THE TEASERS

MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

"I'm not supposed to love him ~"

 

"This is all your fault! You are the cause of

the loss of Jie Eun!"

 

"I think I've seen you ~"

 

"Sir~ There is a gift for you ...."

 

"Actually you were where? I really miss you ...."

 

"I think if makes you die slowly more pleasant

in comparison makes you instantly die ~"

 

 

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Littlemrsmalfoy #1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129 #3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake #4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14 #6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie #7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129 #10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.
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