Tear #10

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Luhan's POV

 

As he left with her secured in his arms, I couldn't contain my anger any longer. Balling my hands into tight fists, I started pounding a couch cushion. Who is he to give me advice on treating women? My body was now trembling in fury. Who does he think he is?!

Unable to calm myself down, I decided to confront the problem. I got up from my sitting position, and made my way upstairs. I gently caressed the door knob in my hand, and slowly entered her room. To my surprise, neither of them were present. This only ignited my anger as I was on the brink of pure madness. I stormed out of the door, and headed straight for Kyungsoo's room.

Upon kicking the door open, I was surprised to see the prince's face a few inches away from the maiden's. What does he think he's doing?! Without a second thought, I immediately grabbed his arm and dragged him out of there.

"What are you doing? Are you insane? Let go of me right now!" Kyunngsoo yelled as I continued to drag him until we exited the palace.

I started the relax as I felt a light breeze brush against my face. As I finally released his arm, I mustered all my strength to calmly say, "You know what's funny? I could ask you that exact same question." Though my words were calm, I had a bitter expression on my face.

"What kind of nonsense are you spouting out now?" Kyungsoo wasn't having it.

"Don't play dumb with me. I never knew you were so stupid. I'm just warning you, stay away from the maiden," I spat out.

"Look, I think you're the one who needs to stay away from the maiden. Knowing you, you'll only hurt her. See, her one night with you already caused her to get a high fever; she doesn't need a broken heart on top of that," Kyungsoo said with much distaste.

My anger started to boil hot again. "Knowing me?!" I laughed. "You knoow nothing, Kyungsoo! You don't know a thing about me!" I yelled with tears welled up at the corners of my eyes. "Do you know how it feels to be a failure?! No, of course you don't because you've always been the model prince. Ever since we were young, I've always been in your shadow with people constantly comparing us." Kyungsoo was stunned to silence with his eyes slightly bulging out.

"It was always you. It had always been you. You got all the praise, fortune, and love; w

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Faedra
#1
I like the adaptation although it isn't entirely an adaptation, I love it. I read this a long time ago. And stopped at some point, never getting to finish. I hope to finish reading this very soon! I especially like the way you included their songs into your story.
Squishysoo_12
#2
Chapter 39: Im late but this is beautiful
Sonja_Nguyen #3
Gonna read this ^^
bteasuga
#4
Chapter 4: luhan?where is prince Luhan?
AeSunset
#5
Chapter 39: Oh my,I love it!!! Thank you so much for writing it..its amazing,wonderful and asdfghjkl..good job and keep it up!!!
SNSD1203 #6
Chapter 36: OMG! I almost cried when she died!..Felt as if one member in exo had to write this chapter it would DEFINITELY be Chen!..you're so cruel
sukasuka #7
Chapter 19: what is an eskimo kiss? :3 enjoy reading it so far but I feel bad for Luhan.... I hope she gets her voice back soon!
CatarinaDKS13
#8
Chapter 39: Oh . My . Dear . Lord .
You don't even imagine how much I love this story . I read it in one go and seriously , I regret nothing .
to be honest , I almost cried when Ariel "died" . Damn . I thought she was gone for good and I was so , but so sad .
and also , this fic has Kyungsoo as the male lead and . Just . he's my ultimate , ULTIMATE bias . I just love this .
I love you , chinja , forever .
this story is just beautiful . and that happy ending , OH GOD OH GOD TT-TT I CANNOT HOLD THE FEELS ANYMORE I CANNOT- *drowns in feels*
you guys , I sarang you *sobs* TT-TT
imanina #9
Chapter 10: Awwww luhan :--(
Jazzilollies #10
I L.O.V.E THIS BOOK! YOU SHOULD SERIOUSLY MAKE A MOVIE OR SOMETHING... only if you could... BUT ANYWAYS I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS BOOK!