Teaser Trial

EXONE: The Minor Forces-The Oracle of Fear

So this may sound like a stupid question...but...

Do you guys like teasers?

Just wondering since I'm kinda waiting for my lovely beta/close friend to finish having a look at it (we're all busy people being students and all ya know) but maybe you could see some parts that hopefully won't be changed and give you a feel...

And tell me if you guys would want me to continue giving you teasers once you finish reading, okay? ^_^

 But honestly guys, this chapter that hopefully will be up soon took me the LONGEST time to write. Seriously, I probably have 12 sheets of notebook paper crossed out because I kept writing and rewriting and asking my friends for help, blah blah blah...

I'm still debating that after that chapter, if Tao should appear. Although technically it wouldn't make sense with the context. -battle inside head continues-

BUT ANYWAY LET'S GET TO THE SNIPPETS!

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“Sorry Ma, yesterday was just really overwhelming, so I went to sleep early.” I stifled back a yawn.

...

 

He nodded, his face lighting up a little. “I’ll guess I’ll take a walk while I wait.” And before I could say anything, he was already out the door.

...

 

I looked up from the shelf of pastels I had been examining, startled by the voice as I had gotten myself immersed into all the different choices. A girl about the similar height looked at me with friendly eyes. She gasped. “You’re the girl who got Tao as a tour guide!”

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And that's all I'm going to put out right now because my grammar , most passages are awkward, and the rest don't give as much away as those three parts.

And also you guys deserve the best, that's why I'm lettling people look at what I write before I give it to you all ^_^

SORRY! DON'T KILL ME! PLEASE WAIT FOR ME! orz

ACTUALLY on second thought if you don't like my meticulous perfectionist writing process...

Sorry I just find these macros WAY TOO FASCINATING. Maybe they'll hold off your screams of update for a little while XD

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teentopbapshineefx #1
Chapter 50: Im the oracle of fear !! That 's such a badass name !!!!!
Star16
#2
Chapter 33: I
loveshineenexo
#3
Chapter 19: I got kinda freaked out at the photo on top, I was like holy is that another of teletubbie's sun? O U O
imaloveofnuest
#4
Chapter 61: S-E-Q-U-E-L !! Fighting !! ;)
Moony_Kat
#5
Chapter 60: *giggles* That was sooo nice of him!
>.< I wish there was a person like him in my life too! :)
Hope there'll be a sequel :P
Moony_Kat
#6
Chapter 59: *.* I didn't expect Tao to be so selfless. That's a good thing I guess. It made me stop seeing him like a self-centered bastard, excuse the language :D
Sequel! Yay!
And no need to thank me, seriously. It was a nice story to read :) Even though it didn't feature my bias in EXO :P
Moony_Kat
#7
Chapter 58: SO IT WAS THE DRAMA! *sighs* You had me scared here for a second :P
Moony_Kat
#8
Chapter 57: O.O WHAT?!
I do hope he's filming a MV or else I SWEAR I'LL BREAK EVERY SINGLE BONE FROM HIS FREAKIN' BODY!!!! >.<"
Moony_Kat
#9
Chapter 56: How ironic! She was sooo into Super Junior when EXO was right under her nose! :)
Moony_Kat
#10
Chapter 55: Really nice update! It made me wonder about Kalyn's plans :) And about the new EXONE member as well :d Is it a guy? A girl? Hehehhee...
I'm sorry to hear about your laptop. RIP! :(