Teaser Trial
EXONE: The Minor Forces-The Oracle of FearSo this may sound like a stupid question...but...
Do you guys like teasers?
Just wondering since I'm kinda waiting for my lovely beta/close friend to finish having a look at it (we're all busy people being students and all ya know) but maybe you could see some parts that hopefully won't be changed and give you a feel...
And tell me if you guys would want me to continue giving you teasers once you finish reading, okay? ^_^
But honestly guys, this chapter that hopefully will be up soon took me the LONGEST time to write. Seriously, I probably have 12 sheets of notebook paper crossed out because I kept writing and rewriting and asking my friends for help, blah blah blah...
I'm still debating that after that chapter, if Tao should appear. Although technically it wouldn't make sense with the context. -battle inside head continues-
BUT ANYWAY LET'S GET TO THE SNIPPETS!
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“Sorry Ma, yesterday was just really overwhelming, so I went to sleep early.” I stifled back a yawn.
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He nodded, his face lighting up a little. “I’ll guess I’ll take a walk while I wait.” And before I could say anything, he was already out the door.
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I looked up from the shelf of pastels I had been examining, startled by the voice as I had gotten myself immersed into all the different choices. A girl about the similar height looked at me with friendly eyes. She gasped. “You’re the girl who got Tao as a tour guide!”
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And that's all I'm going to put out right now because my grammar , most passages are awkward, and the rest don't give as much away as those three parts.
And also you guys deserve the best, that's why I'm lettling people look at what I write before I give it to you all ^_^
SORRY! DON'T KILL ME! PLEASE WAIT FOR ME! orz
ACTUALLY on second thought if you don't like my meticulous perfectionist writing process...
Sorry I just find these macros WAY TOO FASCINATING. Maybe they'll hold off your screams of update for a little while XD
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