THE TEASERS

MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

Slowly my eyes open when a glimmer of light pierced my eyes ...

And when I opened my eyes, I saw a strange room is so dark and only

illuminated by a beam of light coming in through small cracks in the window

on the cover by a curtain ....

 

That person smirked at me ....

It makes me feel terrified at the sight.

Because that person holds a knife in hand.

Is my life going to end like this?

 

 

"She's not in your house? So where is she?

Did she really has decided to run away from me, Sulli?

She must have really hated me.

Whether i shouldn't look for her again?

Maybe that's what she wanted.

Living in peace without interference from me."

 

I saw the most beautiful angel

standing in front of me.

With a beautiful smile.

Beautiful eyes, sharp nose,

a little pink lips,

as if it were printed in an

angel-like face.
Like I'm flying and do
not feel the power

of gravity when I look at that angel?
What kind of this feeling?

 

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SO..... HOW WAS IT, GUYS???

KEKEKE~~~~

 

THANK'S FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS GUYS....

IT'S REALLY MEANS A LOT TO ME laugh

AND... YEAY....

WELCOME TO MY STORY MY NEW SUBSCRIBERS AND MY NEW READERS....

I HOPE U'LL LIKE MY STORY  smiley

 

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Littlemrsmalfoy
#1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129
#3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14
#6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie
#7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129
#10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.