love. In the end, I couldn't help but be mesmerized by the star as it gave me a faint glow of hope inside. 

 

Staring at the star, for some reason, it reminded me of someone. I couldn't point my finger exactly at who, however, the name was hanging on the tip of my tongue. After a long moment of deep thought, the name came into my mind. The Maiden! The Maiden is my star! She has always been my star. With her gleaming beauty and shy but bubbly personality, she captured my attention as well as my heart, and refused to let it go. She has me trapped, but I don't mind. The corners of my lips arched upwards.

 

Startled by sudden little flashing lights, I snapped out of my reverie. Realizing they were only fireflies, I bursted out in laughter. The scene back when I took Maiden to this place kept on repeating in my head. Oh Maiden, what have you done to me?

 

Then the scene back at the club played again. The words I told Luhan echoed in my ears. She's special~ Yes, the Maiden is most definitely special! And that is exactly why I can't give up on her! Yes, I need to make things right. I nodded to myself in certainty. I will go first thing in the morning! With that thought, I my side and closed my eyes as a goofy smile lit my face.

 

 

Your POV

 

I barely finished my breakfast when Luhan bursted into the dining room. He looked exhausted as he inhaled and exhaled through his mouth. "We...h-ha-have to...talk," he said in between breaths. Dumbfounded, all I did was

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Faedra
#1
I like the adaptation although it isn't entirely an adaptation, I love it. I read this a long time ago. And stopped at some point, never getting to finish. I hope to finish reading this very soon! I especially like the way you included their songs into your story.
Squishysoo_12
#2
Chapter 39: Im late but this is beautiful
Sonja_Nguyen #3
Gonna read this ^^
bteasuga
#4
Chapter 4: luhan?where is prince Luhan?
AeSunset
#5
Chapter 39: Oh my,I love it!!! Thank you so much for writing it..its amazing,wonderful and asdfghjkl..good job and keep it up!!!
SNSD1203 #6
Chapter 36: OMG! I almost cried when she died!..Felt as if one member in exo had to write this chapter it would DEFINITELY be Chen!..you're so cruel
sukasuka #7
Chapter 19: what is an eskimo kiss? :3 enjoy reading it so far but I feel bad for Luhan.... I hope she gets her voice back soon!
CatarinaDKS13
#8
Chapter 39: Oh . My . Dear . Lord .
You don't even imagine how much I love this story . I read it in one go and seriously , I regret nothing .
to be honest , I almost cried when Ariel "died" . Damn . I thought she was gone for good and I was so , but so sad .
and also , this fic has Kyungsoo as the male lead and . Just . he's my ultimate , ULTIMATE bias . I just love this .
I love you , chinja , forever .
this story is just beautiful . and that happy ending , OH GOD OH GOD TT-TT I CANNOT HOLD THE FEELS ANYMORE I CANNOT- *drowns in feels*
you guys , I sarang you *sobs* TT-TT
imanina #9
Chapter 10: Awwww luhan :--(
Jazzilollies #10
I L.O.V.E THIS BOOK! YOU SHOULD SERIOUSLY MAKE A MOVIE OR SOMETHING... only if you could... BUT ANYWAYS I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS BOOK!