My life as tangled yarn

MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

 

 

*YOUR’S POV*

 

 

"What? But if you do love him, why did you even run

away like this? Would not be good if it turns out you're

not siblings? That means your relationship is not banned

and you can get married, right? "

This is where I am now; at Sulli’s house. After Onew oppa

away from the hotel room, I decided to leave him. I know

I was stupid for being a coward like this. But I also can not deny

if I can not accept all of this reality. I'm confused ....

Would I be mad because they all have lie to me? Do I have to

hate my father because he had my mother? Would I

 be sad to know that the father and mother that I love is not

my own parent? Or, if I should feel happy because it turned

out I was not a sibling with Onew oppa? And that means we

still be together. I was really dizzy with all this just happened.

It was a problem that I face now is really like a ball of tangled

threads that are difficult to unravel and separate.

Make my head feel like going to explode.

And also, it means the guy I was dating that I think

the fact my older brother was the son of my mother's

best friend. Parents who have raised me from childhood

was my mother's best friend. And, Jessica, my friend,

it is my cousin. And more scary; my ex-boyfriend,

 Joon, who has always acted rude to me,

actually he is my twin brother.

I'm really going crazy with all this! I want to scream! S

houted the top of my voice! But I can not. It feels like there is

 a big rock that jammed my throat so I can not speak. What

can I do now was cry, cry, and cry. Crying in the arms of my

best friend, Sulli. When I want to find a taxi, I met with Sulli.

She saw I very messy and my cheeks in tears. That is why she

invited me to her house. At Sulli’s house, my tears burst.

I sobbed uncontrollably. Telling all the things that have happened

to me. Starting from I courted Onew oppa, and who is the real

my parents. At first she was very surprised to hear my story,

but soon, she could accept it.

"Jie Eun, I know for sure at this time your feelings very raging incoherently.

 I understand that. But you should not be selfish like this. You must take

the positive side of everything. You ~ "

"Enough, Sulli! Enough! I'm very troubled at this time.

I … I…  "I closed both my ears with my hands. And sob

tears came faster this time. I do not need advice or anything

that can make me grow confused or sad. All I need now

is just to cry and my best friend’s hug for comfort me.

"Shh ... Mianhe, Jie Eun-ah .... Mianhe." Sulli hugged me

tightly and my hair. I'm drowning my face in her shoulder. Crying uncontrollably.

"I ~ My heart is very sick, Sulli. Like a spear that pierced my heart so I find

it difficult to breathe. I ~ I'm very difficult to breathe. "

"Shh ~ I understand your feelings, Jie Eun. Just Cry if it makes

you calm and relieved. But after that, you have to promise me

you'll eat and rest. You must be very tired. "

 

 

* END OF YOUR'S POV *

 

 

 

 

* Narrator's POV *

 

 

Onew sat limply on the couch in the lobby of the hotel. He buried his face

in Minho’s chest; cry.

"It's all my fault, Minho! It's all my fault! If only I did not keep my promise

to my father and tell the secret to Jie Eun early, I'm sure she would not upset this to us.          

To me. I feel I'm useless! Now, I'd lose her. I could not find ~ "

"No, hyung. It’s not your fault. Do not keep blaming yourself like this. And the problem of Jie Eun, I'll help to find her." Minho patting

Onew’s shoulder. Trying to calm his hyung who is now

desperately needed him. Require his presence.

"No, Minho. Tomorrow is your wedding day with Krystal. I do not

want you because of this issue, you do not even focus your

attention to your wedding. You'd better go home now."

Onew pulled his head. Moving away fromMinho’s chest, where

he was crying. Minho’s clothes is now wet with Onew’s tears.

Tears of sadness that had been flowing with rapids. He hated

himself who became very whiny today. He wanted to be a

tough guy who could not cry. But when it comes to Jie Eun,

the only woman he loves in this world and he loved with all of

his heart and all his life, his heart weakened.

He could not control himself.

"But hyung ~"

"Oppa, Sulli just called me. She told me if Jie Eun tonight

will stay at her house." Krystal, who had been receiving calls

from Sulli, approached her future husband, wiping tears from

her eyes. Krystal had been cried. Did not think anything like

this would happen to her friend.

"Jinjja?! She's okay, right?! She, whether she's eating? Is she ~"

Onew got up from his seat and stood near Krystal. At least

he already knows that Jie Eun was in a safe place.

“Ne, oppa. She's fine. Indeed Sulli had told me that Jie Eun

continued to cry. But now she is soundly asleep. You do not

need to worry, oppa." Krystal said, trying to calm Onew.

"Okay, hyung. Better now you go home. You should rest."

Onew nodded weakly. Well, at least now he has know where

Jie Eun located.

Tomorrow, in the Minho and Krystal’s wedding, he would try to talk again with

Jie Eun. He only hopes that if tomorrow there is a miracle so that

Jie Eun would forgive him.

 

 

 

* END OF Narrator's POV *

 

HEI GUYS.... I'M SORRY FOR LATE UPDATED.... I'M SO BUSSY WITH MY EXAM. THAT'S WHY I CAN'T UPDATED EARLIER.... MIANHE.

I HOPE U'LL LIKE THIS CHAPTER. AND, I THINK TODAY I'LL UPDATED SOME MORE CHAPTER. SO, PLEASE STAY TUNE. KEKE~ THANK'S 4 ALL YOUR COMMENTS GUYS.. STILL LEAVE A COMMENT. AND, NEW READERS AND NEW SUBSCRIBER, I HOPE U'LL LIKE MY STORY :)

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Littlemrsmalfoy
#1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129
#3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14
#6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie
#7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129
#10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.