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MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

*ONEW POV*

 

"Jinki-ah, I know now you must be very angry and  hated me.

But it all i do for the good of both of you."

After all that Appa explained to me.

About why did he approve of my relationship with Jie Eun,

and about which he kept secret for decades,

I can only dumbfounded and could not speak anymore.

I   sat up with a limp on a stool next to Appa.  

Why? Why did he have to hide this problem from me and Jie Eun?

Why?! I do not know now I should hating Appa or thank him.

I do not know. this was too sudden for me.

I was sobbing, making he  realize that I was crying.


"Jinki-ah, are you crying? Mianhe.

Appa knew that i has been doing very wrong to you. 

But that Appa do~"

Appa hugged me and patted my back gently.


"But why did you never  tell this to us, Appa? Wae?"

I still continued to cry and covered my face with my palms.

"Mi-mianhe,  Jinki-ah. but,

most important now is not a question about why I just tell you this secret,

the most important thing now you have to pick up Jie Eun from your umma.  Palli ...."

Appa  attracted my palms which  covering

my face and finally make my face look at him.

I see appa's face who feel guilty to  me.


"B-but .... Have you been telling this to Jie Eun, Appa?"

I asked, wiping away my tears.


"Not yet. And, please do not let this secret  to Jie Eun. 

It's not a right time  for her to know about this secret."

Appa said.

I feel the sadness in his eyes.

It must be very hard for him to keep a big secret like this.


"But why, Appa? Should not it be better if we told all to Jie Eun now?"


"I know. But I think this is not the right time.

You just follow  my plan.  

I'm sure Jie Eun will not be angry if we tell her later."


"But, Appa ...." I stood up and approached him.

"Just follow my plan.

Now that you have to do is act as though nothing had happened.

Call her and About  your mother, I can take care of her."

Appa said and pushed my back.

I took my cell phone hesitantly and looked at Appa. He nodded his head,

encouraging to call Jie Eun.


I pressed the button on my phone and call her.


"Yeobboseyo. Oppa, where are you?"

I heard Jie Eun’s voice.


"Jie-jie Eun, do not cut my words and just answer  yes or no, arraseo?"


"But Wae, op-"

She wanted to talk to me but I cut her words.


"yahh ~ just answer yes or no. Is now umma to be beside you?"


"Y-yes." I could hear a confusion of her voices.


"Okay, now let you get away from her first."


"B-but, what's wrong?" She asked me


"Aish ~ just  said yes, or no. Was now  you're far enough  from  umma?"


"Yes."


"Okay, look, now you fast forward the fish market where I parked my car."


"but ~ Why should I get there, oppa?"

She asked.


"Do you not want to go out with your boyfriend?"


"Bwoh?! But how with~" She yelled, surprised.


"Aish silly girl. Just answer  yes or no.  Are  you still want us out today?"


"Y-yes." From her  voice, I'm sure now  she was blushed.

"That is great. Now fast toward me. And about umma, Appa would take care of it. Palli ...."

I immediately shut my phone.


Plakk ~ Appa hitting my head.


"Ouch ~ For what it is, Appa?"

I said as I rubbed my head.


"What a stupid boy! How can you talk like that to your girlfriend?

Even you do not say love to Jie Eun?!

How can you keep her  with you if you're not do something romantic  with her?"

Appa said, shook his head.

 

*END OF ONEW POV*

 

(a/n: Okay, we leave for a minute Onew and Jie Eun. Hmm ~ whether you're curious Sulli actually have a boyfriend or not? this little  Sulli's moment.)

*NARATOR POV*

 

Today is like the days are usually,

Sulli spend time with her shooting in the studio photos.

She was sitting, looking at her phone’s screen. Hoping for Taemin call her.

"Why Taemin oppa has not called me?" She said mumble.


"Heyy, what’s wrong? Why did your face look so sad?"

Said Amber, her photographer.


"Hmm ~ You know the guy that I told you, right?

Until now he has not called me.

at leas he  called me to ask why I did not come to the opening of his Chicken Store.

 But, until now I have not received a call from him."

Sulli said  with sad face.

  is already three years past she has special feelings to Taemin.

While in high school when she was only considered Taemin as friends,

 but over time those feelings turned into love.

because Taemin too shy, then Sulli was never able to express her feeling for Taemin.


"hahahaha ~"

Amber, a tomboyish girl who had been to just listening,

now burst out laughing, clutching her stomach.

"yahh ~ Amber! What's funny?"

Sulli said was puzzled by the behavior of her  photographer.


"Haha ~ You know, you both are equally stupid!"

Amber still has not stopped laughing.


"What do you mean? I do not understand."

Sulli said and scratched her head.


"You know when you go to the toilet and leave your cell phone?

Not long after, Taemin call you.

Then I picked it up and pretend if I was you.

And, you know, he believed! Hahaha ~"

said Amber was laughing so hard .


"Bwoh?! But why did not you tell me if he called me?

And, what did you tell him?"

Sulli said.
"I told him if you can not come because you want to eat with your boyfriend." Amber said with a calm and stop the laughter.
"Bwoh?! yahh ~ Amber! Why do you say I eat with my boyfriend?! I mean ~ Why are you pretending to be me and ~ Aish, What should I do now?"

Sulli started to panic.
"Therefore I say that you two are stupid.

You see, according to your story,

Taemin is silly guy who does not know how to approach girl, right?

Therefore, we must first make him jealous so he expressed his feelings to you."

Amber said.

"B-but ... Do you think it will work?" Asked Sulli,

hesitating with a plan that would set up by Amber.
"this girl! just follow my plan.  where the address of his chicken store?"

Asked Amber.
"For what?" Sulli asked.
"I think we can run a plan to make him jealous today."

Amber said, with a mysterious smile,

 

*END OF NARATOR POV*

 

(a/n: Back to Onew and Jie Eun)

 

 

*YOUR POV*

 

 

After Onew oppa hung up, I quickly ran to the front of the market.

But why his voice is very weird? Onew oppa voice slightly hoarse. As had been crying.

I kept running and eventually I got to the front of the market.

I direct my gaze around the market, trying to search of 

figure Onew oppa among a crowd of people in the market.

When I was looking for Onew oppa, I felt someone hug me from beside.

Bukk~

I  elbowed That erted.


"Ouch ~" I heard him screaming in pain and fell to the ground.

When I turned my head,

*gasp *


"Op-oppa~ Mianhe ... I think you are ..."

 I quickly helped him up and rubbed his  waist that I just elbow,

trying to stop the pain.


"Aish ~ Must you elbowed your boyfriend, Jie Eun?"

 Onew oppa still screaming in pain.


"Mi-mianhe oppa. What should I do to stop the pain?"

 I said, began to worry him.

Do I nudged too hard?


"Hug me." Said Onew oppa and approached me,

opening wide his arms, getting ready for a hug.

I retreated to the back, away from him.


"Yahh~are you trying to deny me now?" Said Onew oppa with his childish face.

"But, i smells like a fish, oppa." I said to him.

"No, you're not. You smells like strawberry. And i love it..." Said him and hugs me back.

Makes me blushing.

As I let go of his arms, I saw his eyes swollen, as had been crying.
"Oppa, why do with your eyes? Have you been crying?" I said and gently touched his cheek.
"An-anio. I just lack of sleep last night." He said.
"But ~" Before I finish my words, he took my hand.
"Aish ... Let's get out of here quick before umma find us." Onew oppa said and took me into his car. Actually what happened to him? Why he was acting weird?

 

*END OF YOUR POV*

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Littlemrsmalfoy
#1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129
#3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14
#6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie
#7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129
#10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.