FIRST DATE- PART 2

MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

*YOUR POV*

 

"Hmm ~ do ~" Onew oppa’s words was interrupted

 when the waitress who had been serving us

came with a tray containing appetizers.

He then put the plate containing the insalata Caprese and  Bruschetta

on the table and said to us  enjoy the dishes to us politely.

We then eat the appetizers.
"Oh yeah, oppa, what do you want to talk about?"

I askedto Onew oppa when considering that he had wanted to speak to me.

 I then bite and chew my  Bruschetta.

"Hmm ~ Well, we talked about that later. I'm sure you're very hungry now."

He said trying not to look at my eyes.

"Oppa, what's actually there with you today?

You're acting very sweird. D-did  I do something wrong?

Or, if my body is really the smell of fish? Aish~

I told you that we should go back to the house, then showered and ~"

"Aish ~ How many times have I told you,

your body did not smell of fish. And really Jie Eun,

nothing happens. Never mind saying, eat it."

Said  Onew oppa then continued eating.

 

We really enjoyed our dinner together.

After we finish eating appetizers, we went to eat soup on serve.

Onew oppa eat fonduta soup, while I was eating the minestrone soup.

Then after we spend our soup, A food which us ordered came.

Well, these foods at this restaurant is really delicious.

 I want came back to this restaurant later with Onew oppa.

What's more scenery here is very beautiful.

We closed our dinner by eating our dessert, tiramisu cakes.


"Come on, we went to the terrace."

Onew oppa said when we were out of the N Grill restaurant.


"To the terrace? For what, oppa?" I asked did not understand.
"Aish ~ pabo. Certainly for the padlock hung on the porch,"

Onew oppa said while knock my head smoothly.

 

"O ~ oh ...." That's all I can say because I was too embarrassed when

I realized what we will do on the terrace.

Well, hang two padlocks on the terrace of  Namsan tower it has

become a habit of two lovers who come to Namsan tower.

They believe if they hung the padlock, so that their love will last forever.

 Actually I find it quite strange activity,

because actually what to do with love is eternal and two padlocks?

And again, padlock, padlock it will damage the scenery there.

But after-thought I was poor again, actually it's not bad habits as well

and quite unique to be done.

What's more, hundreds of padlocks,

 padlock attached to it will become one of the characteristic views

of Namsan tower, right?

 

Finally we reached the porch and hung the two padlocks.
"Oppa, how can you bring a lock, this lock?"

I asked at Onew oppa as we stood in front of an analog

observation balcony window, staring at the night scenery of Seoul.

 Onew oppa and stood behind me, and without me knowing it,

he threw his arms, hugging me from behind, and locked me in

my stomach with his arms. He then placed his chin on my shoulder,

makes our cheeks touching. I felt my stomach sank

and I felt butterflies had been still half awake,

 now fully awake and dancing in my stomach.
"My  plan, after we go skiing in the mountains,

I really want to take you here, darling"

Onew oppa half-whispered words to me.

But his voice was more like a soft melodic song in my ear,

made me want to hear it again, again and again.

"Op ~ oppa, then other people can see us."

I said, trying to free me to Onew oppa,s hugs,

though actually I do not want.
"I do not care. I really miss you, Jie Eun. " Onew oppa said,

 again, whispering in my ear. Make my ears feel warm Onew oppa’s breath.
"How can you miss me if we have this day together?" I said, giggling.

 

"yahh ~ although this day we are together,

 but I can not at all close together and could not speak

a word with you, Jie Eun. Umma always bothering us."

Onew oppa said, with his childhish face and his spoiled voice, like a child.

Makes me eager to pinch his cheeks.

"Aigoo ~ I really make my boyfriend crazy about me, huh?"

 I said, wiping his cheek with the palm of my hand gently

and slightly turned towards my face, make our faces is very close.

 When I realized our eyes at each other,

I immediately turned the other way,

trying not tostare into his eyes. I feel my heart beating fast.

I feel one of Onew oppa’s hand remove his arms which hugs me,

pulled my chin, while his other hand still held me from behind.

He gently pulled my chin, making my face is now back with his face,

 a distance very close. Slowly he looked up at me advance.

Makes me difficult to breathe and make my butterflies dancing

with a faster rhythm. Then he closed his eyes as

our lips very close distances.

And, finally my lips met his lips. Feeling his soft lips touched

my lips again. He kissed me very gently.

Giving tingly sensation through my body.

I then closed my eyes as Onew oppa’s hand  

which had been touching my shoulder,

now move to the back of my neck, enjoying our kiss.

 

I then put my left arm on the Onew oppa‘s left arm

which encircling my body from behind,

and put my right arm on Onew oppa’s cheek.

Interesting face closer to me. After God knows how long we kissed,

Onew oppa finally pulled his lips away from mine,

which is actually still not want to end our kiss, to take a breath.

He then smiled sweetly at me and kissed my forehead gently.

"I think I’m the one who make you going crazy."

Onew oppa said, mocking me.
"Y ~ yahh ~" I then nudged him.
"Ouch ~ yahh, Jie Eun, are you really happy to torture me?"

he said as he screamed in pain and rubbing his waist.
"Ah ~ Mianhe oppa." I said.
"Mianhe? Is that just who can you tell me? "

said Onew oppa while giving his childish expression again.
"Huh, what do you mean?" I asked still do not understand.

 

"You do not say this day those words to me."

he said, folding his arms.
"The words? What words do you mean?"

I asked did not understand.
"Saranghae, Onew oppa! You have not said that to me today."

He said, still folded his arms.
"Saranghae oppa ~ " I said, blushing.
"No-No-no-no that way." Onew oppa said,

 shaking his finger and shook his head.
"Then, how do you mean, huh?"

I said with a giggled saw his childishness.

He then advanced close to me, and bowed his head.

 He then brought his face back into my face,

and he landed his lips right on my lips. Make we kissed again.

But this time is shorter. He then pulled his face, and cupped my face.
"Saranghae ~ That's the way I want."

He said without releasing his hands on my face.
“Y~yahh ~" I was trying to ward off his hands,

but failed. I closed my eyes,

trying not to stare into his eyes in shame.

 

“Aish ~ Palli. If you do not want to do it, I'll ~ "
"Aish ~ Arraseo ...." I then let go of his hand and tiptoe,

 to match our high. With hesitation I promote my face,

 approached him. Slowly, I approached my lips to him.

And hesitantly landed on his lips. I quickly pulled my face,

and turned away without time to allow him to close his eyes.
"Saranghae, oppa ~ Let's go home. It was late at night."

I said and walked away. I felt my cheeks heat up with embarrassment.
"yahh ~ it's too fast." Onew oppa said, half run, to match pace.
I ignored him and kept walking toward the elevator.

 

 

*END OF YOUR POV*

 

 

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KYAA~ ANOTHER CHAPTER FOR YOU GUYS...

I'M SO SORRY IF THIS CHAPTER A LITTLE BIT BORED.

I'LL TRY MY BEST TO MAKE ANOTHER MORE INTERESTING GUYS....

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IF U DON'T MIND, PLEASE CHECK OUT THIS STORY:

 

My Fans , My Lover , My Enemy , My Wife.

 

ME, AS A CO-AUTHOR IN THIS STORY,

AND MY FRIEND, KpopAllFanFic

AS AUTHOR IN THERE.

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Littlemrsmalfoy
#1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129
#3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14
#6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie
#7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129
#10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.