MY ANOTHER STORIES :)

MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

OKAY.... SO MOST ALL OF U DIDN'T EXPECTED IF JOON Her TWIN BROTHER, HUH???

KEKE^^

THANK'S FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS GUYS....

I'LL UPDATED AS SOON AS I CAN.....

AND STILL LEAVE A COMMENTS GUYS....

IT'S REALLY MEANS A LOT TO ME :)

AND.......

 

HEI.... I KNOW THIS TORY HASN'T FINISHED...

BUT....

I HAVE A LOT OF IDEAS IN MY HEAD AND I WAS FEAR IF I DIDN'T WRITE THAT SOON,

I'LL FORGET IT....

KEKE^^

I JUST WRITE A NEW STORIES...

AND THERE IS KEY AS A MAIN CHARACTER (I MISS HIM SO BAD IN MY STORY AND FEEL GUILTY SINCE I JUST PUT HIM A LITTLE IN MY STORY)

THE STORIES:

he is the man who I and my twin brother loves

AND HERE IS THE LINK:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/19964/he-is-the-man-who-i-and-my-twin-brother-loves-chansung-jonghyun-key-onew-romance-shinee



AND THE SECOND STORIES ( IT'S STORY, SO IF U DON'T LIKE IT, JUST DON'T READ)

Key, Would you be a mother of my son?

AND HERE IS THE LINK:

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/19966/key-would-you-be-a-mother-of-my-son-key

 

 

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IF U DON'T MIND, PLEASE CHECK THEM OUT....

AND COMMENTING AND SUBSCRIBING IF U LIKE THEM :)

 

AND TOLD ME IF THEY'RE NOT GOOD.... IF U THINK THEY'RE NOT GOOD AND THE PLOT IS REALLY WEIRD, JUST TOLD ME AND MAYBE... I'LL DELETED THEM? sad

BUT.... NO BASHING PLEASE....  smiley


 

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Littlemrsmalfoy
#1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129
#3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14
#6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie
#7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129
#10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.