Tear #3

♥ Baby, Don't Cry
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I never believed in those stories about time passing in slow motion, until now when I saw the ship tilt. Everything seemed to warp with the sluggish passage of time. The excruciating screams of helpless men scratched my inner ears. I could see men plunging into the violent waves. I froze when I noticed the young man, with the divine voice, on the edge of the ship.

With a fast-beating heart, I tried to swim to him.

“Ariel, you can’t!” Flounder exclaimed as he stopped me.

“Flounder! Please, let me go. I can't let him die!” I desperately shouted back at Flounder.

“Ariel, we have to go. We've been out for way too long, and the storm is only going to get worse!” Flounder sternly explained as he held my arm.

I shock his grip off my arm as I swam straight for the ship, totally disregarding his wishes.

Panic overcame my body as the young man was nowhere to be seen. Never in my life have I ever been so distressed. With great worry, I swam around the ship, and seeing men drowning all over. As much as I would like to save them all, I couldn't. Closing my eyes momentarily, I prayed with all my heart, tightly clasping my hands together. Please let the young man be alive. After I opened my eyes, I searched for the young man again only to find him barely staying afloat. That was when a giant wave came crashing down on him.

Stunned, I quickly swam over to his now unconcious body, and wrapped my arms around his torso to pull him to shore. Despite the turbulent winds and raging waves, I managed to swim all the way to shore with all the strength left inside of my body. As I carried on, I continued praying silently for the safety of everyone in the ocean, but most of all, for the young man in my arms.

 

 

When we got to the shore, I sat on the sand and lied him down gently on my lap. For a while, I stayed like that, just observing and memorizing his whole being. The way his long eyelashes lightly curled up, along with his dark brown hair, an

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Faedra
#1
I like the adaptation although it isn't entirely an adaptation, I love it. I read this a long time ago. And stopped at some point, never getting to finish. I hope to finish reading this very soon! I especially like the way you included their songs into your story.
Squishysoo_12
#2
Chapter 39: Im late but this is beautiful
Sonja_Nguyen #3
Gonna read this ^^
bteasuga
#4
Chapter 4: luhan?where is prince Luhan?
AeSunset
#5
Chapter 39: Oh my,I love it!!! Thank you so much for writing it..its amazing,wonderful and asdfghjkl..good job and keep it up!!!
SNSD1203 #6
Chapter 36: OMG! I almost cried when she died!..Felt as if one member in exo had to write this chapter it would DEFINITELY be Chen!..you're so cruel
sukasuka #7
Chapter 19: what is an eskimo kiss? :3 enjoy reading it so far but I feel bad for Luhan.... I hope she gets her voice back soon!
CatarinaDKS13
#8
Chapter 39: Oh . My . Dear . Lord .
You don't even imagine how much I love this story . I read it in one go and seriously , I regret nothing .
to be honest , I almost cried when Ariel "died" . Damn . I thought she was gone for good and I was so , but so sad .
and also , this fic has Kyungsoo as the male lead and . Just . he's my ultimate , ULTIMATE bias . I just love this .
I love you , chinja , forever .
this story is just beautiful . and that happy ending , OH GOD OH GOD TT-TT I CANNOT HOLD THE FEELS ANYMORE I CANNOT- *drowns in feels*
you guys , I sarang you *sobs* TT-TT
imanina #9
Chapter 10: Awwww luhan :--(
Jazzilollies #10
I L.O.V.E THIS BOOK! YOU SHOULD SERIOUSLY MAKE A MOVIE OR SOMETHING... only if you could... BUT ANYWAYS I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS BOOK!